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My hair barely covers my forehead. I am picking flowers and paying by my door.
When you, my love, ride a bamboo horse, run in circles and throw your childhood.
We live together in an alley in Changgan, and we are both young and happy.
When I was fourteen, I became your wife, and I was too shy to laugh.
I bowed my head and went to the dark corner, unwilling to pay attention to your thousands of calls.
But at the age of fifteen, I raised my eyebrows and laughed, knowing that no dust can seal our love.
Even to death, I will wait for you in my post, and I will not lose heart in the silent watchtower.
When I was sixteen years old, you embarked on a long journey, crossing the Qingtang Canyon full of rocks and swirling water.
Then in the fifth month, I couldn't help it anymore. The ape shouted in the sky.
I looked at the place where you walked, your footprints in front of our door, each hidden under the green moss.
Hiding under the moss is too deep to sweep away, and the first autumn wind adds leaves.
Now, in the eighth month, yellow butterflies, two by two, are hovering on the grass in our western garden.
Because of all this, my heart is broken, and I am worried that my bright cheeks will fade.
Oh, finally, when you come back through three Pa areas, send me a message home in advance! .
I'll pick you up, and I won't mind the distance, all the way to Sha Changfeng.
translate
As soon as my hair is over my forehead, I'll play flower folding with you in front of the door.
You ride a bamboo horse, and we will walk around the well together and throw our childhood friends at each other.
We lived in a long office together, and neither of us had any suspicions since childhood.
When I married you at the age of fourteen, I was too ashamed to laugh.
He bowed his head in the dark by the wall and dared not look back after repeated calls.
I didn't stretch my brow until I was fifteen, and I wanted to be with you forever.
Always holding the belief that you will never die, how can you expect to step onto the platform of expecting your husband?
When you were sixteen, you left home and went to Qutangxia.
When the water rose in May, it could not be piled together, and the cries of apes on both sides of the strait reached the sky.
In front of the door are your wandering footprints when you left home, gradually covered with moss.
Moss is too thick to clean, leaves fall and autumn comes early.
In August, Huang Die danced and both flew to the grass in Xiyuan.
I am very sad to see this scene, so I am sad and my face is aging.
Whenever you want to get off the bus and go home, please bring me a letter from home in advance.
Welcome, don't be afraid of the long road, until you are dusty.
To annotate ...
⑴ Long line: It belongs to the tune of Yuefu Zaju. Juck Zhang is next. Huang Tingjian is Yi Lee.
⑵ Bed: well site, backyard well fence.
⑶ Long trunk canal: In today's Nanjing, this is where boat people live, so the long trunk canal expresses the feelings of boatmen and women.
(4) Holding a column letter: The book "Zhuangzi Stole Foot" was published, in which Wei Sheng met a woman under the bridge, but the woman didn't arrive, and suddenly the water rose. Weisheng kept his promise and refused to leave. He was drowned by the water holding a pillar.
5] Pile: a big reef at the mouth of Qutang Gorge, one of the Three Gorges. The water rises in May of the lunar calendar, and there is no reef, so ships are easy to hit the rocks and sink.
[6] mourning in the sky: mourning is a "song."
(7) Late behavior: Late work is "old".
Being green moss: Green is a kind of "pale color".
(9) Butterflies are coming: one is "Butterfly Yellow". Wang Qi's Notes on the Collected Works of Li Taibai in Qing Dynasty said: "Yang Shengan said that butterflies are white or black or colorful, but yellow is the only one, with rich autumn colors and golden colors. He quoted Taibai's "Butterfly Yellow in August" as deep in physics, while commenting on the word "Lai" in this edition is shallow. Qi said that the word was literal, and finally the word' lai' was long. "It makes sense to use the word' yellow'.
⑽ Sooner or later: sooner or later, when. March 8th: Place names. Namely Baxian, Badong and Brazil. In today's eastern Sichuan.
⑾ Changfeng Mountain: Place name, on the Yangtze River in Anqing City, Anhui Province, about 700 miles away from Nanjing.
Main idea
This poem depicts all aspects of a businesswoman's life at all stages of her life, showing vivid pictures and shaping an artistic image of a businesswoman who is persistent in pursuing an ideal life and eager to realize it.
Creation background
This poem was written by Li Baichu when he visited Jinling in the late autumn of the 13th year of Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty (725).
Make an appreciative comment
Li Bai, a poet, wrote many works reflecting women's lives, among which Long March is an outstanding poem. He described her love life with the self-reported tone of a business woman living in Chang Gan, and poured out her ardent yearning for her distant husband. Created a young female image with rich feelings and touching artistic power.
At the beginning, the six sentences of "My concubine's initial reply" are like the playful amorous feelings of a group of folk children. The following eight sentences "I became your wife at the age of fourteen" vividly and delicately describe the newly married life of the little bride after marriage. In the next few poems, the parting sadness of young women in boudoir is described with strong pen and ink, and the poetry has formed a distinct turning point here. The next eight sentences, "Your footprints are in front of our house, and I have looked at the places where you have been", vividly depict the image of a young woman who misses her long-distance husband through the changes of solar terms and the description of different scenery. The last two sentences reveal Li Bai's unique romantic color. Many details of this poem are outstanding and full of artistic effects. For example, the following lines, "My hair barely covers my forehead", describe the innocent game movements of boys and girls, which are lively and lovely. "Childhood friends" has become an idiom in use today. Another example is "I will go to a dark corner with my head down, and I won't turn to you for help", which describes the shyness of women when they first get married, very delicate and true. The poet noticed the changes of women's psychological state in different stages, but did not simplify them. Another example is "I look at the place where you walked, and your footprints are hidden under the moss" and "August yellow, two and two, hovering on the grass in our West Garden". Through specific scenery descriptions, the emotional activities in Sifu's heart are deeply touching.
This poem is unique, but it just comes from two childhood conjectures. In this poem, Li Bai broke the rules and made a big fuss. By depicting a pair of life scenes and carefully rendering the environment and atmosphere, it makes the characters more fresh and natural, showing integrity and originality. A series of typical life fragments and descriptions of psychological activities almost show the development history of a heroine's character.
Evaluation of works
Tiaoxi fishing hidden from Conghua: Gu Yun: Taibai concentrated "My hair has not covered my forehead", which is really too white. I remember my concubine in my boudoir by Li Yishu. ..... The meaning of the word is also beautiful and gratifying, and it is not far from the chaos in Taibai's poem.
The Return of Tang Poetry: Gordon pai' ea chung-hoon: an ancient drama, a real China Yuefu. Tan Yun: A frivolous, charming and charming person always suffers from rhyming, and his sentences are scrawled, especially white.
"Tang Poetry Express": Although she is a girl, she is heroic and different from others. She has always been in my heart.
This book of Mu Xuan's poems: It is extremely evil to write about his faithfulness. Every sentence is petty, which is the truth of this problem. Like Xizhou Qu (under the last two sentences).
"Tang Poetry": "Butterfly" sentence, that is, what you see is exciting (under "Qi Fei" sentence). "Changsha Dust Storm" in Zhou Shu. Jinling is more than 700 miles away from Zhou Shu, and it is a long way to go.
Notes on the Changes of Poetic Method: The syllables of this poem have got the legacy of Han Yuefu, so we should make good use of them.
Poems of Past Dynasties: Violet is brilliant and has traveled thousands of miles in an instant; This chromatography is uniquely moderate.
Poems of Tang and Song Dynasties: The affair of children comes out of my mind, and I love it deeply. In order to explore the beauty of entanglement, this article is almost as good as "Tao is not self-sufficient, but follows its circle" in the Four Empty Pictures.
Wang Kaiyun's Selected Poems of Tang Dynasty: Bright, charming and meaningful.
Notes on 300 Tang Poems: The meaning of the first and second chapters is unbreakable and can be read directly.
Li Taibai Shi Chun: Yan Yun: "We are both young and happy", which is a very unusual situation, so to speak. Another cloud: "bow your head" and so on. Beggars' gangs are often ashamed of their lives, and it is embarrassing to say that they are "untouchable" and "sorrowful beyond the sky".