1. The teacher told you that the theme of today's exercise is: caring.
Second, the teacher gives you some homework requirements.
1. Write something that shows that people care about each other.
2. Before you start writing, think about what kind of environment things happened, how they happened, and how things developed and changed.
3. Pay attention to the characters' language, movements and psychological activities when writing, and express their true feelings.
4. You can exchange views with your classmates after writing.
Please open the floodgate of memory and look for those stories that move you.
First of all, we must understand what mutual care is. Even if others love you, you love others. This matter is between two people. Writing this kind of thing can be focused, either others care about you or you care about others.
In your life, there must be some familiar partners, friends, relatives and teachers ... Can you choose one of them and write down the things between you? Think about it. What kind of contacts have you had with this person in your life? What impressed you about your's relationship? What is the emotional connection between you in these exchanges? Whether to understand each other or support each other; Love or miss ...
We can search for topics from the perspective of time: when we are sensible, before school, last year, this year, last month, last week, and recently. ...
We can search for topics from the perspective of location: home, school, neighbor's house, grandmother's house, bus, suburb. ...
We can search for subjects from the perspective of characters: parents, grandparents, grandparents, teachers and classmates. ...
Before writing, you should pay attention to the reports or media around you and collect examples of mutual concern between people. For example, if you are injured by cycling, a stranger will help you see a doctor; Friends you have never met become your mentors in your study and life through letters, emails and greeting cards. Uncle Wang has been cleaning the yard for decades. ...
The teacher told you that you should grasp several points in this exercise.
1. Write down the most impressive thing in their relationship.
2. The details of caring for life between characters.
3. Care about the details of life and the description of the dialogue between characters.
4. A description of a person's psychological activities.
5. Pay attention to the complete narrative of a thing, and write clearly and concretely the time, place, reason, process and result of it.
6. Write your true feelings.
Fifth, the teacher teaches you how to choose materials. ：
(l) First, materials must be selected around the center. If you want to write "a matter that reflects the mutual care between people", you must choose materials that can effectively explain, highlight and set off the center of the article "mutual care".
(2) Secondly, the selected materials should be typical. In other words, the selected material should be the most distinctive and representative, which can effectively express the characteristics of the characters and concentrate on the mutual care center of the article. A great writer once said that using the most representative and typical examples to illustrate the basic characteristics of small partners will give people a clear and obvious impression.
(3) The selected materials should be authentic. This article should be regarded as an important criterion for writers to choose writing materials. Learning to write human narratives means writing "real people", which is the right way to improve the level of composition. On the contrary, it is very harmful to improve the level of composition to "avoid" writing by real people, "editing" and "creating".
6. The teacher tells you "some ways to write this exercise well".
1. Describe characters through events and express true feelings. For example, The Poor, this is the famous Russian writer Lev? Short stories written by Tolstoy. The text tells the story that Sang Na and the fisherman took the initiative to adopt two orphans of the late neighbor Simon on a cold night, which truly reflects the miserable life of the fisherman under the Russian autocratic system and praises the good quality that Sang Na and the fisherman would rather suffer than help others. This article is very distinctive in writing. Through the description of the environment, characters' psychology and dialogue, vivid characters are portrayed. The description of the environment strongly shows the hero's industrious and kind character.
2. Pay attention to the characters' language, demeanor, movements and psychological activities.
For example, the description of Sang Na's psychological activities in The Poor Man truly shows Sang Na's inner world and depicts a caring and helpful poor working woman. The dialogue between the fisherman and Sang Na has a distinct personality, which appropriately expresses the true feelings of the characters. The fisherman's words showed his frank and helpful qualities. Sang Na, on the other hand, reacted cautiously and spoke intermittently, which showed her nervous heart and also reflected her kind qualities of loving her husband and sympathizing with Simon. For example, several descriptions in this paper:
Her heart beat so violently that she didn't know why she did it, but she felt she had to.
"Doing this" is to adopt Simon's two orphans and bring them up. When Sang Na visited Simon, he was surprised to find that Simon had passed away, leaving two young children-one can't speak yet, and the other just learned to crawl. Faced with Simon's tragic experience, Sang Na instinctively brought two orphans back to his home. "I don't know why I did this" and "I think I was forced to do this" seem to be contradictory, which actually reflects Sang Na's kind quality of sympathy and care for the poor.
3. A proper description of the environment can add fuel to the flames. For example, the environmental description in The Poor Man strongly highlights the industrious and kind character of the hero. The article begins with a description of a cold night ... her neighbor Simon's family and husband have passed away, and died tragically on a straw bed on this cold night. The room was wet and cold, and two helpless children were sleeping beside their dead mother. These descriptions are full of the author's feelings and make readers deeply feel the tragic fate of the poor. The environmental description in this paper includes not only the weather description, but also the scene description of Sang Na and Simon. These environmental descriptions set off the beautiful qualities of sauna and fisherman from the side.
4. Plain language and true feelings. For example, the article "The Only Audience" tells that with the sincere and selfless help of a music professor, "I" went from lack of self-confidence to being able to play the violin for hundreds of audiences at various literary parties, praised the virtue of the old professor in caring for and encouraging young people to become talents, and expressed my admiration and gratitude to this respected old professor. The language of this article is simple, fresh and beautiful. For example, the description of the scenery in the forest, "The forest is very quiet. Sasha Vujacic's footsteps sound like a long poem, beautiful and moving; The description of the language of the elderly, like poetry, touched the "I" in the text and deeply touched every reader.
5. See the world from a child's perspective. For example, the article "Listen attentively" observes things from the perspective of children and selects some trivial things to express the quality of the characters. The language is simple and natural, and the ordinary contains deep affection, truth and vividness. In this paper, the technique of front and back care is used in many places. For example, paragraph 14 "Susan? Can you tell me how to spell the word repair? Paragraph 15 "She was silent for a while and said,' I hope your finger has healed'" Paragraph 5 "I said to the elf,' I was alone at home and my finger was hurt by a hammer ...'"; The last paragraph "Tommy, I'm going to sing in another world" and the tenth paragraph "Do you know that this lovely bird is going to sing in another world". This writing method makes the full text clear and structured.
The teacher will write a writing outline for you.
Relationship between characters → concrete examples → ending
This method requires us to explain the relationship between characters at the beginning of the article, then describe specific cases, and finally point out the characteristics of characters and reveal the theme.
Character relationship: this is the beginning of the article, which means to clarify the relationship between yourself and the character to be written. Point out "me" and who. Anyone here can be anyone.
Specific examples: this is the key paragraph of the article and needs to be described in detail. Describe one or two things in detail. In the process of narration, we should pay attention to the characteristics of characters' movements, language, demeanor and psychological activities, describe them in detail, and choose interesting details in life to describe examples. To describe a thing, you should explain the ins and outs of it clearly, how it started, what happened later and what happened at last, and write it step by step. Pay attention to the characteristics of the highlighted words and set off the words "I". The example in this paper should be done by "I" and another character at the same time, which is the development and change of the activities of two characters. Show the characteristics of characters' ideological quality in the development and change of things.
Features: This is the end of the article. You can simply point out a certain characteristic of a character, or you can point out the characteristics of a character by praising it in a lyrical way.
Please enjoy the wonderful exercises.
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After school, Xiaojun and Xiaogang are walking on the road. Suddenly, the sky was overcast, thunder was rolling and a heavy rain was coming.
Xiao Gang, the squadron leader, remembered that Mr. Yu, the head teacher, was still correcting homework at school. She didn't bring an umbrella because it was sunny when she went to school in the morning. So Xiaogang said to Xiaojun, "Let's go to the countryside and give the teacher an umbrella!" " "Xiaojun nodded. As soon as the words were finished, a burst of thunder rolled over, and then the raindrops as big as beans pattered down.
Xiaojun came home and found a raincoat to put on. At this time, Xiaogang also came out from home, holding an umbrella in his hand, and went to Xiaojun. They walked to school.
Dark clouds are rolling, it's dark, lightning and thunder, and it's raining cats and dogs. Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun marched in the rain. The wind blew the umbrella in Xiaogang's hand stagger, and the heavy rain soaked his clothes. The wind sometimes lifts Xiaojun's raincoat, and sometimes sends rain into his collar, and the rain flows down his back. On the road, the rain flowed. Xiao gang and Xiao jun, stormy overhead, muddy paths under their feet, trudged along. They only have one idea: send the umbrella to the teacher quickly. ...
They finally ran into the school and gently pushed open the office door. Ah, Teacher Yu is still correcting homework. She's too focused. She didn't seem to notice the rumbling thunder, flashing lightning and heavy rain outside the window. Although their footsteps came into the office quietly, she noticed them. Teacher Yu turned around. When she saw Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun, she immediately stood up and said, "It's raining so hard, you ..." Before she finished, she fully understood, because she saw her two students soaking wet, the umbrella in Xiao Gang's left hand and the anxious and concerned eyes of her two students. "Quick, come here!" Teacher Yu didn't have time to take an umbrella, so she quickly picked up a dry towel to wipe the rain on Xiaogang and Xiaojun's heads. Teacher Yu's eyes were red and tears blurred her eyes.
"Teacher, here you are!" Xiaogang handed the umbrella to the teacher. Teacher Yu took an umbrella. Ah, this little umbrella is really heavy, really heavy! "Thank you!" Teacher Yu choked up, her voice was very low, but the voices of Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun sounded so clear and loud. Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun stood silently in front of the teacher.
"Goodbye, Teacher Yu!" Xiao Gang took Xiao Jun and turned to go out. Two small figures disappeared in the heavy rain.
The teacher chased the door and watched the pouring rain. ...
Rumble ... thunder in the distance. Thunder rolled in the minds of Xiaojun and Xiaogang, and also rolled in the minds of teachers. ...
Find advantages and talk about experience:
The little author of this paper adopts the method of starting with the rain scene, and then describes a concrete example in the rain, describing in detail the process of two students giving umbrellas to their teachers. Finally, it ends with a rainy scene, which makes the article echo from beginning to end, which is wonderful.
I cut my mother's nails.
In a few days, it will be Women's Day on March 8th. Teacher Zhang, the head teacher, called on everyone to go home and help their mother do something meaningful. After school, I ran home excitedly and thought, what can I do for my mother? Sweep the floor? This house was scrubbed spotless by my mother. How about cooking? Mom has been waiting for me to eat for a long time.
I thought while eating. Suddenly, I saw my mother's hand. Oh, I got it! I mysteriously said to my mother, "I want to do something for you today!" " ""What are you going to do for your mother? "mom asked." You'll know later. I said.
I quickly finished my meal, made a basin of warm water, brought soap, and proudly said, "Mom, I want to help you cut your nails. Wash your hands first. " Mom said in surprise, "What happened today? The sun rises in the west? Our little baby is going to help her mother! " Say that finish, mother obediently put the basin in her hand. I started washing. When I touched mother's hand, I felt like the bark of an old pine tree. I raised my mother's hand and asked strangely, "Your hand, why?" Not like my hands are white and slippery. "My mother smiled and said," My silly daughter, my mother had the same hands as you when she was a child. Now that you do more things, your hands are naturally' old'. "After listening to my mother's words, I understood:" Isn't everything at home done by my mother now? "In order to let me into the first-class schools in this city, how much I have suffered! My mother is a textile worker and her salary is not high. Besides working eight hours a day, she often goes outside to do part-time cleaning. Mom, you are really hard! I will study hard and live up to your expectations ... when the water softens my mother's nails, I cut them carefully. Suddenly, my mother's hand trembled. When I saw it, it turned out that I had cut the meat. I said shyly, "Does mom hurt? "My mother encouraged me:" I don't hurt. "Don't be afraid, take your time." So, I got up the courage to continue cutting. This time I was more careful and didn't push until I saw it clearly.
In this way, I finally helped my mother finish cutting her nails. Suddenly, my mother smiled. Suddenly I feel grown up.
Find advantages and talk about experience: this article is about cutting my mother's nails. It seems like a trivial matter, but it has made me deeply educated. Why? Because my mother's hand is a hard witness-"everything at home" is done by my mother; In order to get "I" into a good school, "I often go outside to do part-time cleaning". With the determination to live up to her mother's hope and love, the little author carefully cut her nails ... The article is novel in material selection, ingenious in conception, true in language and true in details. Vivid, concrete and touching. It can be seen that the little author is not only a conscientious person, but also a sensible and enterprising boy.
a sweater
"Bell ..." The bell rang through the boiling campus. The students immediately returned to the classroom and waited for the teacher to come to class.
Today happens to be a Chinese exam. It's windy outside, so it's a little cold sitting in the classroom. The students are all wearing thick clothes, but I only wear a thin coat. Teacher Huang saw it and came up to me and asked, "Why are you only wearing a thin coat?" I smiled and said nothing.
The exam has begun, and the students are all immersed in answering questions seriously. Then I looked up and suddenly found Mr. Huang standing in front of the podium, taking off the sweater that can only keep warm inside and putting on his coat. She came up to me with a sweater and said kindly, "You can't do this. It is too cold to wear skirts. How can I persist in the exam? " Come on, put on my sweater, it will be warmer so as not to catch a cold. "Say that finish, she put the sweater on me. I said, "No, I'm not cold. You put it on me, you can't stand it. "No matter how I refused, the teacher just put on my sweater and said," I am a teacher, you are a student, and at school, I am your mother. "Ah, what kind of words. Wearing Mr. Huang's sweater feels particularly warm, but I also blame myself from time to time. Why did I get up late in the morning? I really hate that I forgot to wear a sweater in a hurry. ...
After class, a cold wind blew on my face in the corridor, which was chilly. Miss Huang is only wearing two singlets. How can she stand it? I hurried to the office, took off my sweater and put it on her, but Miss Huang grabbed me and said seriously, "Put it on quickly. What if it gets cold on the way home? " After that, I put it on again. I can't hold back my feelings any longer. Tears blurred my eyes. Looking at Miss Huang's motherly smile, I was too excited to speak.
Walking on the way home from school, the cold wind blew, but I felt warm as spring. How much caress does an ordinary sweater contain!
Find advantages and talk about experience: I feel very touched after reading this article. There is no flowery rhetoric in the article, but it shows the teacher's true feelings for the students. The article writes the characters' language and actions naturally, smoothly and simply. For example, "put on my sweater, it will be warmer." In case you catch a cold. ""At school, I am your mother. "This reflects the teacher's love for students. The words used in this paper are accurate and express the thoughts and feelings of the characters well. For example, "I suddenly found Mr. Huang standing in front of the podium, taking off a sweater that can only keep warm ... Here," Only "and" Mr. Huang just put the sweater on me, no matter how I refused. " The "hard work" here vividly expresses the teacher's concern and love for the students. At the end of the article, the theme is clear, which shows that sweaters are warm and teachers love them warmer. One morning many years ago, there was a young couple whose family was very reluctant to wake up. They don't know how to spend the day with gratitude because they are really poor. Not to mention the "big meal" at Christmas. It is good to have some simple food to eat.
But unlike those who have been poor together, it is inevitable that the couple will quarrel soon. With the growing anger and roar of both sides, in the eyes of the oldest child in this family, I only feel so helpless and helpless. However, fate changed at this moment. ...
There was a heavy knock at the door and the boy answered it. A tall man suddenly appeared in front of him, wearing wrinkled clothes and smiling all over his face. This man is carrying a big basket, which is full of all kinds of festive things that can be thought of: a pair of turkeys, ingredients stuffed in it, thick cakes, sweet potatoes and various cans, all of which are indispensable things on the Thanksgiving dinner calendar.
The family paused. I don't know what happened. Then the man at the door said, "This thing was given to me by someone who knew you needed it. He wants you to know that someone still cares and loves you. "
At first, the father in this family refused to accept gifts, but the man said, "Come on, I'm just an errand boy." He smiled and put the basket in the little boy's arms and turned away. "Happy Thanksgiving!" Floating behind him.
At that moment, the little boy's life became different. Although it is only such a small concern, let him know that there is always hope in life, and there is always someone-even a "stranger"-who cares for them at any time. Deep in his heart, he felt a sense of gratitude and vowed to help others in need in the same way in the future.
At the age of eighteen, he was finally able to fulfill his promise. Although his income is still very small, he bought a lot of food during Thanksgiving, not for himself, but for two families in great need.
Wearing an old pair of jeans and a T-shirt, he pretended to be a delivery man and drove his broken car to deliver the goods himself. When he arrived at the first shabby house, a Latin woman opened the door and looked at him warily. She has six children, and her husband left without saying goodbye a few days ago, and now she is facing the pain of cutting off cooking.
The young man said, "madam, I'm here to deliver the goods." Then he turned around and took out a bag and box full of food from the car, which contained a pair of turkeys, ingredients, thick cakes, sweet potatoes and various cans. Seeing this, the woman was blindsided on the spot, and the children burst into happy cheers.
Suddenly, the young mother grabbed the young man's arm, kissed him desperately and shouted excitedly in blunt English, "You must be sent by God!" " The young man said shyly, "Oh, no, I'm just a delivery man." A friend asked me to send these things. "
Then he handed the woman a note that said, "I am a friend of yours. I wish my family a happy Thanksgiving, and I hope you know that someone is silently loving you. In the future, if you have the ability, please pass this gift on to others who need it. "
His life became a complete cycle. The "miserable time" in his youth turned out to be a blessing from God, guiding him to help others and enrich his life. Since that second action, he has been pursuing tirelessly until today. Repaying love means caring for love, and love is everywhere around us. Each of us needs care and life is indispensable. If others give us care, then we should also care for others, so that the world will be full of love!
Caring for others can start with small things. For example, if you help a classmate with his homework, a piece of advice or a few words of encouragement from a good teacher can often give students unremitting motivation. For example, if you help a blind man cross the street and talk to the elderly ... these are all manifestations of caring for others. You will be flattered if you care about others. Suhomlinski said: "If every child's joy and distress are beating your heart, causing you to think, care and worry, then you can bravely choose lofty teaching as your career, and you can find creative happiness in it." Because of love, there will be the joy of creation, and because of the joy of creation, there will be more love for education and students. The teacher loves us. Her love is selfless! Parents gave us love, and their love is great! We should also learn to care for ourselves, others and ourselves! People need more than just charity of power and money. It is more important to care for and help each other. As long as you treat others sincerely, you will also get their sincere hearts. "We met. We understand. What is the relationship between acquaintances? " Yes, the love between people is not only between relatives and friends. We should enthusiastically help anyone who needs us. My mother, father and I are a family, and so are all China people. It can even be said that the whole world is a big family. Since we are all members of this family, we should care about each other like our own relatives. Only when you are full of deep love for others will more people be willing to share your troubles with you; Only in this way will more people be willing to be your friends; You will enjoy more love from others. If all people in the world have this love, the world will be more harmonious and United.
Love is the warmest word in the world. How wonderful it is to live in a warm and loving atmosphere!
There is a gap between prosecutors and people, but some people care about each other, making them closer and more harmonious, and remembering what happened that day. ...
That day, there was a math exam. Five minutes before the exam, I checked my pencil case again to see if the stationery was ready. Gel pen, lie in the pencil case; Pencil, lying quietly in the pencil box; Eraser, sitting quietly in the pencil box; Ruler, huh? Where is the ruler? I checked it again, and my mouth was still muttering "gel pen, pencil, eraser ..." I still couldn't find the ruler. I looked at my watch. Oh, no, class will begin soon. What should I do? What shall we do? I looked anxiously at my classmates next to me and thought, "If only someone could help me"-but no, all the classmates around me were seriously preparing things, only me, looking around anxiously. I was so flustered that I thought there was a naughty rabbit jumping about, thinking, "It was there last night, but now it's gone?" Did it fly with wings? What about my exam? 80% of the questions need a ruler this time. What should I do? Borrow it from a classmate? But each student only brought one! The more I think about it, the more anxious I am. "
Just then, Yang Shiqi saw me and ran over and asked with concern, "Wei Zhangzongwei, what's wrong with you?" I said anxiously, "My ruler is missing. What should I do? If I buy it now, it will be too late. What's more, I have no money, let alone go home and get it. What should I do ... "She said," That's the way it is. It's simple. Leave it to me. " When she finished, she returned to her seat and snapped a brand-new ruler in half. I was stunned and looked at her stupidly. She looked at me stupidly, smiled and said, "What are you still doing there?" Take it quickly! "As she spoke, she held out her hand to me with a truncated ruler in her hand. She saw that I was still looking at her stupidly, so she spread out my hand and put the ruler in my palm. I finally woke up. It was a long time before I said, "What are you doing?" She smiled and said, "You can only save people if you break the ruler" ... Just then, the bell rang. ...
Later, I have always treasured this broken ruler forever. ...