Mr. Qi Gong's "four" pens are generally neither sharp nor very sharp.
Look at his handwriting:
Compare your work again:
Look at the strokes of "Fu" and "Tian". The front is too sharp. And then what? These two-word pens? It looks stiff and round.
At the same time, the structure of this word is not accurate:
The horizontal feeling of "ancient" is lower on the right; The upper right of "Nai" is inaccurate; The upper right of "le" is not allowed either.
What's more, the opening of the signature? This word is not quite right. I hesitate to write it. ? The last stroke of "merit" is too fleshy and has no strength.