Example 1:
After reading Wang Anshi’s article "Shang Zhongyong", I was deeply touched. The article tells the story of Fang Zhongyong, a five-year-old child who has been farming for generations. He wrote a good poem that "passed on the views of the talented people in his hometown" even though he "didn't know any writing tools". However, he was reduced to an ordinary person in the "surrounding people in the city and not learning".
After reading it, I realized that the word "injury" is sadness and regret. It is a warning to the genius through thousands of years, and it is the thousands of tears after the genius fell. I am also hurt for him, for Zhongyong’s father who “makes good use of things and pays homage to the people in the city.” I hurt Zhongyong’s father who reduced the genius to a mediocre person. Fang Zhongyong, who "has a lot to look forward to", but in the end "lost everyone". If Zhongyong's father had long-term plans to provide Zhongyong with a good education, or if Zhongyong himself refused to visit everywhere and studied hard, I think he would definitely achieve great achievements.
If I had the same innate talent as Zhong Yong, even just a little bit, I would set up lofty ideals and work hard. Even if you don't devote all your time and energy, you will never let the precious word "enlightenment" slip away quietly. This is the scariest thing, and thankfully it will never be lost to me because I never had it. Ordinary people like us are much better than Fang Zhongyong, who was "enlightened" and then left quietly without learning. Although we are not as smart as him or as talented as him, we have a longer path to study than him, a more persevering will, and a brighter future.
"Shang Zhongyong" is an argumentative essay and a warning for all those who seek knowledge. Geniuses will work harder after reading it; ordinary people will forget their inferiority complex forever after reading it. Everyone will understand the truth: "Fallen geniuses are just negative teaching materials."
Example 2:
Wang Anshi's "Injury to Zhongyong" tells a regrettable story.
Fang Zhongyong, a citizen of Jinxi, lived in farming for generations. In the fifth year of Zhong Yongsheng's reign, he didn't even know the writing utensils, so he suddenly cried out for them. The father was different, so he borrowed something from someone nearby, wrote four lines of poetry, and gave it his own name. His poems are about raising parents and bringing in the clan, and he spreads his views on the talents of a township. It refers to those who write poems about objects and their literary and scientific aspects are impressive.
Oops! It's incredible that a five-year-old child can actually write poems that are both worthy of appreciation in terms of literary style and ideological content. This Fang Zhongyong is truly a child prodigy! If you cultivate it well in the future, it will become a great thing when it grows up! (After reading)
But Zhongyong’s father didn’t think so. He made money by his son’s poetry. "My father is good at what he does. Zhongyong pays homage to the people in the city and does not teach people to learn." Zhongyong paid homage to the people in the city, which depicts the sad and deplorable ignorance of Zhongyong's father who is greedy for small profits. . Edison once said: Genius is one percent talent and ninety-nine percent diligence. Zhongyong only relied on his own talent and did not work hard, which led to the sad ending of "being lost to everyone!"
“Although jade has beautiful qualities, it lies in the stone. It is not worthy of careful workmanship and is no different from rubble.” Although jade has beautiful qualities, if it cannot be carefully processed by good craftsmen, then it will be useless. Just like tiles. As humble as a stone. This is true for beautiful jade, not to mention people? No matter how talented a person is, he must study hard to become a talent. If you only rely on your own talents without working hard, you will achieve nothing. A genius may become a mediocre person, and a mediocre person will become a fool if he does not learn. (China Composition Network)
Now is the golden age for our study. Only by studying diligently now will we have a way out when we grow up. So, study hard, because knowledge is the ladder of human progress!
Example 3:
Fang Zhongyong has been able to write poems since he was 4 years old. A single word in his poems can buy several taels of money. His father does not let him go to school and lets him go to school every day. Write poetry and sell it for money.
Once, a man visited him when he was 23 years old. His poems were no longer as good as those he wrote when he was a child. When that person goes to see him in another 7 years, he will be as ordinary as an ordinary person.
From this story, I understand a truth: no matter how smart a person is, even a genius child, if he does not study and read regularly, he will still be an ordinary person. Nothing will be accomplished. As the saying goes, intelligence lies in learning, and genius lies in accumulation. A person who doesn't work hard to grow up when he is young is also an ordinary person.
Example 4:
The content of the text "Injury to Zhongyong" revolves around the story of a genius. The protagonist in the article, that is, Zhongyong, has been injured since he was five years old. The poems he wrote are worthy of people's careful appreciation. It is a pity that Zhongyong's father has been mainly engaged in farming for generations and has not yet realized the importance of reading. He was unable to let Zhongyong receive an acquired education. For this reason , and killed a talented person.
The text left a deep impression on me and left me with many feelings.
There are many injustices in the world. Although children in mountain villages are poor, they are happy and have lofty ideals, and will study hard for it. However, children in cities have many opportunities to learn, but Instead of feeling honored and happy for this, I hate learning, which is not the case!
A deaf boy who loves music, a deaf-mute writer who loves writing...Are there no perfect people in the world? In fact, when God closes this window for a person, he opens another window with a more beautiful picture for him. The difficulties will eventually be overcome, but for God’s beloved, he is perfect as soon as he comes to the world. I don’t know how many people Envy, but the darling who has not suffered any hardship will always blindly think that the world is beautiful and cannot cope with the slightest mistake.
In fact, regardless of geniuses or ordinary people, the storage place of knowledge is always like a big reservoir, water is constantly flowing out, and at the same time, water needs to be replenished inward. Once it dries up, it will be difficult to fill it up again. , the significance of the existence of the reservoir no longer exists. There is a saying that goes well: "Live until you are old and learn until you are old." That's right. The times are changing rapidly. Trends follow one generation after another. If you don't learn anytime and anywhere, you will soon be "abandoned" by the world, even if If a genius does not acquire more new content, he will become indistinguishable from ordinary people in the near future, and his talent will disappear. However, if an ordinary person does not acquire more, he will gradually become a mediocre person.
Knowledge is like water in the ocean, it will never dry up. Even a small wave on the sea is endless wealth. Traveling in the ocean of knowledge is undoubtedly a joy. Something! ~
Model Essay 5:
I learned and memorized the article "Shang Zhongyong" as early as in junior high school. At that time, I just memorized it. Today I recited it with my son again, carefully Think carefully and realize that it is not enough for a person to rely only on his own talent. If he wants to succeed, he must also put in hard work. As Edison said: "Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety percent "Nine years of sweat."
"In the fifth year of his life, Zhong Yong didn't know any writing equipment, so he suddenly asked for it...he wrote four lines of poems and named himself." Zhong Yong's performance at the age of five is really impressive. It is surprising that a peasant child who has never been exposed to pen, ink, paper and inkstone shows a thirst for knowledge, and can write a book with a pen, reaching the level of "he can refer to objects to write poems, and his literary and scientific skills are impressive". His talent His intelligence and wisdom are breathtaking and applauding. Even the eugenic and well-educated children in the 21st century can hardly compare with Zhong Yong's childhood, which can be called a child prodigy.
Faced with Zhongyong’s intelligence, if his parents can take advantage of the situation, Zhongyong’s future will be immeasurable. Sadly, however, Zhongyong's father was dazzled by the idea that "the people in the city were strange, and they would treat his father as a guest, or beg him with money." Instead of finding an excellent teacher for his son to continue his education, he was "the father would benefit from it." "Zhongyong paid homage to the people of the city and did not learn from them." He indulged in the small favors of the villagers in front of him all day long. After reading this, I couldn't help but think of an article I once read in a magazine. The main idea was that after the father gave birth to a child, he was busy making ends meet and entrusted the child to the care of an old wolf. As a result, the child still couldn't speak and howled after a few years. Expressing his wishes, showing habits such as crawling, fighting, and liking meat, and growing into a "wolf boy", I couldn't help but worry about Zhongyong's future.
A few years later, Wang Anshi met Fang Zhongyong again at his uncle's house, "Twelve or thirteen years old, I asked him to write poems, which cannot be compared to what he heard in the past." If Fang Zhongyong's father could clear his mind at this moment, for Zhongyong asked a teacher to learn the art. With Zhongyong's intelligence and talent, I believe it will not be too late. Sadly, Fang Zhongyong's father did not realize the importance of education and did not know how to use the remedial measures of "making things right after the sheep was lost", so that seven years later, Fang Zhongyong was "disappeared from everyone!"
Read the full text , and then realize the title of this article - Shang Zhongyong, the author is "sad" for Zhongyong's father because of his ignorance and greed for petty profits. Due to the parents' "not learning", a gifted child eventually "lost" But everyone is gone!" As a parent of a junior high school child, I am also "sad" for Zhong Yong. Since I have a strong desire for knowledge, why do I blindly obey my father's orders and "visit the people" all day long? Five-year-old Zhongyong has no opinions of his own, but does Zhongyong, who is 12, 13 or 20 years old, still obey orders? His drifting with the crowd is too pathetic, right? There are many children nowadays who are more independent-minded than him!
There are also some parents around us who think their children are very talented. We often hear them show off how outstanding and outstanding their children are in front of everyone. Here I would like to advise these parents. , we must take the lessons of Zhong Yong’s father as a lesson, guide outstanding children to receive better education, and create a good development space for them.
I would also like to warn those parents who hate that iron cannot become steel, not to blindly attack and rebuke their children's "stupidity" and "clumsiness". I am afraid that every parent has heard that Newton was once designated by the teacher as "stupid and hopeless". student of medicine, didn’t he also invent universal gravitation based on his curiosity? We have all laughed at Edison sitting on an egg to hatch chicks. Didn't he also make huge contributions to the development of mankind with his diligence and sweat? "Idiots" and "geniuses" may be born with them, but they are not static. Through their own diligence and hard work, "idiots" will definitely become "geniuses"; if they sit on the throne of "geniuses" In the confusion, I believe that Fang Zhongyong is the best example, so we must remember "never give up, never give up". Only those who never give up are qualified to wear the crown of "genius" - diligence can make up for one's shortcomings is a good lesson.
Injury to Zhongyong, injury to Zhongyong, may Zhongyong’s injury always become a lesson.