The example you cited is actually not profound enough ... If you want to have a profound idea about the college entrance examination composition, it is nothing more than developing in these directions:
1, find a large space. Society-nation-country-world-even to the height of the universe ...
2. Seek depth in time. The 5000-year history of China, with some examples, will make the article profound and fascinating. But remember, don't use those old examples now. Don't take Li Bai, Du Fu and Tao Yuanming as examples. It's annoying.
3. Dig deeper, go deeper and innovate again. It should be speculative and philosophical.
Take hutong as an example, you can write it like this.
1, the current situation of hutong-why hutong is not protected now-compare some foreign examples-national characteristics (mention the national inferiority slightly, don't go too far! )-the past and future of the nation (one of the reasons)-the road to the future (inheritance and development)/or: the cultural landscape that is also disappearing abroad-the modernization of the whole human society-the faint voice of some people of insight-will hutong become history? -The direction of human development ...
2. Description of Hutong (scenery)-memories of Hutong as a child (if any)-beautiful descriptions of Hutong in literary works (mainly some literati in the Republic of China)-memory and culture carried by Hutong-can't it just be preserved? The embarrassing situation of other traditional skills-what has China lost in its development-what is disappearing except hutong-where is the traditional culture going? Can a country that has abandoned the past find the future? ……
3. the spiritual value of hutong-hutong represents not only a kind of architecture, but also a kind of memory and culture-indifference to hutong, indifference to one's own history-emptiness and loneliness of modern people-lack of faith-how many people are spiritually rich-when can we get rid of the bondage of material things? ...
4. For novelty, the opposing side has been writing: the disappearance of hutong-surrounded by high-rise buildings-contrast-past and present-China culture and foreign culture-painful choice-going out of hutong, boarding high-rise buildings-seeing distant scenery (although at the expense of giving up something)-not necessarily completely restored, but it is best to stay in memory ... Finally, give an example.
The above ideas can be used as long as they are related to the traditional culture of China. Change hutong into paper-cutting, calligraphy, guqin, folk snacks and so on. ...
Another example is science. Why is China's scientific development inferior to that of foreign countries? -national topics (such as thinking characteristics); Why are there no rich ancient creations now? -Historical topics (inheritance and fracture of civilization); Why don't so many students in China have famous scientists? -Cultural and educational topics (educational system, social concepts, official guidance, etc.). ); Why are all Nobel Prize-winning scientists Chinese-American? -Cultural/social topics (education system, social environment, national sorrow); Why is China's invention inferior to that of foreign countries? -The topic of faith (the pursuit of material things, the spirit of less dedication to science, etc.). ), one or two of which can be more profound by combining some examples from ancient and modern times and at home and abroad.
In fact, every topic can be written in depth, mainly depending on how you dig! Don't try to prepare a few questions for the exam, there are always unexpected questions!
In short, there are several points: nation-history-culture; Spirit-belief-pursuit; Heart-freedom-society; Life-value-life; Grasp a little extension, plus the contrast between time and space. Comparison between China and foreign countries-comparison between ancient and modern times; Speculation-dialectics (simple views are easy to be vulgar and one-sided); Appropriate and novel examples (ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign); Famous sayings of celebrities (preferably foreign, unknown, be sure to write clearly the name, nationality, age and family of celebrities, which is the most convincing! And generally speaking, architects and philosophers will make people feel more profound ...)
It will be useful to quote more philosophers' opinions and works.
I like Marx. Although I was annoyed in high school, now I know that he is really wise! What have we learned ...
Like Freud, Jung, Frye, Maslow, Rousseau, Nietzsche, Kant, Hegel and so on. It is right to read more books on philosophy. If you start, Sophie's world is well written. There are Orwell's novels, Mao Mu's novels and Dante's Divine Comedy, which will be much more profound after reading! There are also many books by talented people in the Republic of China, and they sigh after reading them. ...
However, I don't think I have much time to watch it in high school. Let's take a look at Ugly China, which makes a good analysis of the national character. "Mob" and "naked ape", understand human behavior and character. Then Wang Xiaobo and Han Han's books cultivate profound and sharp views (don't be extreme, remember! ), have a look at Yu's "Cultural Journey" when you are free to exercise your sense of writing and history. I usually watch the news and Sanlian Life Weekly. Don't always read popular novels, and don't believe in things like "the secret of getting high marks in composition". Usually leave short stories in the "readers" for later use. Writing is still useful, although it is of little value in itself. ...
Good luck! I hope it helps you. ...
In fact, high school life is very beautiful. Enjoy it ...