Typos:
Lian (Lian) pen
Live up to (defeat)
Jie (never) not
< p>Ill sentence:"I like Kuai calligraphy very much" remove Kuai.
"I will never live up to their wishes" Change wishes into expectations.
Wrong punctuation:
I love calligraphy very much, (.) Whether it is strong and powerful large characters or delicate and elegant small regular script, I have special feelings for them. (,) Practicing pen writing has become an indispensable part of my life. Everyone in my family hopes that I can make progress in this area. I will never live up to their wishes.
The revised version is as follows:
I like calligraphy very much. Whether it is the strong and powerful large characters or the delicate and elegant small regular script, I have special feelings for them, and practicing writing has become an indispensable part of my life. Everyone in my family hopes that I can make progress in this area. I will never live up to their expectations.