It was shortly after the start of school, and we were going to write a composition "Our after-school life". After class, I intend to talk to my children about summer vacation travel, recess activities, hobbies, family life and children's channel programs ... teachers and students are happy and the children are chattering. I chat with my students and talk from the bottom of my heart. Students tell their colorful lives to their teachers, tell the truth and express their true feelings in a pleasant atmosphere, and arouse students' desire to express themselves without spitting.
But if there is no more accumulation, there will be nothing to talk about and writing ability will be out of the question. I began to quietly implement my trilogy: 1. I asked the students to recite the famous and beautiful sentences in the text and read them for half an hour every day.
2, extract good words and sentences, extract good paragraphs and a good beginning and ending, and the language is exemplary. Ask students to read more books and think more. 3. learn the model essay.
I read "Children's After-school Life", "Pupils' World" and "Children's Literature" related to the composition ... to arouse their fond memories of after-school life. With these preparations, on the day of composition class, my students and I recalled some things they experienced in class. The class is very lively, and the students have written their own composition questions on the blackboard, with various contents.
There are a series of learning skills: learning to ride a bike, learning to swim, learning to skate ... There are a series of hobbies: I like painting, karaoke, playing table tennis ... There are summer vacation travel series: climbing the Great Wall, visiting Huangshan Mountain, visiting CCTV Building ... and a playful series: flying kites. Picking up shells, fishing and boating on the beach ... "Have you ever worked?" "I have worked."
So there are more contents on the blackboard: digging sweet potatoes, picking peaches, washing tablecloths ... children's eyes are shining, their faces are red, and their hands are raised high. It seems that the more they talk, the more excited they get. The more they talk, the more they feel that they have something to say and write. My rich man said "Spring is coming", and the students replied "It's time to enjoy the flowers and visit the park", "Summer is coming", "Leaves are thick, you can catch cicadas and pick lotus leaves", "Autumn is coming", "Leaves are flying, you can pick oranges and rice" and "Winter is coming". What else do you want to write? "Different Football Match", "I Dance, I am Happy" and "Environmental Protection Team" ... The blackboard is full of words that can't express their colorful after-school life.
Even some students who feel that they have nothing to say have their eyes wide open: Oh, my God! This is my real life. Why didn't I find it? I said earnestly, "classmates, it's not that you haven't experienced it, it's that you lack a pair of eyes that will find it." If you have a heart for life, you will write everywhere! " My children are very excited, and they all feel that the composition has feelings and something to write.
I also decided to give the child a crutch. When writing this article "Our After-school Life", I chose the second paragraph of "Golden Prairie" and the second paragraph of "Climbing Tiandufeng" as model essays for the students to re-read and ponder.
The first part of the article "Golden Prairie" is its good structure: the first sentence is equivalent to the general sentence. I first explained that my brother and I were playing on the grass, then described the process of playing in detail, and the last sentence explained the feeling of playing.
Second, when describing the play process in the middle of the paragraph, some verbs are used, such as "running, pretending, shouting, blowing and hitting". Make a very ordinary little thing in life very interesting and let people see it for themselves. Students pay attention to using this structure in their own exercises and use some verbs in imitation.
For example, the article Digging Sweet Potato wrote, "My father and I started digging sweet potatoes. We brought sickles, shovels and other tools. Dad grabbed the sweet potato vine, cut it off with a long sickle and began to dig with a shovel. As my father's little helper, I was by his side, picking them up one by one.
Dad shoveled down and dug a whole big sweet potato. I shouted happily:' Ah! "What a big snake!" My father and I both laughed, and our happy laughter floated in the fields. Verbs such as "take, grab, cut, dig and pick up" are used in the process of excavation, which makes the article rich and vivid.
For example, climbing Tiandufeng in the second paragraph, the first sentence always begins, then write the height of Tiandufeng, and then write the risk of Tiandufeng and your own feelings. When the students were writing "Visiting CCTV Building", they wrote, "I stood at the foot of CCTV Building and looked up: Ah, the top of the tower is so high, above the clouds! Can I climb up? " I appreciate such parody, as long as it is not plagiarism, and encourage them to write their own characteristics step by step.
As the saying goes, "three-point articles change seven points." After writing this composition, I will let the students evaluate and correct each other first, and then choose several typical compositions for the author to read. Teachers and students will evaluate each other impromptu in class. First of all, I will set an example for students and let them know how to evaluate each other. Second, it helps students to quickly understand their own advantages and disadvantages, revise their own works in time, improve their writing level, and is also of guiding significance to other students.
Evaluation is mainly based on encouragement, even if it is only a wonderful sentence or sentence, praise it. For example, the first draft of "Environmental Protection Team" written by Mao Hang is roughly "On Sunday, my friends and I formed an environmental protection team to pick up garbage and protect the environment ... We are very happy because we made money and beautified the city."
When Mao Hang was reading, I orally corrected his sentences. Listen and think about the advantages and disadvantages of this composition. Some students said: "The topic of the composition makes people feel very good, and I also want to join this proud environmental protection team."
Some students said, "We didn't expect his content.
Every corner of the earth is full of the breath of spring.
On campus, there are beautiful Lu elephants everywhere in spring. Willow pulls out thin willow silk and embellishes it with yellowish leaves; The grass grew with the fragrance of the earth, and clusters of bright green flowers stretched themselves, yawned and leaned out their little heads; The children took off their heavy winter clothes and put on light and bright spring clothes; Birds fly out of the house and sing beautiful songs, telling us that spring is coming!
Spring has really come. In the pond, in the fields, in the sky, everywhere is full of vitality. The scenery of nature has also become colorful. On a sunny day, the warm sunshine shines on the body and the soft spring breeze blows on the face, which is both warm and comfortable; On rainy days, spring thunder explodes from time to time, which is both thrilling and * * *.
The scenery in spring is so beautiful that people's mood is even better in spring. I have been bending all winter, my back is straight, and my cheerful smile is full of hope. The park is full of excitement again. Young people who take pictures, old people who fish and children who catch insects are all intoxicated in the embrace of nature and linger on.
People are busier in spring. As the saying goes, a year's plan lies in spring. You see, in the streets of the city, busy figures shuttle back and forth, and farmers sow the seeds of hope in the fields of the countryside. On the wall of the classroom, there is a curriculum for the new semester. There are many fruits of knowledge in the new book waiting for us to collect.
I love spring. I like to smell the flowers, see the new green of the trees and listen to Xiao Wu's songs. I love spring because it is full of vitality and new hope!
I can write a composition. I have 1 article: Can I choose to start over? Scattered is childhood, leaving behind memories. -Inscription Today is my 16 birthday. Does this also mean that I am one step closer to death? In fact, I really want to choose to start over. Sherman has a novel called suantiankula. Finally, she wrote, "If I had to choose again, I would never be a girl with so many secrets. Because these secrets don't really belong to me, but I can't help but be desperate to save them. " This sentence seems to be said by Tian and a portrayal of Lin Zhi! In fact, I can also see my own shadow in them. If I choose to start over, I will never be the girl with the so-called secret now. Can I choose to start over? Give me a chance, I won't read novels in math class; Upload a note in Chinese class; Give your own novel ideas in English class; Wandering in the science class; Do homework in ideological and political class. Can I choose to do it again? Can time go back to 14 years? I must cherish every bit I get along with my grandmother. I won't make her angry. She loves me the most in the world, but I have broken her heart again and again. Can I choose to start over? Go back to primary school and live a carefree life. There seems to be a figure playing with friends in front, and the laughter when playing is faintly heard in my ear. Although it is inevitable to quarrel, the next day, we will play together again. Question: Can I choose to start over? Conclusion: No! Reason: Time is fair to everyone. Revelation: Now, the only thing I can do is to seize every day and not let myself regret it when I look back a few years later! It's up to you.
On Wednesday morning, I walked into the classroom with my schoolbag on my back. I saw several big letters written on the blackboard: "Teacher Huang checked his reading notes in the afternoon"! I was surprised: the teacher said that I would do such homework at the beginning of school. Later, we all forgot.
I quickly sat down in my seat, handed in my math homework at the speed of three homework per second, and took out my hard pen calligraphy to make up for it. The monitor shouted on the platform, "Stop writing and read early!" But we didn't seem to hear it, and we went our own way. "Teacher Wu is here!" I don't know who shouted, and the students were shocked, so they picked up the Chinese book and began to read.
Ding's morning reading class was over, and I was about to go out for a walk, but I saw that I took out my hard-pen calligraphy and reading notes and devoted myself to makeup. I asked, "How many articles should I make up?" Is it worth fighting so hard? "She said without looking up," I want to make up 16 hard pen calligraphy and reading notes, big sister! "Do you think a little time at noon is enough?" "ah! 16 articles! " Without much thought, I dug out my reading notes from my schoolbag and wrote them quickly. Today, there is only a rustling sound in the usual lively classroom, and everyone is working hard.
After school, Chen Hui and Xiaoyu said sadly, "There is only one hour at noon, and we have to do our math homework. What a dizzy spell! Yes, I have to buy a book. If I don't finish, I will be punished by the teacher. If I had written earlier, it wouldn't have ended like this. Hey! " Everyone was talking to each other along the way.
As soon as I got home, I even forgot to eat, so I ran into the study and wrote "Brush Brush". Writing and writing, my hands are numb, and the sweat on my forehead keeps flowing downwards, and my heart beats like a rabbit. I really hope I can finish it as soon as possible.
In the afternoon, the writing class began, and Mr. Wu came to class. One of our teachers, Miss Huang, gave a round of applause because she didn't come for something. Just then, Miss Huang came in, and the whole class's heart was in their throats. In front of Mr. Wu, Mr. Huang smiled like a blooming flower. But when Mr. Wu left, Mr. Huang's face was pulled down, gloomy, and our hearts were chilly. Miss Huang slowly spat out a few words: "Check your reading notes." We slowly rummaged through our schoolbags, hoping to delay a little time. Teacher Huang picked up Chen Jun's reading notes and hissed them up. The whole class was frightened and looked at each other. Look at me. I'll look at you. "All torn. Go back tonight to make up! " Miss Huang was angry and his face was livid. It took him a long time to say these words: "attitude, attitude, what attitude do you think you are?"
5. Write an article on the topic of "Walking on the Road". The scenery in front of us is constantly changing, both familiar and unfamiliar.
Only those trees, grass and flowers, no matter where they move, are still so fresh and full of vitality, but those roads, houses and houses have changed, and there is always a strange feeling. The scenery of the road is beautiful, but we still want to stop and have a place of our own. When we are tired, we can have a rest and continue to insist.
When walking on the road, because I have a place I want to go, that place is warm and familiar to me, no matter how cold it is, my heart will warm up. Back home, back to the place where I was a child, I always feel that time seems to be slowing down.
The wind is blowing slowly, sparrows are jumping around in the open space looking for food, and cats and dogs are lazily staying in front of the door. If they pass by, their fur will stand up and make a threatening sound, which is completely different from those pet dogs. That belongs to a real dog. Some teenagers came over and just smiled.
Now when a little older children have grown up. Still dressed in a foreign style, the city is developing rapidly now, and there is no difference between regions and urban and rural areas, but that impetuous feeling still exists.
A rational and profound understanding of life still needs years of polishing. I can't help thinking of you. You and I have been on the road.
Far and near, virtual and real. When I can't see you, I become rational and indifferent. I look at those young dads who are afraid of treating their children and being contained. As said, the father is sincere to the child, and the child is much less to the father.
I also saw the inconvenience and harm caused by those small and disgusting faces. The road is short, and you will always reach your destination soon, but the feeling on the road is always long.
Everyone's appearance is much more beautiful than before, but also much more indifferent. Everyone's heart is the kind of mentality of sweeping away the snow in front of their own house and not caring about first frost. This is the influence of the current unhealthy trend in society and they are afraid of disaster. At this time, I always feel that I really have unfathomable martial arts like those chivalrous women in martial arts novels, and I can help the weak, instead of just watching and not daring to do something useless.
I always like to wear MP3 on my ears, let the music flow slowly in the wind and integrate myself into the music. Or sad or helpless watching those vibrant green leaves flash by in front of my eyes, I have a lot of hopes and expectations for life, and I always hope that I can feel more when I am healthy.
I can bring joy to myself and myself, but I slowly feel unhappy and depressed, but I don't want to talk to anyone. I can only understand my inner feelings. The road is at your feet, so you can only walk slowly by yourself. The endless stream of cars keeps moving forward, and there will always be ancient chariots and horses in front of my eyes. At that time, the conditions were much worse than now, but we have accumulated so much in the past until now.
However, it seems that our hope of floating in the sky will never be satisfied and realized. It looks so clear, but it is so far away. Invisible pressure always makes me feel very tired. So only on the road, sort out your thoughts and your heart.
What life should be or will be like. As long as you work hard and put your heart into it, you will feel a different kind of heart even if you are still walking on the road.
The sky is still so high, the ground is still so wide, and the heart will widen. In the turbulent water, there are you, me and us.
6. Why are you still writing a composition? I am still intoxicated with the sad song written for Shu, "The Yangtze River is rolling eastward, and the waves are scouring the heroes. Success or failure is here." ............................................................................................................................
"I heard this powerful word again, and my mind came up with a continuous picture of the war in the Three Kingdoms period. (Comment: Quote the beginning of the lyrics and get to the point quickly. )
I remember reading the Romance of the Three Kingdoms at first, and reading that Guan Yu was defeated, captured and killed, I shed tears. Looking at the Romance of the Three Kingdoms again, I saw Zhuge Liang die in Wuzhangyuan, and I burst into tears.
Concealing my thoughts may be because I am young and affectionate, or because I am restraining Cao's emotional orientation. I can't help but be partial to Shu and deeply lament. Think about Liu, Guan and Zhang. Since Taoyuan became sworn, they have treated each other with sincerity, shared weal and woe, upheld justice, cracked down on evil, and counterattacked the Yellow Scarf ... They have struggled for most of their lives and finally established Shu State.
But the good times didn't last long, and the powerful Shu country only had two short years. Yi Guan Yu was defeated and killed, Zhang Fei was killed hastily, entrusted to orphans, failed to revive the great cause of the Han Dynasty, and left in a hurry with regret, becoming a well-known tragic hero in people's hearts.
Three brothers died one after another, which greatly weakened the strength of Shu, and finally made the dream of strengthening the army and strengthening Ma Zhuang into a bubble. Look at Zhuge Liang as the mastermind. His life is a tragedy.
The first Lord drove the crane to the west, and thousands of people in Shu followed Zhuge Liang. He doesn't know that he is a helpless monarch, and he won't know Liu's luck in the world. However, constrained by the three cardinals and the principle of the five permanent members, he can only exhaust his physical strength and be loyal to chastity as a courtier. Knowing that he could not save the situation, and knowing that he could not save the situation, he did it without hesitation.
In the model, he hopes to arouse his ambition of equating the world with his heirs, but Liu Adou, who can't afford it, sees not splendid rivers and mountains, but crowing and dancing. He shouldered all responsibilities, shouldered difficulties, racked his brains and spared no effort to embark on this road of no return.
Seven years after the Northern Expedition, we still haven't set foot in the Central Plains. Drinking horses in the Yellow River is just a dream of Conan. From three visits to the thatched cottage, burning red cliff, seven capture of Meng Huo to Sima Zhi's strategy, it will add a sigh to future generations! However, who has seen the helplessness of his wrinkled feather fan, and who has heard his lamentation overlooking Leng Yun in Shu Road? When the autumn wind in Wuzhangyuan blew off the dead leaves, he left with the regret that his grand plan was not obvious and the guilt that his ancestors met him. Wolong once returned to his hometown, and the Shushan River fell apart.
"Meeting and parting are fate. Parting and closing are always related to feelings. We are responsible for what happened during our lifetime, so why are we afraid of the judgment behind us ..." Looking at this historical land of Shu, I recalled those familiar faces, and my sad tears slipped. The wheel of history has run over the yellowed chronicle, and I still indulge in the sad song of Shu several times.
7. (Here) Writing 600 words to do what you like is a process that everyone of us yearns for. But in our life, who will walk with peace of mind and not listen to other people's statements! Animals are like this, so are people. Different people have many ideas, including unknown hometown.
Recently, I read a fable called "The Lion and the Label" in China Weekly. The story is simple: only a lion found himself labeled as a donkey and was very angry. Ask animals questions one by one, and I become more and more like a donkey.
After reading this fable, I found it ridiculous. Laugh at the king of the forest for losing his personality because of a word from others; Laugh at how fragile a person or an animal's heart will become in the face of the so-called "verbal offensive." On the surface, we are writing about animals, but in fact we are writing about ourselves.
It is true that it is impossible for anyone to adopt or deny the words of people around him completely without prejudice. The so-called "one leaf can't see Mount Tai" is precisely the reason. Blinded by words or appearances, lost by the shame of five feet. Undoubtedly, this is a manifestation of having no opinion of yourself. As the ancients said, listening is bright and favoritism is dark. This sentence is true in most respects, but we might as well think about it. If everything depends on listening to other people's opinions, how can you face it alone in the end? Besides, who can guarantee that we won't lose our sober understanding and judgment under the fog of others again and again?
So, I want to say: What's wrong with us insisting on being ourselves in some ways? Isn't it nice to go out by yourself?
Everyone must know Han Han. A post-80 s leader won the first prize of new concept composition with a poem "Peeping at Men with a Bitter Cup"; A wizard who failed the final exam seven times; A name that we all think is legendary. It is really surprising that such a seemingly incomprehensible contradiction has so many intriguing features. At that time, the light can be traced back to 1999, and Han Han was famous for arousing widespread concern for quality education in society. If he hadn't dropped out of school because he ran a red light in the exam, would he still have such achievements today? Is it because teenagers are anxious about an exam all day and spend their youth in a daze, or because the marks carved by chalk on the blackboard have worn away their unrestrained talents? I don't think all this is impossible? But fortunately, he chose another life path of his own, which decided the future he should master. Is a firm and persistent heart, guarding his unique personality and blooming the most beautiful flowers.
Now, do we really value our personality? Or is the wayward spirit lost and depressed in an ocean that does not belong to him?
Throughout the ages, Chinese and foreign people with lofty ideals, which one left its name in history with the help of others?
Sun Quan, the overlord of Jiangdong, is extremely brave. When Cao Cao marched north to the Central Plains and admired the world, he wrote a letter to Sun Quan: "There are 800,000 water conservancy troops, and Fang and others will hunt in Wu." Why didn't the ruling and opposition parties talk about it one after another, and at that time there was an uproar? But it is precisely because of the decisiveness that even Shu resisted Wei that Battle of Red Cliffs was wonderful; Only Dongpo layman's "talking and laughing, ashes."
Su Shi, the master of eight masters in Tang and Song Dynasties. Haven't you ever had a political ideal of reaching high and looking far? But it is so helpless. In that era of reciting this romantic love, it was he who cleaned up the enchanting beauty and ushered in the decadent dawn of the Song Dynasty with the heroic spirit of the great river. But people's long-cherished wish is nothing more than dancing, writing and flattering. Who would have thought that his life would hold his head high in history because of that indifferent temperament and free and easy breath! Choose to indulge in mountains and rivers, so that life can remain true and clear, smart as water, and heavy as a mountain.
Yes, in some life stories, we can see that there is no trace of being dominated by others. There is no doubt that such a life has no shortcomings. The road you have traveled, the things you have felt, the things you have owned, and the things that emanate from your personality will be engraved in your short life until eternity.