However, there is still some luck ~ it shows that the reader's classical Chinese foundation may not be very good, and his understanding of your masterpiece is wrong; It is also possible that the classical Chinese foundation of copywriting is too good to look down on ordinary classical Chinese works.
In fact, many university professors I know are very dissatisfied with the writing of classical Chinese. At first glance, the sentences in classical Chinese may not conform to ancient grammar and lack classical charm.
In my opinion, the truly exquisite classical Chinese requires intensive reading of historical records and the representative works of the eight masters of Tang and Song Dynasties, in order to barely go ashore (really read! Seek gas with sound! Seek gas with sound! Classical Chinese should have spirit! )。
Classical Chinese and vernacular Chinese are still very different, just like writing modern poetry, with a sensitive heart and a touching pen, almost the same. But who dares to write an old-fashioned poem without being familiar with 300 poems of Tang and Song Dynasties?
For the college entrance examination composition, my biggest feeling is to get to the point! Straight is the first step. Get to the point. You can also play genres and other tricks, but you must get to the point. I wish the subject a smooth college entrance examination!
2. How to write a composition in classical Chinese? Can classical Chinese writing add points to college entrance examination composition? The person in charge of marking the college entrance examination composition in this city clearly stated, "We don't encourage this kind of attempt, but we are protective."
How to understand this position? He specifically explained, "The most important thing in an article is the content. No matter what form it is, let's see if it is relevant first. What is the concept and composition? Is there any unique innovative thinking? It is possible to get high scores when these aspects meet a class of standards. " On this basis, if candidates write in classical Chinese or ancient Chinese, with proper allusions and clever words and sentences, they will be able to "add icing on the cake", and the original 63 points may be given 65 points; If there are some grammatical mistakes, considering that ancient Chinese is not the language of daily communication today, it is not easy for students to write accurately, and the punishment for writing will not be too tight; However, if the original text is irrelevant, but also deliberately showing off the text, full of fallacies, it can only be "worse." According to reports, in recent years, some college entrance examination candidates did try to write in classical Chinese, but most of them belonged to the last category.
The person in charge said that writing in classical Chinese is discouraged because modern vernacular Chinese is contemporary communicative writing, and learning it well and mastering it is the primary significance of middle school Chinese. At the same time, successful ancient prose writing is not achieved overnight. In this field, only after years of accumulation can we have a deep foundation and make achievements. If you want to be opportunistic, you will only make a fool of yourself in front of the battle-hardened marking teacher.
3. It can be used as an example of ancient prose cited in the composition. "There are four ways to shine." The ancients often said: "There are poems in the belly."
Classical poetry contains profound cultural background and emotional resources. The clever use of ancient poetry can activate language expression, highlight the inside story of the article, and make the article exude a strong bookish and cultural atmosphere. This is undoubtedly an effective and convenient way to "shine" and "innovate" the college entrance examination composition.
Then, how to use ancient poetry to add luster to your college entrance examination composition? First, the wonderful quotation of famous ancient poems is the most common way in college entrance examination composition, which is divided into partial quotation and full quotation. (1) partial quotation.
It is to quote the famous sentences of classical poetry in the local position of the article, such as title, inscription, first paragraph, end of the article and so on. These places are located in prominent positions, which are easy to attract readers' attention and leave a good impression on readers.
Quoting ancient poems and famous sentences in the title of an article can make the title look elegant and literary, and play a dazzling and inspiring role. For example, in 2003, Fujian examinee's Moonlight at Home in how bright! Citing Du Fu's famous sentences as the topic not only closely follows the composition topic of "emotional closeness and cognition of things", but also expresses more charm; In 2004, the Fujian examinee A Storm in Ren Pingsheng quoted Su Shi's Ding Fengbo as the title, which not only closely related to the selected historical figures, but also showed the theme of the article, and wrote Su Shi's open-mindedness and detachment, which can be described as "killing two birds with one stone".
Embedding poems at the beginning of the article can make the language concise and incisive, let commentators immediately "peek" at the author's cultural accumulation and humanistic accomplishment, and leave a good first impression. For example, in 2004, Shaanxi examinee "Looking for a Happy and Beautiful Life" began: "Walking on the path with fallen leaves in autumn, I couldn't help singing:' There are endless leaves rustling and endless sadness rolling in.
Lament the sadness and misfortune of fallen leaves. In fact, the life of falling leaves may be like this, just asking for spring and colorful autumn colors.
In another way of thinking, Gong Zizhen once said,' Falling in red is not heartless, but turning into spring mud will protect flowers more'! We should rejoice and enjoy the colorful autumn scenery. Starting from the scene, Du Fu's "Fallen leaves fall like a waterfall, but I think the long river always rolls forward" naturally leads to the association of fallen leaves, and then quotes Gong Zizhen's famous sentence to properly interpret the connotation of the philosophical topic "Happiness and our way of thinking".
This treatment makes the article appear profound and poetic from the beginning, thus avoiding the boring "straight to the point" reasoning. Quoting classical poetry at the end of the article has the effect of making the finishing point, enlightening people, subliming the theme, and receiving endless expression effects, which makes readers hide their thoughts and have endless aftertaste.
For example, in 2004, Fujian candidates' "Looking at the sea and relying on the sky" ended: "You can't see how the water of the Yellow River went out of heaven and entered the ocean, never to return, how lovely it was locked in a bright mirror in a high room, although it was silky black and turned into snow at night." Time flies like water, time flies like electricity. Perhaps, only history can fill the inscription on the tombstone without words, and perhaps, only history can best interpret Zeng Guofan's words that he wrote down his life's mood when he wanted to add himself to the capital of heaven: leaning on the sky shines countless flowers on the sea, and flowing water knows himself.
The three quotations are apt and natural, which makes the article colorful, well-founded and profound, and gives a dialectical and profound evaluation to Zeng Guofan, a historical figure. It is really a beautiful and powerful "leopard tail". (2) Full text citation.
It refers not only to a large number of citations in the whole paragraph, but also to a large number of citations in all paragraphs of the full text. Due to the profound cultural accumulation of classical poetry, a large number of allusions from many places will greatly enhance the cultural taste and aesthetic taste of the article and enrich the inside story of the article.
The whole paragraph is quoted as: "What is loneliness? Once upon a time, there was Li Bai's "Until, holding up my cup, I asked the bright moon to bring me my shadow and make us three". Perhaps, loneliness is the feeling of being inseparable when the moon is bright and the wind is like water. Once upon a time, Li Houzhu lamented that' the bright moon is like a hook, and the solitary phoenix tree locks the deep courtyard in the clear autumn'. Perhaps, loneliness is a deep palace courtyard, and the country is worried about the family and the people. Once upon a time, Chen Ziang lamented: "Before me, where did all those lost times go?" ? Behind me, where are the future generations? I think of heaven and earth, there is no limit, there is no end, I am alone, tears fell down. Perhaps, loneliness is an empty state of mind in which the grass remains the same, the horizon remains the same, and things are transformed! So, I, asking for the moon, the Chang 'e of Guanghan Palace, told me that loneliness is the "clear sky and clear night heart" of "the shadow of the mica screen is deep, and the long river is gradually falling into the morning star". What is loneliness? I can't answer that. "
-The first paragraph of the excellent composition "The Meaning of Loneliness" in 2000 college entrance examination quoted five famous sentences, which, as the carrier of emotion and justice in the article, endowed "loneliness" with profound cultural connotation, which not only added bright colors to the article, but also enhanced the persuasiveness and appeal of the argument, making the article rich in connotation, full of elegant poetry and rich humanistic atmosphere. However, but toward which corner of the mountain, an excellent composition cited in the whole article of Sichuan College Entrance Examination in 2003, can be regarded as a model essay.
Based on Su Shi's famous sentences, this paper implicitly deduces the title of the composition "Love and familiarity, cognition of things". Then quote Cui Hu's poem "Last year today, at this gate, peach blossoms set each other off. Peach blossoms still smile at the spring breeze when people don't know where to go, which naturally leads to an understanding of the relationship between emotion and cognition and establishes the theme of the article; Then, along the first paragraph, I quoted Li Qingzhao's Dream, Du Fu's Autumn Wind Breaking the Cottage, and Su Shi's Niannujiao? Du Mu's "Nostalgia for Red Cliff" further expounds the theme from several angles, which is vivid and rational. Finally, the full text concludes with Su Shi's "I don't know the true face of Lushan Mountain".
Throughout the whole text, the proper quotation and embedding of classical poems make philosophical thinking and emotional expression profound and profound, and make the article have a high cultural taste. Second, cleverly set up the structure of ancient poetry. Ancient people wrote poems and essays, and they were very disciplined. Every poem has its own complete writing structure and writing context. In addition, the ancient poetry itself is concise and harmonious in rhyme and rhyme. Using ancient poetry to lay the writing structure of the article can not only make the article coherent and rigorous, but also give people an elegant and beautiful feeling and impress readers in the shortest time.
At this point, in 2004, the excellent composition of Hunan college entrance examination "Pipa Star Parents".
4. Two thoughts on writing and reading classical Chinese in college entrance examination
I learned two classical Chinese texts today, namely "Learning Games" and "Two Children Debate Day". "Learning Games" is about: Qiu Yi teaches two students to play chess, and the two students have different learning attitudes, so the effect is different; "Two Children Debate Day" tells that in ancient times, two children relied on their own intuition. One thinks that the sun is close to people in the morning, and the other thinks that the sun is close to people at noon. Therefore, they have their own opinions, and even a knowledgeable person like Confucius can't make a correct judgment. Of these two classical Chinese texts, learning games is more closely related to our lives. Of the two students in classical Chinese, we seem to prefer the latter. In the latter, duplicity is just like when we are in class, it seems that we are listening to the teacher carefully, but we are actually playing with toys or doing little tricks in our hands. Although the teacher can't see it, we just stand by and don't know what the question is, let alone the answer. Only in this way will I regret it. I think we should learn from a person and learn from his professionalism. Only by studying hard can we get good grades. Two children in "Two Children Debate Day" boldly raised the question of when the sun approaches people, and they also had a debate. They can question, because they can think independently, explore and know nature. After reading these two classical Chinese texts, I understand that learning attitude is very important. You can only learn if you concentrate. Moreover, if we want to truly understand nature and explore objective truth, we must dare to think independently and question boldly. At the same time, it also shows that the universe is infinite, knowledge is infinite, even the most knowledgeable people will know something, and the room for learning is infinite.
5. Jiangsu candidates write their compositions in classical Chinese. Experts write four pages of notes to find the original text and source. Jiangsu college entrance examination composition "wizards" appeared. They are science students, but they drink cows. As for the weak crown, they are not clear.
Dolphin, eclipse, power, ignorance. "This year's Jiangsu college entrance examination essay topic is' green life', and this is how a candidate completed it. When reading this article, the marking teacher regarded it as a "doubtful paper" and submitted it to the expert group.
After reading the whole article, Wu Xinjiang, the leader of the marking group of basic Chinese knowledge in Nanjing and an expert in classical philology, only wrote four pages of notes on the article. The local media were anxious to find this "ancient prose wizard", and the student finally appeared yesterday. "Not only do ordinary marking teachers don't know or understand, but even I, a teacher who teaches classical literature, don't fully understand. Some of them have been seen but never used, and there are forty or fifty ancient characters I don't know at all.
When I came back, I looked up the information and took notes. The notes alone are full of four pages! Wu Xinjiang, a marking teacher and an expert in ancient Chinese prose, felt ashamed when evaluating the student. He said that in fact, he can use classical Chinese and write ancient Chinese, which is nothing. After all, this is a college entrance examination composition, and the first priority is to get to the point.
This article skillfully uses the "just right" ancient prose and closely follows the theme of "green life". "It is very appropriate to make the past serve the present." In addition, He Yongkang, head of the composition marking group of Jiangsu college entrance examination this year, also spoke highly of this candidate. He said, "With his current cultural literacy, he can be admitted without exception!" Yesterday, the student made his first appearance. He is a student of Class 3 (12) in rugao middle school, Jiangsu Province. His name is Wang Yunfei. He lives in Wen Zhuang Village, Xiayuan Town, Rugao City, and his parents are farmers.
Besides, he is also a science student. Judging from his college entrance examination results, his total score has exceeded a fractional line. Wang Yunfei said that he was interested in classical Chinese. He bought Records of the Historian and History of History from himself, and once tore up the History of Mutual Learning. Before that, he tried to write martial arts novels and short stories in classical Chinese in many exams.
"The night before the college entrance examination, I told my mother that I was going to risk writing classical Chinese." Wang Yunfei said, "I think it's well written, but I'm not sure.
I don't know what the marking teacher thinks. A marking teacher said: "This candidate is quite accomplished in this respect. He can not only use ancient Chinese characters, but also use them properly. He can use it flexibly in the examination room in a short time, which shows that he knows it by heart.
In addition, this composition is also very thoughtful. From the perspective of historical development, he explained that the environment was now destroyed and he dreamed of returning to the farming era. It's pretty good. Experts agree that he got high marks. "
This is another high-scoring composition in classical Chinese following the death of Red Rabbit in 200 1 Jiangsu College Entrance Examination. An expert said, "Although the death of Red Rabbit was written in classical Chinese, it was' Three Kingdoms Style' after all, and this candidate was pure classical Chinese, and his cultivation was really deep. It is no problem to read the Master of Ancient Literature directly.
On the internet, this article has been sought after by many media and netizens. Some netizens laughed and called the author a "passer-by". ——————————————— Wang Yunfei College Entrance Examination Composition Original: "Green Life" (Pinyin for Editor's Note) is a baby, but it drinks cows [d? ng]. As for the weak crown, it is unclear [jiān].
A dolphin covered its body. [j] was established, but I didn't know [jiān jiā].
Every time I bite [niè chá n à o], I don't know its rabbit [qūn]. When you are on the other side, the state of [zhú] is not what you get from [huanhu].
Today in the north, for a long time, [non-u], [fèn guǐ zhòu yuān], [bèn], [fó], [dao]. When the land collapses, people can live.
Southern Xinjiang [pāng pèi], the water is surging. In this case, the huts are gone. If you can't, you can't stop crying [jiū].
It's not God's fault that all this is abnormal. Have you noticed that [Zhuó] [Piá n] burned camphor, and [Hǐ] was [qǐ]. Under [Mi ǐ], the mountains were completely destroyed [w ǐ].
For that young snake, [gé] is not profitable, and Bashu snake king [huǐ] is profitable [pán]. Xun [Lu] was full of gas, and went to Geyaochi to attract Jia to the poor land to enrich his beauty [zο].
However, once in Fiona Fang, thousands of feet, the radish was not born, and the Milky Way was not seen for more than nine days. Oh! There are mounds everywhere, mounds everywhere.
So is this natural disaster? Man-made disaster! Rivers and seas [y] However, turbid water still pours. Is this a natural disaster? Man-made disaster! Wood thinks bamboo, and animals are [Gu Bu] and [Juan], so that deer can't walk or fly, ants can't lick [Chun], and beards can't be seen. So is this natural disaster? Man-made disaster! If you are angry, you will be angry.
The sky is no longer blue and the water is no longer clear. What is the sky without dark clouds? When Hong Wu came out, there was no recovery.
Looking around the world, birds can't fly, which is rare. When this happens, will the sky become clear? Fortunately, everyone knows, especially people. However, the upper layer netting method is unknown.
There are many disasters today. Northland well [shēn], main array, well opening [mǐ].
The forest in the south, Dayu, has to sigh. People don't blame themselves and blame themselves, and they don't blame themselves.
Nothing can be done. Don't be shy about what you want.
Think of future generations, everyone understands. But the effect of doing things is that if you think about it in the temple, you should investigate those who are in [ān ē], those who don't abandon [hù] and those who are big in the country.
What I think, the river overflows, Yang Huaiqi [zhēn], Ma Chuan [tu m \u n], Liu Yu [Li]. Wandering around [chè] slowly, people don't hesitate to see willows, people don't hesitate to see grass, and people don't hesitate to drive a pair of [à i] cars and fly between lanes every day.
Born in heaven and earth. It's embarrassing to oppose everything again today.
It's not appropriate to make mistakes today. Making mistakes is a disaster for Sun. It's time to cultivate a long-term way to save the world. I'm writing here today, and after thinking about it, there is a plant next to the house. Now, when I am on the water, I will drive again, and I will throw my peaches into the sky.
Sitting under the ginkgo tree, watching children play under the tree, extending to the wrists of bricks [gāi] and [E], but regretting that there are not many water lilies. When Yan [jade] is hot, you can choose Ling [zuì] and Ruowei Li [zhān] to serve your in-laws.
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6. How can we do well in Chinese college entrance examination, especially in composition and classical Chinese reading? I want to say hello in grade three. First of all, most of the following methods are taught by our teachers. I am a 20 10 college entrance examination student, and my Chinese score is 130.
Composition: pay attention to the beginning and end of the composition, because the college entrance examination is revised quickly, so the beginning and end are very face-saving. You can use parallelism to increase the momentum at the beginning, or introduce the theme with questions and answers, and there must be an echo at the end. If it is an argumentative essay, there must be more than three examples, because you are still a high school student and your reasoning ability will be too weak. You can use examples to make up for it, but remember that the number of words is enough, and you can write an inscription and postscript appropriately. If your level is not high, don't write, but the college entrance examination composition must follow the rules. Don't try new forms. You can write a genre in senior three, because now the college entrance examination composition is not limited to genres, so it is enough to write one. You must not write a composition in three paragraphs and divide it into several paragraphs. Write a subtitle for each paragraph (it is best to echo between the subtitles), so that the marking teacher can quickly grasp the center and don't copy it.
Ancient Poetry: Our teacher's teaching method is to translate all the classical Chinese in the textbook thoroughly, and then follow the teacher to do the questions. You don't need to care too much. I think this is also a bit of luck, because you can't read all the classical Chinese in the exam. I think you've really had enough reading textbooks.
7. Seek the perfect composition in classical Chinese for the college entrance examination in recent years. Full score composition of the "turning point" of college entrance examination
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Taste it and say: vultures belong to the same family, called falcons, and hunt in the wild every day. Every year when there is drought, the vegetation will wither.
The roe deer rabbits are fighting for their lives, and flocks of falcons are tired. Or fight the sky, migrate to the HarmonyOS system, and seek the top of the mountain; Or broken wings, dust, deviation.
In the rotting corpse. The former is proud of the eagle, while the latter is ashamed of the vulture.
I heard here that the year of drought was also a turning point for the Falcon family. At this time, your ambition is different, and your future is different. Ownership condition
What? Just what you want.
Everything in the world, the turning point of Austria is not only here, but also everywhere. Have you ever seen a clear spring flowing in a big stone?
It's also the turn of spring. Choose to retire, hide in the shade of stone, hide in the forest, but not famous in the world, long-term decay will not heal; Those who choose to move forward will not encounter any obstacles.
Fear, spin and hit a million times, but it turned into a deep valley and stopped the boat. Did you see the wind blocking the cliff? This change of wind direction is also
Those who choose to avoid are scattered outside the mountain, invisible for a while and disappearing for a while; If you choose to move forward, it will take hundreds of billions of years to gain.
Red desert and flying sand cover the sky. However, the shape of things depends on the turning point.
On the other hand, in the long river of history, there is no choice but to turn around. The move of a hundred miles, the official position of Sun Shuai, is endless.
The pain of adversity. However, determined to win, but not easy, Shi Qian's heart was tortured but not discouraged, and he resolutely chose life under heavy humiliation, and finally.
The history of the swan song and the coquettish charm without rhyme made the later literati sigh. There is also the ambition of the marquis of Wu, inheriting the virtues of the former emperor and serving the country wholeheartedly.
The sword refers to the central plains, endless. Although the plan is for the street pavilion, I will not choose to retreat, and then I will set off four times. I will eventually become famous all over the world and win eternity.
Sigh.
From this point of view, most people who transfer are trapped. Only those who have ambition and never give up can become excellent people. Wandering at every little setback.
And those who returned can't be counted in thousands of years, but those who left their names are not there!
It is known that there will be people who fall into the dust and mud, those who choose to die, and those who choose to rise, and they will gain enough; Apes climbed the cliff,
There will be those who miss and break their arms, those who lose their hearts will die, and those who struggle will get magical powers. People will fall in the storm, and those who choose a peaceful life will find it.
Living in a cave, I am ignorant all my life; If you choose to stand proudly, you will walk silently, wait for the rainbow to be picturesque, and then climb the flat road and soak in the breeze. no
In order to compete for rice, Tao Qian chose to retire and give up glory, so "Back to Xi" was told through the ages; Inviolability, Wen Tianxiang.
Choosing to die and abandon an official is a burning eye and a burning heart.
Yu Yu is sighing: Everyone has his own will and can't impose it; However, it spreads justice all over the world and all over the world.
Future generations, those who are not afraid of difficulties and obstacles and are determined to be angry, belong to them!
8. Ancient poetry and classical Chinese sentence paragraphs commonly used in college entrance examination composition are all a process of accumulation. If you want to use them well, I'm afraid you must be familiar with them. You should buy a Chinese knowledge manual, the contents of which are very practical for coping with the college entrance examination. It's best to sort out what you meet and like. Reading more and learning more if you have nothing to do is also good for improving your literary literacy. The key is to get interested. If you always take the easy road, you will be tired.
We hope to fly in the sky, like two birds, with the same wing; We hope to grow together on the ground, like two branches of a tree. (Bai Juyi's Song of Eternal Sorrow)
I don't regret the widening of my belt. I am haggard for Iraq (Ouyang Xiu's Dead Hua Lian)
When you sing all the new words, you can't see them, and the rosy clouds are reflected on the trees (Liu Yuxi's Trekking)
Ultima Thule is still far from the end, only the mind is infinitely long, and there is no time. Mulan Yanshu
Ruthless people understand the sufferings of affectionate people, and the melancholy of one inch of acacia has become thousands of strands. Mulan Yanshu
When will the water stop? When did this hatred ever happen? I just hope your heart is the same as mine, so don't bear it. (Li Chi Ngai's "Bu Operator")
This is a long time, people who love each other are not together, and I even expect to be satisfied with the good weather and scenery in name only. Customs are strange, who can you tell? (Liu Yong's "Yulinling")
Raise your hand for a long time, and feel the same (an ancient poem written by Yuefu for Jiao Zhongqing's wife).
Between water and water, the pulse cannot be said (anonymous "Altair")
I would like to fly high for the two swans (anonymous "there are tall buildings in the northwest")
Bow your head and make lotus seeds, and lotus seeds are as clear as water (the poem "West Lake Bend" by Gu Yuefu)
The fog reveals the lotus, but the lotus is not clear (a midnight song in Qing Dynasty)
Nong is the north star, which has not turned for thousands of years (Wu Sheng's "Midnight Song")
A thousand songs don't care, one song is emotional (Bao Zhao's "Singing in Class")
Why don't you give up your life? Better be a mandarin duck than a fairy (Lu's "Chang 'an Ancient Meaning")
Red candle has no good plans, feels sorry for itself, but cries for others on a cold night. (Yan "The Recent Flower")
I live at the head of the Yangtze River and you live at the end of the Yangtze River. I miss you every day, but I can't see you, so I drink Yangtze River water. (Li Chi Ngai's "Bu Operator")
What's the decision of Acacia Hugh? I know I can't control it when spring is over. (Chao Chongzhi's "Linjiang Xian")
Indus is raining in Mao Mao, dripping at dusk. Second place, what a, sad word. (Li Qingzhao's "Slow Voices")
On the pipa string, I said I was homesick. At that time, the moon was there, and I had come back according to the colorful clouds. (Yan "Linjiang Xian")
Sunrise in the east and rain in the west, the road is sunny but sunny. (Liu Yuxi's bamboo branch)