I. Overview of the provisions:
This text tells the touching story of the Chinese Red Army of Workers and Peasants on the March, reflects the hard life during the war, and praises the great spirit of the quartermaster who sacrificed himself to save others.
Two. Structure of the article:
The full text has three natural paragraphs.
Paragraph 1: Describe the environment in which it happened. "On the Snow Mountain", "Red Army soldiers wear newly-issued old cotton-padded clothes" and "March forward against the snow".
The second paragraph: In the snowstorm, a veteran was found frozen to death by an ice cliff. Then, I wrote in detail about the changes in the feelings of the commanders. Based on the change of commander's feelings, this paper tells the touching story that the quartermaster in charge of cotton-padded clothes was frozen to death without cotton-padded clothes, praises his great spirit of sacrificing himself to save others, and expresses his deep respect for the Red Army soldiers.
The third natural paragraph: write that the Red Army team continued to advance in the snowstorm, and the quartermaster was covered with heavy snow and turned into a crystal monument.
Three. Analysis and interpretation
1. New words
(1) Pronunciation: There are many new words in this class, so students should pay attention to the key points when studying.
Cliff: It should be noted that its pronunciation should be "y×" instead of "ái".
(2) Font: Students should pay attention to the font of these words when studying.
Monument: the left side is beside the stone, and the monument refers to the stone tablet, so it is beside the stone, and the right side is humble, which means pronunciation. Note that the middle one goes through from above.
Freezing: the words with "ying" on the left are mostly related to cold, such as "cold, ice, cold, cold".
People: It should be distinguished from "slow" because people mean everywhere and full. Such as: mountains and plains, yellow sand all over the sky, boundless, can also refer to casual, unrestrained. Such as: ramble, ramble, etc.
Muscle: It should be distinguished from "hunger".
Need: It should be distinguished from "need". Need means what you need and want. Such as: demand. It also refers to things that need to be used, such as military supplies. Beard originally refers to beard, such as hair, eyebrows, whiskers and so on. Later, it also means "need", which is something that needs attention. For example, you must work hard and you must pay attention to it.
(3) Explanation of words:
Monument: a tall stone tablet, which symbolizes the lofty spirit and great image of the quartermaster in the text.
Crystal clear: bright and transparent.
Ice cubes: lumps, lumps or piles. Ice, ice, ice. In this paper, it is a metaphor for snow-covered clouds and mountains in the cold.
Understand the text
This story is far from the actual life of students, so it is difficult for everyone to understand. Therefore, I hope that students can collect some information about the Red Army before studying and understand some hard life during the war. Based on the commander's emotional changes, the text describes the lofty spirit of quartermaster from the side. Let's understand this text from several aspects.
(1) change of commander.
Let's take a look at the main line of the text-the commander's emotional changes, and think about why he has such changes.
First, let's read some sentences.
(1) the commander listened to one leng, act quickly goes to the front of the long line.
Why doesn't he wear cotton-padded clothes? Why not send him cotton-padded clothes? The commander mused, his face became gloomy, and the muscles of his mouth twitched obviously. Suddenly, he turned to the person next to him and shouted, "Get me the quartermaster!" "
(3) "Guard, call the quartermaster at once!"
The angry commander suddenly calmed down. He took a few steps forward, gazed affectionately at the dead comrades in front of him, slowly raised his right hand and gave a solemn military salute. Tears wetted his eyes.
These sentences describe the emotional changes of commanders. Knowing the commander's emotional change, why is there such a big change? Let's look at the sentence describing quartermaster again.
(2) the appearance of the quartermaster. The following passage is the focus of the full text. Let's read it first.
"In the snow, an old soldier, sitting against the ice cliff, did not move, like a statue. He was covered with snowflakes and looked very calm and natural. He is wearing a shabby single coat, and his clothes stick to him like dead leaves. "
We can understand this passage in context and real life.
(3) The description of the experience environment serves as a foil.
The beginning and end of the text describe the environment respectively, such as whistling wind, heavy snow and heavy snow. "The wind, more fierce! Snow, bigger! " Words, etc It highlights the harsh natural conditions, which is closely related to the change of the commander's manner and action and the sacrifice of the quartermaster, and plays a foil role.
(4) Understanding the topic-Monument
At the end of the article, it is written that the quartermaster has become a "crystal monument", which should be understood in context. For the environment at that time, the world of ice and snow itself was crystal clear, and we can feel that the "Crystal Monument" here refers to the quartermaster's spirit of self-sacrifice, the eternal reverence of the great Red Army soldier in the hearts of the quartermaster and comrades, and the eternal memory of the quartermaster and the thousands of revolutionary martyrs in Qian Qian, Qian Qian.
Is it detailed enough?