Breeze willow, bright moon plum blossom. Let's add a word between these four words.
Su Dongpo's character is easy to understand, and the first bite comes: the breeze shakes the willows and the bright moon reflects the plum blossoms. Isn't it? The breeze is blowing, the willow leaves are swaying, and the plum blossoms are looming in the moonlight. However, Su Xiaomei thought it was too realistic and had no aesthetic feeling at all. At this time, Huang Tingjian leaned in and said, What about the breeze dancing fine willows and the moonlight hiding plum blossoms? Dance, graceful and secluded, highlights the fragrance of moonlight. Su Xiaomei thinks something is still missing.
The two big men were unconvinced by what they said. Come here if you dare.
Su Xiaomei said: The breeze blows the willows, and the fragrance of plum blossoms disappears the moon. Su Shi and Huang Tingjian repeatedly applauded. However, is Su Xiaomei really good? Some netizens didn't agree, and gave other answers: the breeze slanting willows, the bright moon dyeing plum blossoms. Some netizens said: it should be the breeze shaking the willows and the moonlight caressing the plum blossoms.
Su Shi seems to have no younger sister, but there are many legends in Su Xiaomei. It is said that when Dongpo met his sister and Huang Tingjian, Su Xiaomei asked them this question. I guess everyone can't figure it out. Su Shi was very open and asked his sister to come out to have tea with the male guests.
There are function words and content words in poetry, and content words are mostly nouns, such as breeze, willow, pale moon and plum blossom. Content words are connected by function words, and verbs and adjectives can be flexibly used as verbs and prepositions. What kind of word is good, which word in which category is good, this is the poet's skill, which belongs to the ancients? Refining words? .
Simply put, a conjunction is a word that connects two words, phrases or sentences. Conjunctions can be divided into four categories: coordinate conjunctions, turning conjunctions, selective conjunctions and causal conjunctions. Conjunctions can also be divided into two categories: coordinate conjunctions and subordinate conjunctions. There is a word? And then what? 、? With what? There are two words? And then what? 、? But? 、? Because? 、? What if? Wait a minute. For example: cool breeze willow, bright moon plum blossom?
Up and down and, and, and have exactly the same meaning. This is called crossing your hands, which is taboo in itself. In addition, harmony and "harmony" have no meaning here. In ancient poetry, such as the thin horse in the ancient road, the thin horse in the west wind and the flowing people in the small bridge, you can express it clearly without this function word link, so the word "zhong" must have its meaning. There must be no waste words in the poem. If there is no extra meaning, it's like taking a step in Weiqi.
Adjectives and nouns can be used as verbs, such as spring breeze and green Jiang Nanan; There are wars and mountains to the north of this wall. For example:? Breeze and green willows (three tails), Dan Yue Bai Mei Hua?
Green and white are blunt verbs here. As an adjective, green willow is not suitable, but Bai Meihua is better.
It is better to use verbs directly here. What words you use depends on the context, and you can't use the upper and lower sentences to emphasize words and meanings. Therefore, in a complete poem, the scope is relatively small, and it is much more free to say these two sentences alone. The upper part can be even (it can be three tails), and the lower part must be even: average, average. take for example