1, "Dengguazhou" Wang Anshi
Jingkou and Guazhou are just separated by a water, and Zhongshan has only a few heavy green mountains.
The gentle spring breeze turns green again, but, moon in the sky, when can you take me home?
Among them, the word "green" is carefully selected and very expressive. Hong Mai's Rong Zhai Xu (Volume 8) said, "Wu Jun's literati hid their grass. Chu Yun: "Jiang Nanan again". Circle the word' to', note' bad', change it to' over', and change it to' in' after the circle. Change the rotation to Full. If it is ten words, it is designated as' green'. The author thinks that the words "Yao", "Yao", "Yao" and "Yao" are not ideal, and only the word "green" is the most alert.
This is because the first four words only describe the invisible spring breeze from the flowing wind itself, and they still appear abstract and lack personality; The word "green" opens up a new layer. Considering the wonderful effect after the spring breeze blows, the invisible spring breeze is transformed into a clear visual image-the spring breeze blows, the grass grows, and thousands of miles cross the river, making it a new green. This shows the spirit of the spring breeze, and this poetry is much deeper.
2. "In the former deep Xue Cun, some branches blossomed last night." Zheng Gu changed the word "several branches blossom" in the poem "Early Plum" by monk Miracle to "one branch blossom", so Miracle worshipped Zheng Gu as a "lyricist".
3. According to the Notes on Old Learning in the Study by Sheng Ruzi in the Yuan Dynasty, Zhang Juxuan wrote a poem, "The water is flowing at night, and the trees are blooming, where is spring?" Yuan Yishan believes that since "a tree" has been pointed out, it cannot be said that "where" is doubtful, and a plum tree is by no means early, so he changed "a tree" to "when".
Poems about revising articles repeatedly:
In the Yuan Dynasty's Collection of Tibetan Springs, one of Liu's four poems "Poems on the Mountain" wrote: "Qingyun is happy with it, and he will not rest until he does it. Until the snow disappears, the spring water flows from the east. " The author describes the process of refining words in poetry creation with vivid verses, and the poet's good mood after refining the most appropriate words.
The poet Du Fu said: "There are many beautiful sentences about human nature, and the words are not surprising."
Jia Dao, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, was famous for his bitter songs, and became a much-told story in the literary world because of his exclamation that "two words win in three years, and two tears in one song".