Writing a composition with true feelings is a good composition. On this basis, we can choose some gorgeous rhetoric and good rhetorical devices.
The following are some good composition beginnings for your reference:
First of all, cut to the chase, cut to the chase.
The so-called "straight to the point" is a figurative statement, which means straight to the point.
For example, "Praise of Poplar" touched on the theme at the beginning: "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise Poplar!" This kind of writing is crisp and neat, and it is quick to get into the topic, so it is favored by many students.
Second, quote classics and highlight details.
Quoting epigrams, famous sayings, poems or proverbs at the beginning can enhance the momentum at the beginning, make people feel lofty and lofty, and achieve the effect of attracting readers and highlighting the center.
The following are common examples:
1. Poetry begins
Starting with a poem, it is magnificent and shocking. For example, "Don't be idle, wait for nothing." My father is over forty and his head is white, but he is still very ordinary. ...
2. The beginning of a proverb
Proverbs are familiar to children, which can make them feel cordial and stimulate their interest. For example, there is a proverb in China: "Three sticks can't make a fart." My father is a quiet man. ...
3. Celebrity quotes begin
This way of opening not only makes the meaning you want to express concise and informative, but also focuses on the main idea of the article, which plays the role of making the finishing point and adds a lot of color to the article. For example, a student wrote "self-confidence": Edison, a famous scientist, said: "Self-confidence is the first secret of success." Yes, with self-confidence and constant efforts, you can succeed.
4. Story import
The method of quoting real-life allusions or short stories can increase the interest of articles and arouse readers' interest. For example, when a student wrote Tolerance, he began like this: "A barber was shaving the Premier, and the barber accidentally scratched his face because Premier Zhou coughed. At this time, the barber was so nervous that Premier Zhou would be furious. Unexpectedly, Premier Zhou said apologetically,' It's none of your business. If I say hello before coughing, you won't scratch my face. Such warm comfort shows a valuable quality of Premier Zhou-tolerance. "
5, the beginning of the sound
Dialogue, piano sound, wind, thunder, etc. Can be used as the beginning, handy, rendering atmosphere. For example, "Please take my song back to your home, please leave your smile …" Whenever this familiar melody rings in my ear, I feel very cordial as if I have met an old friend I haven't seen for years.
Thirdly, incisive rhetoric has a lasting charm.
Starting with rhetoric, it is easy to express the author's feelings and arouse readers' interest in reading.
1. Metaphor
Metaphor is used at the beginning to arouse the reader's interest in the thing or truth to be explained. For example, "China Stone Arch Bridge" begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge bends like a rainbow."
compare
The method of comparison can strengthen literary talent and effectively highlight the theme. For example, at all times and in all countries, people who have achieved something in their careers have earned their success with hard sweat; On the other hand, lazy and fatuous people can't achieve anything. It can be seen that diligence leads to success and laziness leads to failure.
Step 3 be parallel
Start with a parallelism sentence, which is neat and sonorous and promotes people to enjoy reading. If I were a bird, I would remember the nest when I was born; If I were a sapling, I would never forget the land that nourished me. If I were a river, the snowy plateau would be a brand in my memory. ...
ask questions
Ask questions at the beginning, spread the style, and set an example first. For example, why do fashion designers always try their best to design one set of fashion after another? Why is our motherland always mixed with such a sentence in the horn of progress-advocating scientific and technological innovation? Why don't the high-rise buildings that have sprung up follow the architectural style of the fifties and sixties? Everything is just because the times are changing and people's minds are changing. Fashion should conform to the trend of the times and development should keep pace with the times. Life has given us the power to innovate.
Fourth, arouse interest by association.
The beginning of the article is from far to near, or from one thing to another, and then from other things to what to write, so as to set off what to write.
For example, a student wrote "Road" like this: There are roads and paths in daily life, and there are right roads and wrong roads in life. One should choose one's own way.
Five, cleverly set the suspense winding path leading to a secluded place
Set an open question at the beginning to attract readers' attention and interest, and at the same time increase the faltering of the article to show the beauty of the layout. For example, a student wrote "Feel the Beauty of Life": "I'm dying-I'm lying in a hospital bed, surrounded by darkness, very quiet, and I can only hear my weak breathing in a huge room."
Sixth, the celebrity's answer is thought-provoking.
Using celebrity answers to start an article is conducive to enhancing the momentum at the beginning and giving people a feeling of lofty ideals. For example, a student wrote the opening of Happiness: Someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is colorful. Nietzsche thought: "He who can swallow centipedes, broken glass, meat worms and stones at the same time without nausea is the happiest person." The stoics believe that "having unlimited wealth and power and being able to handle things calmly is the real happiness."
Seven, scene description rendering atmosphere
Description refers to the description, rendering and contrast of the scenery with the help of some rhetoric or description techniques, which paves the way for the beginning of the people or things behind.
Please look at the beginning of the article "Examination": Outside the classroom, the whistling north wind slammed on the wall with dense raindrops, "Cha, Cha", and in the classroom, an all-round competition examination reached a white-hot stage.
Eight, the explanatory elements are fascinating
Explanatory elements are also a common opening form of writing, that is, several elements of explaining narrative: time, place, people and events.
For example, the article Catch Fish begins: "One Sunday morning, Chen Xiao and I came to a stream to catch fish with a small basin and a small bucket." In this way, readers can clearly understand several elements of narrative and prepare for the following story.
9. Introduce the background of preparation for departure.
By introducing the situation and explaining the background, readers can fully understand the whole story, which is conducive to correctly and smoothly interpreting the whole article. This method is mainly used to write articles about some events or important people.
For example, the article "Burning Red Cliff" begins: "At the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty, Cao Cao led a great army south and seized Dongwu's territory in the south of the Yangtze River. Zhou Yu of Soochow sent troops to Chibi, facing Cao Cao's soldiers across the river. Cao Caobing is on the north bank and Zhou Yubing is on the south bank. " After reading this opening article, readers can see at a glance the situation, geographical location and upcoming events of the confrontation between the two armies.
X. Summarize the content and highlight the main idea
The beginning always leads to the full text, and the following is "divided" around it, so the full text is more organized, and it also allows readers to quickly understand the outline of the article at a glance, laying an emotional tone for later reading. Such as the beginning of the prose "Spring in bloom":
"The spring breeze of the five stresses civilization blew away the blooming spring flowers in the colorful garden of the school. Let's pick some flowers from this colorful garden and enjoy all the love! "
Eleven, clever use of flashbacks to sneak into Chen Cang
That is, at the beginning of the article, write the result of the matter first, and then write the reason and process of the matter, so as to create suspense and enhance the attraction of the article.
Please see how a student writes his feelings in a foreign land: Moonlight, like the water in an independent yard, flows quietly by my side, feeling the coolness of my heart sinking into the bottom of the water, causing endless thoughts for you! I remember it was a moonlit night, and I put you on the train to a foreign land. ...
Twelve, express feelings.
That is, at the beginning of the article, express the author's personal feelings, thoughts and feelings, and render the atmosphere, so as to achieve emotional people.
For example, a student wrote at the beginning of "Integrity": "If life is a Mercedes-Benz train, then integrity is an indispensable wheel; If life is a long-distance ship, then honesty is an indispensable backpack, which will accompany you all your life. "