Wang Anshi's Poems on Balance 1. Jia Dao on Wang Anshi's Thinking Poems
Jia Dao took part in the imperial examination for the first time and lived in Beijing.
One day, he remembered two poems on the donkey's back: "Birds live in trees by the pool, and monks knock on the door on the moon." I wanted to use the word "push" again, but I couldn't decide to refine it, so I chanted on the donkey's back and reached out to make a deliberate gesture. I am surprised to see such a person as him.
At that time, Han Yu, acting as the chief executive of Beijing, was patrolling with horses and chariots. Jia Dao unconsciously went to the ceremony of Han Yu in the third quarter and kept gesturing. This was suddenly pushed to the front of Han Yu by the attendants around.
Jia Dao truthfully answered the poem, but he couldn't decide whether to use the word "push" or "knock", so he left the immediate matter behind and did not know how to avoid it. Han Yu stopped to think for a long time and said to Jia Dao, "It is good to use the word' knock'."
So they rode home side by side on donkeys and discussed the methods of writing poems together. They were reluctant to part, and after staying for a few days, Han Yu forged a deep friendship with Jia Dao. Jia Dao's titled "Li Ning lives in seclusion" lives in seclusion, with few neighbors, and the grass path enters the empty garden.
Birds are freely perched in the trees by the pool, and monks are knocking at the door. Walking across this bridge, you can see the charming scenery of Ye Yuan, and the feet of clouds seem to be moving on the floating rocks.
I will leave here for a while, but I will come back and retire with my friends on the appointed date.
2. Wang Anshi's repeatedly scrutinized poems
Originally, the third sentence of this poem was "Spring Breeze Arrives in Jiang Nanan again", but after writing it, Wang Anshi felt that the word "to" in "Spring Breeze Arrives in Jiang Nanan again" was too dead, and he couldn't see what it was like when the spring breeze arrived in Jiangnan. After thinking for a while, he began to circle the word "to" and changed it to "to".
Later, I thought about it and felt that the word "country" was not appropriate. Although the word "Guo" is more vivid than the word "Dao" and describes the passing away, it is still not enough to express a person's urgent mood of returning to Jinling.
So I circled the word "country" and changed it to "gold" and "full". This has been changed more than ten times, but Wang Anshi still hasn't found his most satisfactory word.
He felt a little headache, so he went out of the cabin and looked at the scenery to rest his mind. Wang Anshi went to the bow and looked at Jiangnan. The spring breeze blows, the grass dances, and the wheat waves fluctuate, which makes it more vibrant and picturesque.
He felt refreshed and suddenly saw the spring grass green. Isn't this the word "green" I'm looking for? A word "green" expresses the moving scene of the whole Jiangnan full of vitality and spring. Thinking of this, Wang Anshi was very unhappy. He ran into the cabin and took out a piece of paper. He changed the sentence "Spring breeze comes to Jiang Nanan again" in the original poem to "Spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan".
In order to highlight his hard-won "green" word, Wang Anshi deliberately wrote the word "green" bigger and more eye-catching. A "green" word makes the whole poem vivid and vivid.
The word "green" became what later generations called "poetic eye".
3. What are Wang Anshi's poems that have been repeatedly scrutinized?
Jiang Nanan spring breeze is green, when will the bright moon shine on me?
The word "green" means blowing green, and it is used wonderfully. It is said that Wang Anshi changed the word more than ten times in order to make good use of it, and finally chose the word "Qing" from more than ten verbs such as "Zhi", "Zhi" and "Zhi".
Because other words only express the arrival of spring breeze, but they do not show the changes of a new green landscape on the Qianli River bank after the arrival of spring.
Extended data:
From boating in Guazhou
Original text:
Jingkou and Guazhou are just separated by a water, and Zhongshan has only a few heavy green mountains.
The spring breeze came to Jiang Nanan again. When will the bright moon shine on me?
Translation:
On a spring night, the boat is moored on the shore of Guazhou. I looked across the river at Jingkou. I thought to myself, Zhongshan, where I live, is only separated by a few mountains, and the warm spring breeze blows the vegetation on the south bank of the Yangtze River green. When can I return to my hometown under the bright moonlight?
The first sentence in the poem reveals a relaxed and happy mood by writing that the distance between Jingkou and Guazhou is short and the speed of the ship is fast. In the second sentence, the poet looks back at Zhongshan where he lives and is reluctant to part; The third sentence describes the Jiangnan scenery full of spring; Finally, I ended in a questioning tone, emphasizing my yearning for my hometown again.
4. Wang Anshi examines poetry
1; The word "green" in Wang Anshi's poems "Spring breeze is green" When he visited Guazhou, the poet chose "Yao", "Yao", "Yao" and "Yao" many times, and finally chose "green". The word "green" describes the lush green grass in the south of the Yangtze River, which is full of vitality and spring.
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2; Birds are freely perched in the trees by the pool, and monks are knocking at the door.
Jia Dao took part in the imperial examination for the first time and went to Beijing. One day, he remembered two poems on the donkey's back: "The bird is staying in the tree by the pool, and the monk is knocking at the door on the moon." I want to use the word "push" (instead of "knock"), but after thinking about it repeatedly, I will (continue) chant on the donkey's back and reach out and make a push and knock gesture. (Pedestrians) are surprised to see Jia Dao like this. At that time, Han Yu was appointed as the acting local governor of Beijing. He is patrolling with horses and chariots. ) Jia Dao unconsciously went straight to the third quarter (of Han Yu's honor guard) and kept gesturing. So he was suddenly pushed to Jing (Han Yu) by his attendants. Jia Dao gave a detailed answer to this poem he was brewing. Whether to use "push" or "knock" is uncertain. His mind left the immediate thing, and he didn't know how to avoid it. Han Yu stopped to think for a while and said to Jia Dao, "It's good to use the word' knock'." So the two men rode back home side by side on donkeys and horses, and discussed the methods of writing poems together. They were reluctant to leave each other for several days. (Han Yu) thus forged a profound civilian friendship with Jia Dao.
5. Wang Anshi's repeatedly scrutinized poems
The gentle spring breeze turns green again, but, moon in the sky, when can you take me home?
The word "green" has been repeatedly scrutinized! During the Song Shenzong period, after Wang Anshi's first strike, he lived in seclusion in Jinling (now Nanjing, Jiangsu). One night in early spring, Wang Anshi came to Guazhou (now the north bank of the Yangtze River, south of Yangzhou) for a walk. At this time, Wang Anshi is brewing political reform, looking at the vast Yangtze River, the bright moon is blowing in the spring breeze, the city of Jingkou (now Zhenjiang, Jiangsu Province) is faintly visible, and the Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum stands tall. . . . . Although the political reform was blocked, Song Shenzong still trusted himself, and the political reform was supported by the common people. Political reform can continue and make great achievements in the future. . . . . I feel very comfortable, interesting and interesting. I don't think I can blurt out a chapter: "There are only a few mountains between Guazhou, Jingkou and Zhongshan, and the spring breeze reaches Jiang Nanan. When will the bright moon shine on me? " I got a good sentence and Wang Anshi was very happy. Calm down, Wang Anshi thinks this poem is ok, but the sentence is relatively dull, poetic and has no sense of making the finishing point. Especially the word "to" in the third sentence, he felt inappropriate after reading it, so he thought of the word "to" and "the spring breeze passes through Jiang Nanan", which is also inappropriate. Later, he racked his brains and thought hard, using "Yao", "Yao" and "Yao" for more than ten times. Suddenly one day, who will report that "the people in my hometown brought two jars of good wine"? Wang Anshi is not good at drinking and bored, but when he heard that he was from Linchuan's hometown, he had to cheer up to see him. It turns out that Mr. Li from his hometown has gone to Jinling on business, so I stopped by to see him. Wang Anshi saw two jars of wine and asked, "What kind of wine is this?" ? Member Li said: "This is a specialty of my hometown, and it smells fragrant all the year round." "What are the scents of the four seasons?" Anshi asked again. Mr. Li replied, "The Prime Minister didn't know this wine was called Four Seasons Fragrance, because it has four characteristics: this wine is made from fine Redmi and refined white glutinous rice, which absorbed the practice of Kweichow Moutai, Shanxi Fenjiu, Sichuan Chuanjiu and Jiangxi Liquor in one furnace, extended the fermentation period and aged for five years. The brewed wine is clear and transparent in spring, and the entrance is pleasant; In summer, the colors are clear and the entrance is like fire; Autumn is brown and yellow, and the entrance is sweet; Ruili in winter is rich and beautiful, and the entrance is soft and sweet. More interestingly, the fragrance in spring is as fresh as the peach blossom in March, the fragrance in summer is as rich as the lotus bud in June, the fragrance in autumn is as elegant as the osmanthus fragrans in August, and the fragrance in winter is as vigorous as wintersweet, hence the name Four Seasons Fragrance. The high quality, excellent color, fragrance and taste of Four Seasons incense also benefit from Linchuan's unique geographical and climatic conditions, especially Linchuan's rich groundwater resources and excellent water quality. The famous Linchuan Hot Spring in China is nearby, and the underground water quality is clear and sweet, which is the best water quality for brewing. . . . . The prime minister has been away for a long time, busy with political affairs and doesn't care about his hometown, so he doesn't know. Today, the Prime Minister should be happy with the wonderful products in his hometown. Teacher Li traces the origin of the fragrance of the four seasons, and gives some examples and talks about it. After listening to Wang Anshi, he was really happy, so he ordered someone to open the lid of the wine and only felt a strange fragrance and attractive aroma; I couldn't help but take a sip and feel mellow at the entrance. The fragrance is overflowing and refreshing. I feel refreshed, relaxed, flushed and not happy at all. I drank a few more mouthfuls in a row, and the sadness and bitterness of these days were swept away. Suddenly, Wang Anshi's eyes lit up and he thought: The four seasons are fragrant, the wine smells all over, the spring breeze has arrived in Jiang Nanan, and everything has recovered. Isn't Jiangnan green? Yes, the spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan. In this way, Wang Anshi's drunkenness is not about wine. He used a word "green" to "live" the beautiful scenery of the south of the Yangtze River with "spring breeze and green Jiang Nanan", which spread all over the country for a while and became an eternal masterpiece. Soon after, Wang Anshi returned to Beijing for the second time. On the first day of meeting, Song Shenzong asked, "Ai Qing has a good word. Can you give me some advice? " Anshi said, "I'm flattered. It's just a small work. How come even the emperor knows? "Everyone knows, then why don't I know? Zong Shen smiled and said, So Wang Anshi told Song Shenzong that it was because of drinking. Song Shenzong is more and more surprised. How can Ai Qing's hometown have such good wine, but you don't want to taste it with me! Wang Anshi hurriedly sent several altars of Four Seasons incense to Song Shenzong. Song Shenzong after drinking, even said, good wine, good wine. And ordered annual tribute, which is the origin of Linchuan tribute wine. Later, someone wrote a poem saying, "The Prime Minister has nothing to say. Fortunately, he is a native of his hometown, and a wine will make a good poem, which will last forever. "Later, it is said that because Wang Anshi wrote this good poem, he was appreciated by Song Shenzong, and he was able to visit the phase for the second time and become a world-famous phase.