I think this level is ok, at least I'm on the road. I have a sense of discipline, integrity and discipline. If you find a good direction and keep practicing, you will certainly achieve certain results.
Work problems:
1, the overall feeling of the work is ok, the font structure is ok, and the strokes have been changed. It is very good that you can practice it by yourself.
2. The author uses "vertical" writing in his composition, but the order is reversed. The antique composition should be written vertically from right to left, and the inscription should be placed in the lower left corner. It must be like this.
Some friends are more serious and ask why ancient calligraphy works must be written on the left. What is the reason? This is completely conventional, and it is also convenient at first, just like we have to take the right when crossing the road, and taking the left is retrograde. There are his reasons and rationality. There is no need to be serious, just find an excellent work and learn it directly. This is the best way.
3. The author has a certain degree of discipline, and he also painted several seals in red ink to make the whole work vivid. It's a pity that the seal is in the wrong position. There are too many seals painted and it looks too messy. In fact, a calligraphy work had better have two seals, one with the first seal and the other with the name seal. If there are more, you need good experience in seal processing. As a novice, the safest way is to choose to simplify the complex.
Suggested author:
1. Find a hard-pen calligraphy work by a famous contemporary artist, copy it carefully, and see how people arrange the composition of calligraphy. There is a certain regularity in composition. How to learn composition well, finding a teacher may not tell you everything. The most important thing is to explore by yourself through practice. Only by understanding the connotation of the composition can we use it freely.
It is suggested to find an ancient copybook to copy, instead of just learning modern pen and ink. There are too many excellent works in ancient times, which are completely higher than the calligraphy level of modern people. If you want to learn calligraphy well, you must find a clever model The recommendation can start with the lower case of Ling Fei Jing written by Zhong Shaojing in Tang Dynasty or Zhao Meng in Yuan Dynasty.