In the third grade, I transferred from Fengdong Primary School. Miss Liu is my Chinese teacher. I remember that every time I wrote a better sentence in my composition, she would draw it with wavy lines and write "great" and other comments next to it. I remember I have an article called "A Journey to Wuhan". Her evaluation is: "Teacher Liu is very happy to see your trip to Wuhan, just like I went there. It's written in detail. Especially from the article, we can see that you are good at observation and imagination, which is the key to writing a good composition. Hu Shuai, that's great. Let me see that every composition of yours is a masterpiece, ok? " After reading it, I was elated and thought, Great, Teacher Liu likes my composition. I will be careful in every composition in the future and write better than this one! From then on, every time I write an article, I must think carefully and try my best to write a "masterpiece" that Teacher Liu expects.
Also, my handwriting has always been poor, and Teacher Liu commented on my homework. Last semester, my last comment said, "Shuai Shuai, your handwriting really doesn't match your appearance!"
I feel ashamed after reading it. I made up my mind to write the words well. This summer vacation, I specially participated in the hard pen calligraphy class. Through practice, my calligraphy has advanced by leaps and bounds. On the second assignment, Mr. Liu not only gave me an "A+ good" but also gave me a "pleasing to the eye" comment.
The teacher's comments made my composition great, and the teacher's comments encouraged my calligraphy to become beautiful. All this is not only my efforts, but also thanks to the teacher's comments.