Liu Yuxi writes a composition in Langtaosha.

1. Please rewrite (Liu Yuxi's) into a short story. Rewrite "Langtaosha". On this day, Huang Dinglong, a scholar of Class 68, was in a clear sky in Wan Li.

Liu Yuxi, who was demoted, was worried and had a bad taste in his heart. He planned to go to the bank of the Yellow River for fun to get rid of his regrets. At noon, Liu Yuxi came to the Yellow River and was surprised: "Wow! Good view! " The winding Yellow River is rolling in with sediment.

There are countless gold diggers on the shore and countless fishermen on the fishing boat. Huge waves followed, tirelessly.

Some waves just hit the fishing boat, and the boat immediately shook violently, like a tumbler, which made people look thrilling. The gold diggers on the shore are also working hard in full swing.

When someone found the gold nugget, he shouted excitedly, "Found it! Found it! " In this way, it attracted countless onlookers. Everyone cheered with him: "Found it, found it! Seeing this, most of Liu Yuxi's worries have dispersed, and he can't help but be full of poetry: nine songs about the Yellow River and Wan Li sand, waves and wind sweeping across the horizon.

But he didn't know how to answer the next sentence. Unconsciously, the night has fallen and the fishing fires have ignited.

Liu Yuxi looked up and saw the round moon, like a polished mica stone. Liu Yuxi suddenly remembered that today is the Mid-Autumn Festival! Thought of here, his eyes turned red. Looking at the moon, he thought: it's time for the cowherd and the weaver girl to reunite! They are all reunited. Why can't I be reunited with my family? I really want to go to their home to tell my difficulties! So the next sentence of this poem reads: Now go to the Milky Way, to the home of Penny and the Weaver Girl.

It's already late autumn, and the chilly autumn wind gives people a cold breath, which makes fishermen feel unprecedented loneliness. Although it is late autumn, the Yellow River is so green, giving people a feeling that spring is as deep as the sea.

It turns out that majestic peaks, lush trees, mossy stone walls and dripping bamboo tips all cast a green reflection on the middle reaches of the Yellow River, ..............................................................................................................................................., which broke the "green" on the edge of the Yellow River. The fisherman's name is Yu Duo. Yuduo was born in a wealthy family. The previous generation lived a drunken life, but the great changes at home made Yuduo learn to take care of himself from an early age. He doesn't know how many times he has been looked down upon and reviled by others. Finally, he couldn't help saying goodbye to his hometown and came to the sparsely populated Yellow River to make a living by fishing.

Yuduo's father is fierce and orders Yuduo to send him three fish every day, while Yuduo's mother also asks him to send her five fish every day to take good care of his skin. This makes many people afraid to go home and feel lonely.

Today, the weather is fine, and the Yellow River is getting warmer, rolling away and rushing to the shore with fish and shrimp. Yu duo took advantage of this great opportunity to pick up fish and shrimp all the way. I don't know how long it took, but he suddenly found something shiny. It turned out to be a white Yu Pei. He can't help thinking of his old blue Yu Pei. Now he regards it as money because he is poor.

He was tired and fell asleep with this white Yu Pei in his arms ... Yuduo opened his eyes and saw the cowherd, the weaver girl and their children waving to them in the distance. A burst of vegetable fragrance came to my face, and Yuduo also forgot much and ran over. Cowherd and Weaver Girl greeted him into the room with a smile.

A big table in the room was delicious, so he ran over and wolfed it down. I ate and ate, and the more I ate, the warmer I felt, and my eyes were moist: no one cared so much about myself for a long time! Yuduo looked up and saw the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl smiling at him. He was moved by wave after wave. At last he cried and said, "I want to go home!" I want to go home! " Yu Duo woke up late at night. He touched his cheek and it was wet.

Remembering the scene just now, he cried out again, still shouting "I want to go home!" " I want to go home! "His shouts have been echoing in the valley, and he can't be calm for a long time ... He decided the next day and went home today! No matter how her parents beat and scold him, he will never come to the Yellow River again. He also wants to tell them: "I love you, I love my home, I love my hometown!" " "So, he simply packed his bags and continued on his way. He believes that he will be able to return to his hometown which he has been thinking about for ten years.

2. Change Liu Yuxi's "Langtaosha" into a short article or story. On this day, the sky is clear and sunny. Liu Yuxi, who was demoted, was worried and had a bad taste in his heart. He planned to go to the bank of the Yellow River for fun to get rid of his regrets.

At noon, Liu Yuxi came to the Yellow River and was surprised:

"wow! Good view! "

The winding Yellow River is rolling in with sediment. There are countless gold diggers on the shore and countless fishermen on the fishing boat. Huge waves followed, tirelessly. Some waves just hit the fishing boat, and the boat immediately shook violently, like a tumbler, which made people look thrilling. The gold diggers on the shore are also working hard in full swing. Some people shouted excitedly when they found gold bullion:

"Found it! Found it! "

In this way, it attracted countless onlookers. Everyone cheered with him: "Found it, found it!

Seeing this, Liu Yuxi's worries dispersed more than half, which made him poetic and angry:

Wan Li sand of the Yellow River, waves and wind blowing from the horizon.

But he didn't know how to answer the next sentence.

Unconsciously, the night has fallen and the fishing fires have ignited. Liu Yuxi looked up and saw the round moon, like a polished mica stone. Liu Yuxi suddenly remembered that today is the Mid-Autumn Festival! Thought of here, his eyes turned red. Looking at the moon, he thought: it's time for the cowherd and the weaver girl to reunite! They are all reunited. Why can't I be reunited with my family? I really want to go to their home to tell my difficulties! So the next sentence of this poem is written like this:

Now go to the Milky Way, to Petunia and Weaver's home.

3. Rewrite the composition of Langtaosha Rewrite the composition of Langtaosha. "The Yellow River Wan Li sand has nine songs, and the waves sweep the wind from the horizon.

Since you are from the sky, and now you seem to fly directly to the Milky Way, please take me to the sky, gather in the Milky Way, and go to the home of Cowherd and Weaver Girl together. "This poem was written by Liu Yuxi, a writer in the Tang Dynasty, and it is called Langtaosha.

Liu Yuxi was a writer in the Tang Dynasty, and his poems were full of charm. The author of this poem wrote this poem with exaggeration.

The meaning of this poem is that the winding Yellow River, carrying the sediment waves of Wan Li, rushes to Wan Li and rolls in from the distant horizon. Today, the poet is still riding the wind and waves, risking his own life to confront the Yellow Sand in Wan Li, going upstream to the Milky Way, letting the Yellow River carry the poet and happily visit the home of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl with the Yellow River.

In this poem, most poets describe the Yellow River in an exaggerated way. He described the Yellow River as so dangerous and terrible that it kills people like a whirlpool, but no matter how difficult it is, the poet must overcome it. I think the author must have experienced many setbacks. He traveled halfway around the world and got black and blue all over himself, but he still didn't give up his goal of exploring the mysteries of nature. Finally, he thought that Galaxy was a guest of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl. He walked to the Yellow River with sediment in his arms, and the waves were raging, but no matter how difficult and dangerous it was, he had to overcome it. His dream must come true. He carried the yellow sand in Wan Li and went upstream.

4. The writing characteristics of Langtaosha Liu Yuxi Rizhao Chengzhou River Fog ②

The companions of the gold rush are all Jiang Wei. ③

Hou yin, king of beauty cosmetics and jewelry,

The sand is full of waves.

author

772-842, word Meng De, ranked 28th, from Luoyang. In the ninth year of Zhenyuan (793), he became a scholar.

Division, the supervision of the empire. Because of his participation in the "Yongzheng Innovation", he demoted Sima Lang, moved to Lianzhou for secretariat, and moved away, and

Two countries. At the beginning of Wenzong, he was a guest and a doctor of rites. It's Sue again, you, and the secretariat of the three states. Kaicheng first year

(836) The capital was divided into Prince Ke and was called Liu Ke. His poems are euphemistic and charming. Youchangqi

Of course, its "Zhi Zhu Ci" and "Langtaosha" are fresh, handsome and refreshing, enriching the feelings of songs and creating a new situation for Tang poetry.

There are "Liu Mengde's Collected Works" and "All Poems of Tang Dynasty" in total 12 volumes.

To annotate ...

Langtaosha: a folk tune in the Tang Dynasty, which was taught by later generations. 2 clear: clear and clean. Mainland: land in water.

(3) Jiang Wei: By the river.

judge

In the first two sentences, the sun becomes a river to disperse the river fog, which shows the magnificent picture of "the companion of the gold digger is full of rivers"

Praise is beyond words. Gold has been valued for a long time, but it is described in such a beautiful poem.

The golden woman never existed. In the second sentence, it only says "the companions of the gold diggers are all over the country". According to the usual thinking,

Next, we should write about how to find gold. However, the poet crossed the normal track and found another way to imagine the use of gold.

Excerpt an unexpected epigram: "Beauty jewelry Wang Houyin sand is full of waves." The prince and the golden seal,

It is a concentrated expression of "expensive"; Beautiful Chai Jin is a concentrated expression of "wealth". These two are more popular in the world.

Heavy, has a long history. But it has never happened to trace their origin back to women's gold rush. In terms of composition,

You see, after the second sentence, you didn't write how to find gold, but you opened it up greatly with the words "beauty jewelry Wang Houyin", and you were alert.

Unbelievable. However, if you don't keep writing about how to find gold, it will be vague and irrelevant. The genius of the author lies in the fourth sentence.

It not only reveals the origin of gold seal and gold hairpin, but also brings out the best in "Shazhongbo" and "female companion" pottery.

Kim's hard work. Put in and take out, control the vertical freely, showing outstanding insight and superb skills.

The whole poem shows this kind of social phenomenon, the hard work of poor women is exhausted, and the wealth and achievements of rich people are achieved. how

Treat, thought-provoking.

Sea waves scouring the sand by Yuxi Liu

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In August, the waves roared from the ground, hitting a cliff dozens of feet high and still returning.

In August, the waves roared away, with their heads several feet high and touching the back of the mountain.

Not long after the tide receded to Haimen, the sand pile rolled up when it left was as white as a snowdrift.

In a blink of an eye, I arrived at Haimen, and the rolled sand was like a snowdrift.

Langtaosha

Liu Yuxi

Jiuqu Yellow River and Wan Li Sand,

Waves and strong winds swept from the horizon.

Now go straight to the galaxy,

Go to Penny and Weaver's house.

The Yellow River winds in Huangsha, Wan Li,

The wind blows, the water moves, and the waves sweep the sediment away from the horizon.

Today I'm going to go straight to Tianhe along the Yellow River.

Take it to Penny's home.

5. Why did Liu Yuxi write Langtaosha Langtaosha?

Liu Yuxi

Jiuqu Yellow River and Wan Li Sand,

Waves and strong winds swept from the horizon.

Now go straight to the galaxy,

Go to Penny and Weaver's house.

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Annotation explanation

Langtaosha: Tang's name. Created by Liu Yuxi and Bai Juyi, the form is seven-character quatrains. Later it was used as a epigraph name.

Jiuqu: According to legend, the Yellow River has nine bends since ancient times. There are many places to describe twists and turns.

Wave erosion: Wave erosion.

Blow: Turn over.

Morning glory and Vega: the names of two constellations in the Milky Way. According to the ancient legend, the weaver girl is a fairy girl in the sky, who descended to earth and married the cowherd. After the Queen Mother of the West recalled the Weaver Girl, the Cowherd chased after the sky, and the Queen Mother of the West punished them across the river, allowing them to meet only once a year on the evening of July 7.

Modern Translation of Ancient Poetry

The Yellow River in Wan Li twists and turns with sediment, and the waves are rolling, like a huge wind from the end of the world. Now we can go directly to the Milky Way along the Yellow River. Let's visit the home of Cowherd and Weaver Girl.

Appreciation of famous sentences-"Now go straight to the Milky Way and go to Petunia and Weaver's house."

This quatrain expresses their yearning for a better life in the tone of gold diggers. Living by the river, the Tianhe River where Cowherd and Weaver Girl live is quiet and beautiful, but the gold diggers along the Yellow River are busy all day in the wind, waves and sediment. Go straight to the Milky Way, walk with the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, and place the yearning for a quiet pastoral life. This romantic ideal, expressed in heroic spoken language, is a simple and straightforward beauty.

6. It is a poem of Liu Yuxi to rewrite "Langtaosha" into prose "Langtaosha". This is a poem about the Yellow River. He praised the momentum and majesty of the Yellow River.

The Yellow River is the mother river and the birthplace and habitat of human beings. It gave birth to the civilization of human development.

Yellow River! Beautiful Yellow River, Great Yellow River, My Mother River. You are a dragon, a galloping dragon. You cut through the thorns all the way, crossing the waters of Qian Shan and heading for the sea. It has nurtured the indomitable spirit of the Chinese nation and cast the courage and wisdom of Chinese sons and daughters.

You are as kind as your mother, caring about every drop of water and everyone. You have maternal broadness, and you can tolerate all the complexities …

As Liu Yuxi wrote, "Now go straight to the Milky Way and go to Petunia and Weaver's house." That's great.

You have a broad mind like the sea, and you have a majestic momentum like the sea, just like Liu Yuxi's "The Yellow River bends nine times in Wan Li sand, and the waves sweep the wind from the horizon".

How I wish I could become a tree, take root on both sides of the Yellow River forever, and greedily suck the nutrition brought by the mother river.