The rain covered the branches and buds, the snow melted, and the clouds and fields on the mountain became hazy. Snails crawl to welcome spring, magpies rise and fall to pick up withered awns. Raccoons are playing in the water on the moon. The soil is fresh and dyed red.
"Snails crawl to welcome the spring" is a bit vulgar. How do snails crawl ... It is suggested that the second sentence be changed to "Spring blossoms in the leaves, magpies return to their nests to sing." There is also the third sentence-raccoons are rarely seen when writing ancient poems, and the ancients did not know that this small animal was called "raccoon", except for modern poems. . . . . It is suggested that the third sentence be changed to "Huan women should look forward to it." Let's use the fourth sentence to express our feelings ... otherwise it will appear that the structure of the three-line poem is unbalanced and the melody is wrong. The fourth sentence, "If running water knows the meaning of falling flowers, it will not regret staying young and living long."
I read your other question, and I was thinking that girls who study liberal arts will know these images … but girls are naturally sensitive to beautiful things … this poem should be easy to understand …
Together:
The rain covered the branches and buds, the snow melted, and the clouds and fields on the mountain became hazy. (landscape writer, spring is coming ...)
In bloom, the magpies return to their nests and sing the branches. Everything revived, and the magpie found a nesting partner together. ...
Huan women looked at each other, only looking forward to it. A beautiful girl is picking flowers, but there is only one suitable one in my heart ...
If running water knows the meaning of falling flowers, it will never regret being with evergreen. If you know what I mean, I will fall in love with you and live up to you. ...
That's probably what it means ... but it's rare to write graceful poems with boys' rough character (liberal arts boys are basically excluded), so please think it over before writing ~