How to describe a newborn bird

Teaching suggestions 1. The subject matter of this article is more in line with students’ psychology. When teaching, teachers can contact students’ life experiences to help them understand the rich and delicate emotions contained in the works, and cultivate them to love life and The concept of being kind to animals. 2. The author integrates his love for the guinea bird into the description of the guinea bird, and gives the human spirit to the ignorant bird. This writing method is worthy of reference by students, and students who are capable of learning can be asked to imitate this kind of writing. way to write a fragment of an object. Relevant information 1. Introduction to the author Feng Jicai, a contemporary writer, was born in Tianjin in 1942 and was originally from Cixi City, Zhejiang Province. I have loved art, literature and ball games since I was a child. He was a professional basketball player and engaged in painting. In 1977, he published the full-length historical novel "Boxing of Boxing" co-written with Li Dingxing. Since 1979, he has published many works, showing his strong creative power and outstanding creative talents. His major works include the historical novel "The Magic Lamp", the novella "The Crossroad Paved with Flowers" and "Ah!" "Three-Inch Golden Lotus". 2. Appreciation of "Pearl Bird" (Cui Chengyun) Some famous writers not only describe society and reflect life with huge brushes, but sometimes they also change their masculine style and embroider beautiful short chapters with fine needles and dense threads. Feng Jicai's "Pearl Bird" generally belongs to this type of exquisite work. Through its delicate description of the love between humans and birds, its rich poetry, and its profound philosophy, it not only shows the writer's deep love for nature and life, but also seems to make people realize the true meaning of all beauty, from the universe to the human world. . Reading "Pearl Bird", I couldn't help but think of the poems of some ancient poets. Mr. Jiang from the Southern Dynasties loved Xiaoyan on his beam as if he were his own child. He once used his colorful pen to carefully outline Xiaoyan's lively attitude: "The spring light shines brightly in February, and the two swallows are arranging their sweaters. They hold flowers in their hands and play with the grass. Fragrance is hidden in the leaves. Or when playing in the hall, they often fly from the curtain..." ("Yan Yan Yu Fei") The little swallow plays with the grass in its mouth, brushes the leaves and pecks at the flowers, enters and exits the hall, and pulls the curtains, just like its own naughty family. Children, what harmony and trust between humans and birds! The existence of people gives birds support, and the existence of birds adds so much flavor to people's lives! Lu You, a poet of the Southern Song Dynasty, has a famous poem "Ode to Swallows", which is similar to Jiang Zong's poem: "When I first saw a new house in the Liangjian, I started to feed the young again with mud in my mouth. I only worry about returning late after traveling far away, and I am not afraid of flying low. "The reason why Xiaoyan loves her home so much and is so attached to her nest must be related to her master's kindness and love. The person who established a deep friendship with birds is none other than Du Fu, the great poet of the Tang Dynasty: "The cormorants outside the door will not come, and the sand heads suddenly see each other and guess each other. From now on, to know people's intentions, they must come a hundred times a day." ( "Three Quatrains") When the poet and the cormorant met for the first time, they quickly gained understanding and trust, and became inseparable friends. The swallows in Qin Taoyu's works not only trust each other but also care about each other: "I wonder if there is a place for living in the building? I have often carried mud to the corner of my seat. I have spoken to the beautiful lady and given up embroidery several times." ("Swallow") Swallow It built a nest with mud in its mouth without asking its owner's permission, because it clearly remembered that in the past, it and the beautiful woman were cuddling together here, whispering softly, which made her lose focus many times and abandon her embroidery work. Yan and human beings are connected and integrated into one. Most true writers love the world, love life, and love the mountains, rivers, grass, stones, flowers, trees, birds and insects of nature. Feng Jicai's love for the pearl bird is roughly the same as that of Du Fu, Lu You and others. Although "Pearl Bird" is prose, it is no less poetic than poetry. The delicate brushwork, graceful literary posture, euphemistic style, and elegant style are full of rich poetic flavor, just like a moving lyric poem. Let’s take a look at the author’s description of the love between humans and birds: “It was far away from me at first. Seeing that I would not hurt it, it came closer little by little. Then it jumped on my cup, lowered its head to drink tea, and then turned its face to look. Look at my reaction. I just smiled and kept writing, and it ran to the manuscript paper boldly and jumped around the tip of my pen; its beating little red paws made a "chacha" sound on the paper. " Next, seeing that the owner was so friendly, he "simply used his waxy, horny little red mouth to peck the trembling tip of my pen..." Finally, "this little guy actually lay on my shoulder. Asleep." This intimacy and friendly kindness come from the writer's lofty emotions and ideals. What is the ideal of a writer? The last chapter shows his ambition, which is the profound sentence at the end of the article: "Trust often creates a beautiful state." The article is gentle and graceful, but also full of ups and downs. At the beginning, it is said that the guinea pig is a bird that is afraid of people, so the bamboo cage was hung high, covered with spider plants, and water and food were added without opening its eyes wide enough to disturb them. As a result, the bird went from being afraid of people to being happy, approachable, relatives, and loved ones, and finally it was simply Become one with people. There were ups and downs in the dark. At the beginning of the chapter, a friend sent me a pair of guinea birds, which I cherished and took good care of. It seemed that I was writing about this pair. However, after a few strokes, a little guinea bird was born, and heavy colors and ink fell on the baby bird. The parents just played a paving role. This little chick is far more rogue and innocent than its parents, and the description of it becomes more and more light and vivid. This not only makes the article dense and dense, with appropriate shades, but also colorful, presenting an ups and downs of the scene, making it interesting to read. Yi Nong. (Selected from "Chinese Modern Prose Appreciation Library" edited by Wang Bin and Fan Xiwen, Baihua Literature and Art Publishing House, 1996 edition) 3. Reading the essays of "Pearl Bird" (Zhang Huamin) is great! The prose "Pearl Bird" given to readers by Mr. Feng Jicai is rich in emotion, delicate in description, simple and elegant, just like a round pearl.

As soon as the book opens, the reader is greeted by an "I" who loves birds and raises them well. He created a green environment with a natural atmosphere for a pair of guinea birds, and took care of them meticulously. Birds live in ease and ease. If the author took this as a starting point and continued writing along the direction of this plot, the article would still retain the interest in life, but it does not. The author changes his writing style and the article leads to a winding path. The baby bird is born in the "human world" (the "human" world, that's right). This little bird is not like its parents. It does not have the fear of facing a strange environment, nor does it suffer from the weakness of living in a cage for a long time. Although the "big bird" "calls" to it repeatedly in the cage, the little pearl bird still enjoys the breath of freedom in the owner's home, with its light and agile appearance and cheerful spirit. What a cute little creature the writer described with emotional pen and ink! In particular, its harmonious and natural relationship with its owner is particularly touching. The article reveals the formation of this relationship, which is extremely orderly. In this regard, the writer described the whole process of the bird from "far away from me" to "little by little closer" to "accompanying me mischievously" and finally "actually landed on my shoulder". Otherwise, it would not be true; otherwise, the true meaning of the relationship between humans and birds would not be shown. The author finally wrote: "This little guy actually fell asleep on my shoulder." "I lifted my shoulder slightly, but it didn't wake up. It was so soundly asleep! It was still sipping. Could it be that it was dreaming?" The bird here is no longer a bird, it has a human spirit. What we see is no longer a naughty bird playing, what we see is a child nestling in the happy and warm arms of its parents. In the world of birds, there are no naughty slingshots and ferocious muzzles; there are no small toys for pleasure in the human field of vision. When we witness the little pearl bird sleeping on "my" shoulder, the reader's mind enters a beautiful realm, where people and birds are interdependent and harmonious. People and birds are like the beating notes in a moving piece of music, or the shining colors in a beautiful picture. This state is the ultimate in harmony. Finally, the author ends the article with "Trust often creates a beautiful state", which can be said to be a natural progression. It is trust that creates beauty, and it is freedom and tolerance that cultivate trust. This is our conclusion after reading "Pearl Bird". As we rebuild our "spiritual home" today, reading "The Pearl Bird" cannot but be said to be an edification. The prose "Pearl Bird" is limited to the birth of the chick, and the full text is divided into two parts. Previously, the author fully described the warm bird's nest decorated with hanging vines of spider plants. The description was very detailed and laid the foundation for the following text. However, in comparison, it was still freehand. After that, the author wrote about the chick with meticulous and anthropomorphic brushstrokes, describing the emotional integration between the bird and "me". The description is subtle and delicate, its sound is in the ears, its shape is in the eyes, and its emotion is in the heart. Look, the chick's innocent expression and happy jumping...don't it look like a cute child? "I" have a deep love for the "little guy". We admire the author's observation ability, and we realize that only with love can we observe deeply; because if we observe deeply, we will love more deeply. Bing Xin, who has completed her 99-year-old beautiful life, wrote in her "Miscellaneous Notes from the Mountains": "I love myself, and I love the chicks; I love my parents, and I also love the chicks' parents!" From "Pearls" The spring of love flowing out of "Bird" flows into the hearts of readers. "The Pearl Bird" deliberately describes life, and the writer also adds profound philosophy to the real life he describes, so this vivid and meaningful prose contains a strong moral. At this point in the writing, the tip of the pen moves, and a little feeling flows down: philosophy can sublimate the emotion of the article to a new realm.