Therefore, it is time for us to take practical action. What I got on the paper is very shallow, and I don't know how to do it. Students, we should start from ourselves, from the small things around us, and show our determination to protect the ecology and environment with our own practical actions, and strive to do it: in life, save every drop of water, keep the tap on, and wash your face with a face; Keep every piece of paper well, don't post "inspiration" indiscriminately, and report to the teacher or relevant departments directly if you find or lose items; Save every ration, "a drop in the bucket is hard to come by"; Save every kilowatt hour to ensure that the classroom lights are no longer tired and useless.
In study: save our time, make full use of time to do meaningful things, enrich our study life, study hard and work hard. Only in this way can we move towards our ideal posts and make greater contributions to society. We should become the benchmark and banner of the new century, with good moral quality, learning ability and awareness of saving environmental protection.
In the face of pressure, take a positive attitude to deal with it, rather than unrestrained venting or powerless avoidance; In the face of difficulties in study and life, we should bravely accept them, summon up courage to struggle, and boldly and resolutely do what we can, instead of hesitating and stopping. Teachers and students, at this critical moment, we can't hesitate any longer. The natural climate has shown us that it will be too late to take action. For the blue sky above us, and to prevent our tears from turning into the last drop of water, only by saving everyone from low carbon can we win this tough battle! Let's act! Let our younger generation really take on the new force of low-carbon environmental protection and play a resounding song of victory tomorrow.
2. Write a composition [thinking analysis]
Let's talk about the contrast in Lu Xun's Kong Yiji first.
[Problem solving process]
Contrast, as an artistic technique commonly used by Lu Xun, can also be seen everywhere in Kong Yiji. Now let's talk briefly about the artistic effect of each group contrast in the novel:
1. Comparison between "short clothes gang" and "wearing long clothes"
A. the "short coat gang" is standing outside the cabinet drinking.
B. "The man in the gown" wandered into the house next to the shop, ordered wine and vegetables, and "sat and drank slowly".
Xianheng Hotel is the epitome of the dark old society at that time, with distinctive characteristics of the times. The novel introduces two kinds of drinkers: one is the "short coat gang"-the working "poor workers"; The other is the "long gown wearer"-a leisurely and rich exploiter. In the sentence, "short" and "long", "outside" and "inside", "standing" and "sitting" are in sharp contrast, paving the way for Kong Yiji's appearance. The contrast between the two reveals the disparity between the rich and the poor and the difference in the social status of customers.
2. Contrast of internal contradictions:
Kong Yiji was the only one standing drinking and wearing a gown. "Standing and drinking" shows that Confucius has been living in poverty, and his economic status and social status are the same as those of the "short coat gang"; "Wearing a gown" shows that he puts on airs, envies those who are leisurely and rich ideologically, despises the working people and is unwilling to associate with the "short clothes gang". The contrast between the way he drinks and the clothes he wears reflects the contradiction between his economic status and ideology, thus revealing Kong Yiji's special social status.
3. Comparison between "beating" and "being beaten":
A. Ding defeated Kong Yiji.
B. Kong Yiji's leg is broken.
This comparison reveals how the imperial examination system divided scholars into two opposite poles: some climbed the imperial examination ladder, such as Ding, and beat Kong Yiji at will, becoming arrogant "cannibals"; More people fell down, such as Kong Yiji, who was poor and became the object of being beaten and eaten. This fact profoundly exposed the evil of the imperial examination system.
4. The contrast between "laughter" and "fate":
A. Kong Yiji's face is black and thin, and it is no longer like it; Wearing a shabby jacket and crossing his legs ... his eyes seemed to beg the shopkeeper not to mention it again.
B. At this time, several people have gathered around, and they all laughed with the shopkeeper.
The novel describes in detail the tragic scene of Kong Yiji's leg being broken by Ding during his last appearance. Kong Yiji died in the laughter of drinkers and shopkeepers, and "laughter" runs through the whole novel. This burst of laughter was in sharp contrast with Kong Yiji's unfortunate fate, which profoundly exposed the darkness and cruelty of feudal society and criticized the numbness of the masses.
5. Comparison between "clap" and "touch":
A. Without answering, he said to the cabinet, "Heat two bowls of wine and ask for a plate of fennel beans." I will pay a lot of money.
B.he took four pence out of his tattered pocket and put it in my hand. He found his hands covered with mud. ...
The word "Pai" shows that Kong Yiji wants to show his generosity to the "short coat gang" who only spends a lot of money, writes his proud expression, and also shows his pedantic character; The word "touch" shows that Kong Yiji is slow to move, and the "four pence" is well hidden, which shows that this money is hard to come by, and Kong Yiji is further down and out. The contrast between the first "row" and the second "touch" reflects the deteriorating economic status of Kong Yiji.
6. Contrast between "disdain" and "decadence":
A. Someone asked, "Kong Yiji, can you really read?" Kong Yiji looked at the person who asked him and showed disdain.
B. They went on to say, "Why can't you even get half a scholar?" Kong Yiji immediately a face of depression, face was full of gray.
Kong Yiji is proud to be a scholar. He always pretends to be a scholar in front of everyone and disdains the jacket gang. Even when others made fun of him, he repeatedly showed pretentious and narcissistic arrogance. Only when people ask, "Why can't you get half a scholar?" Does he feel very painful, because he is bent on learning from middle school, but he never gets what he wants, which has become his greatest pain and humiliation. This is enough to show that feudal culture and imperial examination system have seriously poisoned the lower intellectuals.
3. Ask to write a short essay in a comparative way. There are several tall palm trees in our campus.
Seen from a distance, it looks like an open umbrella. Standing at its feet and looking up, it is straight up, up to four or five floors.
Its trunk is thick, straight and slender. The thickness of the trunk varies from top to bottom, and the middle part of the trunk is the thickest.
The upper and lower parts are thinner than the middle part. The most beautiful is the leaves of palm trees, which spread out like peacocks.
The leaves are very big, separated by small leaves, like Guanyin with a Thousand Hands, which is really interesting. Palm trees are full of vitality all year round.
Whether it is spring, summer, autumn and winter, it is so green and so high, as if soldiers are guarding our campus and accompanying us to learn and grow. In summer, the hot sun shines on the earth like a fireball. With the shelter of palm trees, we won't feel so hot when we play games under the trees and go to physical education class.
Sometimes children drag palm leaves and ride them to play. Really like a magician in a comic book. It was fun. When it rains, the leaves of palm trees become greener after being washed by rain, which adds a bit of greenery to the campus and makes our campus more beautiful.
Autumn wind is blowing, and the leaves of palm trees are swaying, like a little girl with green hair dancing happily. Also issued a "rustling, rustling ..." sound, like a little singer singing.
What a complete song and dance! Palm trees, you not only add a lot of beauty to the campus, but also bring laughter to the students. I like you-the tall palm tree.
In the political class, the teacher suddenly asked me, "What is your ideal?" I'm at a loss. I don't know how to answer this question at the moment. I once had my own ideals, starting from childhood.
I didn't know anything when I was a child. My mother asked me, "What is your ideal?" I opened my eyes wide and asked curiously, "What is an ideal?" My mother told me: "the ideal is what you want to be when you grow up."
For example, be an engineer who can draw design drawings, a worker who can produce parts, and an uncle who sells things ... "I thought for a while and said," I want to be a teacher because teachers can already take care of their students. "My mother was shocked by my answer. She told me, "Being a teacher is very hard. "
I said, "As long as I can be a teacher, being a teacher is the hardest. I am not afraid!" " "How time flies! In an instant, I grew up two years old. I went to school, but my grandmother got a cerebral hemorrhage. Since then, my ideal has become to be a doctor.
In the third grade, the teacher asked us to write our own ideals, so I wrote down my new ideal: to be a glorious people's teacher in the future. I often dream of becoming a doctor to relieve the pain of patients.
Dad told me, "It's not easy to be a doctor. You have to know a lot of knowledge to ... "But I stubbornly shouted: I want to be a doctor, I must be a doctor! "Suddenly, I grew taller, grew up, and became more sensible.
Entering middle school, I don't know how many times, the teacher talked about ideals and asked us to correctly understand ideals, fantasies and fantasies. I don't know when, I read a passage from Grandma Bing Xin: "The flower of success is often admired for its brilliance. However, at the beginning, its buds were soaked with tears of struggle and full of blood and rain of sacrifice. " Yes, the ideal is beautiful, but it needs to be realized from now on.
In order to realize his ideal, Zhang Guanghou studied hard with the spirit of "stupid birds fly first", devoted himself to mathematics with double time and energy, and finally became a famous young mathematician. This gave me a profound enlightenment.
I don't know when I started to correct the mistakes my mother told me. I began to understand the great significance of the ideal and stopped treating it as a joke.
Tolstoy, a famous Russian writer, said: "Ideal is the guiding light. Without ideals, there is no firm direction; Without direction, there is no life. "
I see: how much the ideal can promote a person's life. I began to think and seriously consider my ideal.
I think: if I want to be a painter when I grow up, then I will practice painting and calligraphy every day from now on, and I will be able to draw a beautiful picture of the reunification of the motherland in the future, and then write a beautiful couplet; If I want to be an engineer when I grow up, from now on, I will concentrate on learning knowledge and apply it to my work in the future; If I want to be a doctor when I grow up, then, from now on, I should know how to care and love others, so that I can take up the bounden duty of a doctor and save lives in the future. If I grow up ... well, I think: I want to choose the ideal I can achieve, and benefit the society, the motherland and the people in the future, and strive for the ideal from now on. Yes, when I grow up, I will consider my ideal from another new angle.
It's next to the house in my hometown in the country. There is a very large space for others to grow mahogany seedlings.
Mahogany is a special kind of tree. It is beautiful and straight. It was planted in the old forest farm and has grown into a forest several feet high. So when I saw that the saplings of mahogany only reached my knees, it was a little hard to believe my eyes.
The man who grows mahogany seedlings is a very tall man. When he bent down to plant trees, he felt like transplanting rice seedlings. He often comes to water the saplings after they are planted. Strangely, he comes here irregularly, once every three days, once every five days, and sometimes once every ten days. The amount of water is not certain, sometimes more water, sometimes less water.
When I lived in the country, I walked on the path next to mahogany saplings every day, and people who planted saplings occasionally went home for tea. Sometimes he comes in the morning, sometimes in the afternoon, and the time is not necessarily.
I'm getting more and more strange. Stranger still, redwood seedlings sometimes wither inexplicably.
So when he comes, he always brings a few seedlings to replant. At first, I thought he was too lazy to water the trees after such a long time.
But how do lazy people know how many trees will wither? Later, I thought he was too busy and everything was irregular. However, how can busy people do things so leisurely? I can't help asking him when he should come. How often do you water it? Why does redwood wither for no reason? If you water it every day, the redwood seedlings will not wither, will they? Tree planting machine.
4. Writing a composition for 60 years can be described as a flick of a finger! 60 years of personal experience has touched the pulse of social progress, and 60 years of reform and opening up have benefited everyone in China.
197865438+February, the Third Plenary Session of the Eleventh Central Committee of the Party was successfully held, which opened a new historical period of reform and opening up and was a great turning point with far-reaching significance in the history of our party since the founding of the People's Republic of China.
The national economy has developed rapidly in the past 30 years, and our living and working conditions have also changed greatly in these 30 years. Food, clothing, housing and transportation, living environment and working conditions are all earth-shaking.
According to my mother, in the era of voucher supply during the planned economy period, you can buy at most two new clothes a year, or ordinary plain cloth. The expectation of "wearing new clothes for the New Year" was the wish of peers at that time. If you can put on new clothes before the New Year, the satisfaction and pride envied by your neighbors are beyond the reach of young people nowadays, not to mention that every little angel now has at least several sets of clothes with good styles and textures and distinct seasons.
The supply of food is unforgettable for my mother. It is natural to buy meat with tickets, but there is absolutely no need to be picky, let alone wait in line in the crowded open air and worry about whether it is my turn to buy goods. Because of the scramble for food, adults make noise and even scramble for food, which scares children. When my mother was a teenager, she was most afraid of letting her parents shout in line. When accepting this task, she often insisted that "I would rather not eat meat than wait in line". In the sixties and seventies, materials were extremely scarce. A piece of brown sugar or tofu, or even Chili noodles with some salt, was once a common snack for people. At that time, eating with relish was no less than the excitement of children eating the latest food on the market, and the carefree after being numb by peppers was no less than the hearty after eating hot pot.
Thirty years ago, many families had only one house. Almost the same layout is to put a bed or a wardrobe in the middle of the house, draw curtains and divide the house into two rooms, with the living room and dining room in front. My mother said that when they play, they can only sit under the covers. If conditions are better, they can prepare one or two ponies or Xiao Mu stools. Families with many children have to be designed as bunk beds, with another bedroom and storage room behind the bed. When conditions are good now, most people live in three rooms and one living room and have their own independent kingdom. That kind of excitement is self-evident.
Not to mention how advanced the automation office conditions are now, I don't know how many kinds of water heaters have been changed just by drinking boiled water. In the late 1950s, boiling water could only be prepared during the supply time of the boiler room in the morning to ensure the needs of the whole day. It's uncomfortable to sit next to the office and reach out and add pure water to the water dispenser now.
Communication tools have also changed. In the 1980 s, a hand-held telephone was used, and it was a headache every time you needed to contact, not to mention connecting the operator of the post office first and then transferring to a certain place or unit. If the other party's signal is not very good, I have to make several calls, and sometimes it takes a day to get through. In the 1990 s, the pioneer of reform and opening up, wearing a BB around his waist, used paging signals to make calls at any time. Every time they scream, they deliberately pretend not to hear them, so that they can make more noise. . The pride of the holder is self-evident. In the Millennium, mobile phones have once again become a status symbol. The holder should not only shout in a voice out of proportion to his height, but also speak in the local language to make him feel like a saint in front of others. In today's 2 1 century, everyone has more than one mobile phone in his hand, so wherever he goes, he is close at hand, and his work efficiency and economic benefits are fruitful.
I have been touched by the changes in the past 60 years, but what I have experienced is only a small microcosm of the lives of thousands of people in Qian Qian. In the past 30 years of reform and opening-up, China has gone through hundreds of years of history in western capitalist countries, and its great achievements have not come easily. We live in such a beautiful golden age, and this happy, stable and harmonious situation also needs us to cherish and maintain. Through our efforts and struggles, the motherland will become more and more prosperous and the people's lives will become better and better!
5. What is contrast? Contrast is a figure of speech that compares contradictory things together.
Contrast can intercept two different things or two different aspects of the same thing. Through the comparison between the two, the beauty and ugliness of the image are more distinct, the characteristics of both sides are more obvious, the advantages and disadvantages are more profound, and the contradictions are more acute. Contrast, from the content, there are two kinds of contrast, one-on-one comparison and two-on-one comparison.
The contrast between two bodies is to compare and compare two opposing figures and two things together. Some people are alive and he is dead; Some people died, and he is still alive.
(Cang Kejia, Some People) A fighter with shortcomings is a fighter after all, and a perfect fly is just a fly. (Lu Xun's Soldiers and Flies) These two cases are the contrast of two characters.
Through comparison and comparison, it is more obvious that Mr. Lu Xun is great and the reactionary ruler is small, which can arouse our feelings of love and hate. Through comparison and comparison, we affirmed and praised the revolutionary fighters who adhered to the truth, and denied and rebuked the reactionary slaves who slandered the revolution.
Another example is: 3 Zhumen wine stinks, and the road has frozen bones. (Du Fu's "From Beijing to Fengxian to recite 500 words") 4 A cart of charcoal, more than a thousand Jin, will be cherished by the envoys in the palace.
Half horse red and full of silk, full of charcoal straight to the cow's head (Bai Juyi's The Charcoal Man) These two cases are the contrast of two things.
Example 3 expresses the poet's anger at the ruler's extravagant demands and sympathy for the people's tragic experiences through comparison; It shows us the sharp class contradiction and opposition in feudal society. For example (4), "a car full of charcoal, more than a thousand Jin" shows that there are many materials, and "half a horse is a foot of silk" shows that it is of little value. The comparison between them reveals the predatory nature of the court market and shows the poet's sympathy for the sufferings of the people.
Double-sided comparison is to compare and contrast the opposite or opposite sides of a thing together. For example, these people have Marxism and liberalism: they talk about Marxism and practice liberalism; Marxism for the people; Be tolerant of yourself.
He rubbed his hand on Bao Xiao's "monk's head", and his old heart, numb by poverty, became furious and gave birth to new hope. (Mao Dun's "Spring Silkworm") 3 Our soldiers are so cruel to the enemy, but they love the people of Hanxian so much, and they are full of deep internationalist feelings.
(Wei Wei, "Who is the cutest person") (4) From the perspective of assuming the main leadership responsibility, if there are 100 to 200 people in our party who systematically study Comrade Marxism–Leninism, it will greatly improve our party's combat effectiveness ... (* * * China's position in the national war) These examples, example ① very specifically criticize the dual nature of liberals; (2) highlighting "new hope" with an "old" mentality; Example (3) Raise two diametrically opposite attitudes of volunteer soldiers and praise our soldiers for their clear love and hate; Compared with the two opposing concepts of "system" and "piecemeal" and "reality" and "emptiness", the negative and positive aspects make the viewpoint more distinct and more prominent. According to the structural standard and referring to the traditional classification, comparison can be divided into two categories: average ratio and difference ratio.
Pingbi refers to the equal and parallel comparison of two things, and often uses the coordinate sentence. For example, modesty makes people progress and pride makes people fall behind.
(* * * "Opening Speech of the Eighth National Congress of China") Today, we are as tame to the people as our mothers; Tomorrow, the invading enemy will be burned to ashes by harsh artillery fire! (Li Ying's Snowy Night) Example ① Comparing the different results of "modesty" and "pride" with compound sentence, the advantages and disadvantages are prominent. Example 2 The sentence pattern is the same. Through comparison, it is revealed that soldiers can only be harsh on the enemy if they are docile to the people. Let the two aspects of the warrior's personality be more distinct.
Contrast ratio: refers to the comparison of two things with different weights. In contrast, the party often adopts transitional sentences or progressive sentences.
For example: 3 bees are small; How noble bees are! (Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey") 4 Peach Blossom Pond is deeper than thousands of feet's, but not as good as Wang Lun's (Li Bai's "For Wang Lun") 3 The comparison of "Zhuan Sentence" reveals the universal truth that honey's work and life seems to be "small" but actually "noble". Example 4 uses the relative word "less than" to express the difference ratio, emphasizing that the latter is deeper than the former.
To sum up, contrast and contrast are both related and different. Party A and Party B contrast and contrast at the same time, with Party A lining Party B and Party B lining Party A; The comparison between Party A and Party B also includes some comparison. Because they are related, some rhetorical works combine them as "contrast" or "contrast".
But the difference between contrast and contrast is obvious. ① As far as the status of Party A and Party B is concerned, generally speaking, there is no obvious distinction between primary and secondary. By comparison, the two complement each other and are more prominent.
The contrast between Party A and Party B is not half-to-half, but primary and secondary, with Party B lining Party A as the main body and Party B lining Party B, which makes the main body more prominent. This is the main difference between contrast and contrast.
(2) From the looming of A and B, both of them must appear when compared with B, otherwise the expression effect of black and white will not be achieved; On the other hand, when Party A and Party B set out, the inner sub-body must appear, while the main body is allowed to be hidden. You can write this clearly and hint at each other. In particular, there is often no contrast between subjects, such as moving to static and bright to dark. (3) From the category of Party A and Party B, whenever Party A and Party B compare, they are either the same object or the same aspect, otherwise they are incomparable; As for Party A and Party B, they may belong to the same genus or different genera. For example, setting the landscape as the background means saying one thing, which means another.
Contrast and contrast are not only rhetorical methods, but also expressive methods of many arts, which are often used in drama, film, painting, photography, sculpture and music. If used properly, you can get good artistic effect.
6. In contrast, writing a composition is inclusive. In life, we are often used to comparing everything, mixed with sorrow and joy, success and failure, gathering and parting. Our mood fluctuates in comparison, and sometimes even makes us exhausted. In fact, a person who truly understands life must be a master who learns to compare reasonably and always keeps a wise smile in the long river of years.
Sometimes, omitting many comparisons may make us live more freely and happily. Sometimes, proper comparison can enrich our minds and pursue a higher realm. Zhou Zeng wrote: "It is often that teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow before talking about pain, but Beethoven sang a ode to joy in his later years." When Beethoven was unfortunately deaf in his later years, he did not compare his frustration with the joy of listening to beautiful melodies in those years, but regarded it as the most precious wealth in life, so he bravely grasped the throat of fate and wrote a hymn of life.
Known as the most famous psychologist and interpersonal relationship scientist in American history, people never thought that he would make such remarkable achievements before. The boy, born in poverty, has a clumsy appearance and a missing index finger in his left hand. He used to be laughed at, doubted and indifferent, but he learned not to compare his imperfect appearance with those who are healthy and outstanding in appearance, thus overcoming his inferiority with dreams and courage under repeated realistic pressures. They all gave up a lot of contrast, so they paid more attention to the land under their feet and the shining ideals in their hearts, and thus gained an extraordinary life.
But sometimes, we also need to make appropriate comparisons to constantly sublimate ourselves, enrich ourselves, enrich ourselves, learn from each other's strengths, compare with others, find each other's strengths, and turn them into the driving force for our progress. When reading a work, we should always compare it with other similar works, take its essence and discard its dross, and enrich our experience and thoughts. Imagine, without these repeated comparisons, how can we find the essence and originality of the article? As the Buddhist saying goes, learning the Tao requires man of iron, setting a spiritual mountain and taking the supreme bodhi, which is beyond your control.
Generally speaking, the life style of pursuing knowledge is a lonely road. We should be tolerant of loneliness, focus on our own ideals, keep a low profile, cultivate our wisdom, not pay attention to the right and wrong around us, and not make so many fearless comparisons. Sometimes, through some comparisons, we can live a smarter life. Those who learn to use contrast must know how to live.