First, different styles.
In recent years, more than 60% of college entrance examination compositions are topic compositions, which provide students with a broad writing space. As long as you can control the topic, the style of writing can make your article follow the highlights. Therefore, the composition style of the senior high school entrance examination is widely used, from fable to fairy tale; From comments to debate drafts; From experimental report to guidance; From diaries to letters; From prose to novels, these different styles alone have brought strong visual impact to teachers.
Second, the structure is novel.
Women all over the world don't like being big guys just because they are so stupid and look clumsy. In fact, isn't the composition the same? If you leave it there for a period of time, it will inevitably make people visually tired. What shall we do to see how the following perfect compositions are innovative in style.
(A) the use of inscriptions
Start with an inscription, or explain the reasons for writing; Or traction content; Or reveal the purpose of the text, its language is often refined and philosophical. It is pleasing to see through its bright spot and touch its emotional pulse.
(B) the clever use of subtitles
Using subheadings well will make the writing look pleasing to the eye, relaxed and clear.
(3) Plate combination
I want to sing a song, the perfect composition created by Xiamen, Fujian Province, which is divided into three parts: aria, nocturne and March. Three paintings vividly depict the charming scenery of Xiamen, and there is an irresistible admiration and affection everywhere. Fujian examinee's beautiful life uses three monologues of "starry sky, beautiful", "fallen leaves, beautiful" and "sunset, beautiful" to make us feel the beauty that is actually around us. The combination of plates can be (1), (2) and (3); It can also be subtitles; It can be the title of the diary; It can also be a scene of a script.
Third, the embellishment of famous sentences
Adding literary grace with classic poems and some familiar prose sentences has become the choice of polishing the language of the perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination, making it a new bright spot. Some make inscriptions; Some composition eyes; Some simply use a poem to run through the whole text. "You are full of poetic ideas and pretentious", and you walk calmly and skillfully interspersed with poems, which not only shows your "talent", but also makes your article literary and ideological.
There is such a passage in the perfect composition "God's Gift" in Lishui, Zhejiang Province: "After I went to primary school, I came into contact with Tang poetry and Song poetry. Read more and learn to appreciate the artistic conception of poetry. I will cry in Tancheng, because' but before he conquered, he was dead, and the heroes cried on their coats'; It will also sigh deeply because of the sadness of life,' I know, I know, it should be green, fat, red and thin'; Of course, I will also be fascinated by the life realm of' suddenly looking back, but that person is in the dim light'. " I believe that the composition itself has stood at the starting point of high marks by quoting classics like this.
Fourth, the fashion of material selection.
Writing in the examination room, the most taboo is thousands of people, the front is still a little fresh, the back will really be "aesthetic fatigue", not to mention those old themes close to "60 years old." Therefore, in the selection of materials, we should also keep pace with the times, seek gold in the sand, introduce the living water of the times, and integrate some elements with the characteristics of the times into the theme.
I love the scenery here in Leshan, Sichuan, and skillfully choose QQ chat room, super girl PK station and post-80 s book fair to interpret the scenery. Zibo's essay "The Sunset" is three characters selected from "China was moved in 2005".
Anhui examinee's perfect composition "One Net" uses a lot of "net words" to describe the impact brought by the network, including applause, curses and many others, but the network still grows as usual. If you haven't found the novel writing material, you can refer to the "Composition Award", which contains a lot of historical and geographical knowledge as the material.
Fifth, the concept is unique.
"An article through the ages is a text", which is the commander-in-chief of composition. Don't let your composition always drill into the "mass track" where the exam questions have been laid. The most taboo of the article is to pick up people's teeth, follow in the footsteps of others, and pick up some old sesame seeds to chew, which is boring. If you go against people's habitual thinking or existing psychological stereotypes, "bounce back", try to avoid stereotypes and find another way, you can often win by surprise and make people feel refreshed.
When you face a pool of green lotus, you can praise her for "emerging from the mud without dyeing", or you can silently raise the mud that nourishes the lotus; Before praising the morning glory for its endless growth and continuous progress, don't forget that it has to climb against the wall; The bleak autumn may disappoint you, but it is the price of fruitful results! As the saying goes, "there must be a road in front of the mountain, and there must be new branches behind the mountain"! However, many students are still repeating conventional ideas and can't open their minds. I hope that students can learn from the writing ideas of foreign students in the future. There is also a comparison between Chinese and foreign compositions on the same topic in the composition book "Composition Award", which is sure to broaden their horizons.
Sixth, the text is funny.
A well-conceived composition, if it can be properly blended with some humorous words, will also brighten the teacher's slightly tired eyes, add a lot of color to your composition, and give people a good impression that "it is better to walk slowly than to get it easily". The following exquisite fragments are from this year's senior high school entrance examination.
"Life, the source of my happiness" is written by Zhenjiang, Jiangsu Province. "Eating is the most important thing in life. When I rushed to the dining room with the rice bowl I just bought in my hand after the bell rang 0 1 second, a stone on the ground didn't know whether it was because I stepped on it or because it deliberately made things difficult for me. It happened that I had to run under my feet without knowing the present situation, so I was unprepared and kissed Mother Earth. As a result, my mouth was swollen, and what was even more exasperating was that the new rice bowl I just bought died young.
In this paper, flowers are used instead of trees, and vivid words such as "kissing" and "dying young" are transferred to their own narrative, which vividly expresses the state of mind with a little regret and self-mockery after breaking the bowl at that time, making people feel fresh and humorous.
Seven, "things" point of view is the master.
The so-called angle conversion method of "things" is to use other things other than "people" as the main body of the perspective to cut into the topic, so as to find a novel expression angle. Its greatest advantage is to retreat behind the scenes and let other things go to the foreground, which is more convenient and humorous. It is refreshing to dispatch language to write what you think and write, whether it is Zhuang or harmonic, or derogatory or praise.
The composition of Nanjing Volume is "actually very simple". A candidate conceived this way: a fictional domestic cat describes the whole process of his family's owner rising from an ordinary clerk to a "director" step by step. Almost "factual record" describes how its owner first made a lot of money to open the way, and how he accepted a large number of bribes after being promoted to the director. There are piles of high-end cigarettes and famous wines everywhere, especially. The full text is to witness the rise of the master and all kinds of ugly behaviors after becoming an official with such humorous brushstrokes. Finally, it shows that "being an official is actually very easy", although exaggerated, it is very true and reveals the theme incisively and vividly. This is the charm of empathy!
Taking "things" as the main point of view and the first person "I" as the narrative keynote, the writing intention is expressed humorously.
In short, "Spring flowers, autumn moon, winter snow and ice, don't listen to Chen Yan, just listen to the sky", which will make your composition innovative, make the marking teacher feel refreshed and make you not too tired. You can also attract teachers' attention with beautiful titles, clever rhetoric, embellishment of scenery and charm. These tricks of perfect composition are worth our candidates to practice.