The first painting is "Farmer Harvest figure". This is not about a farmer, but about general farm activities. Two scenes were written, one was logging in the valley, and the other was carrying melons and fruits between fences. Valley logging is placed at the beginning of the article, and Tintin's voice floats far away, resorting to hearing; Shocked by the cool dew, he turned to vision and touch. It is really a landscape of the world, which reminds people of distant impressions. There is no such thing as "cutting trees and singing birds" in the Book of Songs. From the valley to the tree " Gone with the Wind and The Valley often appear in He Qifang's early poems, but they are both fictional, using figurative meaning and extended meaning, but here they are realistic and have a unique charm. The poem does not specify the mood and expression of melon and fruit, but readers can think it is cheerful and smiling. "Habitat" was originally used to describe living things, but now it is used at the end of this poem to summarize the situation of farmers' homes in autumn, visualize nothingness (autumn) and create a relaxed and quiet atmosphere.
The second picture is "Go Fishing in Frost Morning". Among them, the words "fog" and "frost" (and "dew" in the last section) often appear in He Qifang's early poems, conveying a cool, cold and hazy atmosphere. The picture also includes a series of activities: casting nets, fishing and boating. The pictures of these ordinary activities all contain a faint, distant, clear and quiet charm in the poet's pen. The word "gently" often appears in He's poems, as if "handy", which shows the fisherman's carefree mood. Perhaps in He Qifang's early mind, autumn is really so quiet and far away.
The third picture is "the girl's love picture". This poem is written with weeds, crickets and streams, which is equivalent to the so-called "feeling interest" written by the ancients, that is, talking about other things first, feeling from the interest and feeling from the scenery. Weeds are overgrown and the stream is clear. This is not a human activity, and there must be a continuation afterwards, that is, girls are in love. The noisy summer of nature has passed, but autumn has become quiet. When people are silent, they mostly look at themselves and listen to their inner voices. After listening to the flute on the back of a cow for a summer, the shepherdess suddenly stopped listening, and a corner of her heart began to sprout. It is really "like roots shaking the earth on a hot summer night" (He Qifang's poem "Summer Night"). Writing about love, especially first love, is what he was good at in his early years. This time, he wrote more subtly and brilliantly. There are only five lines in this paragraph, which is about the transition from place to insider, and the transition from writing first love from scratch. The poet chose the specific angle of "shepherdess's eyes". Although the eyes are not clearly written, readers can see the purity and clearness, which are the special eyes of the first love girl. And comparing these three poems, we can see that the first two sentences are mainly about external scenery and personnel, and the third sentence is really written in the depths of the soul, writing subtle feelings, which makes the whole poem converge on real feelings. If you don't write like this, it will be difficult to enter the mood, enter the spirit, and the poem will "float".
In a word, Autumn creates an atmosphere that comes from the world and is far away from the secular world by depicting different scenes and pictures. This kind of atmosphere is quiet, Qingyuan, sweet and soft. It describes the leisure scene after a busy summer, so there is a quiet atmosphere; It describes a paradise-like life, and it has a Qingyuan atmosphere, without any hardships and bitterness of farmers. It is about the hazy and pure love of boys and girls, so there is a sweet atmosphere; Like He Qifang's other poems, it uses soft words to write beautiful images, avoiding noisy scenery and clumsy words, so it has a soft atmosphere. Every painting in the poem, as well as every image in the painting, is harmonious and unified; So this atmosphere is characterized by quiet, Qingyuan, sweet, gentle and so on. You can't be a master at this point. However, when He Qifang wrote this poem, he was still a 20-year-old college student!