Hello~
Far Altair, Bright River Hannu cannot be changed to "Far Altair, Bright Vega"
There are 2 reasons< /p>
1. The revised verse repeats the previous one without rhyming
2. Hehan refers to the Milky Way, and what it means here is the Weaver Girl on the other side of the Milky Way.
It can intuitively give people a feeling of looking at each other from a distance, but the revised poem cannot express this artistic conception~