The analysis stem specifies the object of analysis ("details") and the requirements of analysis (conciseness). As for what "details" to analyze, candidates need to judge according to their own experience. Generally speaking, it should be analyzed as follows: (1) What means of expression is used for this detail (by what means), indicating the specific name of the means of expression and related sentences involved; (2) What was shown and what effect was achieved. In the third paragraph, the details of catching drugs are written with a series of verbs, which are concise and without comparison, but truly reproduce the scene that the author "noticed" at that time, and it is most appropriate to summarize it with "sketch". Details (verbs) such as glancing, grasping, weighing, adding and subtracting mainly show the "quickness" of the characters, and "explaining a few words after writing" can better reflect their patience, carefulness and sense of responsibility. When marking papers, the "grading standard" is relaxed, and the "sketch" in the answer points (1) can also be graded with action description or detail description instead. Point (2) is not necessary.
The reference answer (1) shows their skillful skills and meticulous working attitude in grasping drugs through a series of actions such as "glance", "grasp", "weigh", "add", "subtract", "bag" and "tie". (2) Realistic representation of characters and related scenes in plain language.
12. In the fourth paragraph, what is the author's intention to associate with the name of the drug? (3 points)
Analysis of "intention" is roughly equal to writing intention, which needs to be grasped through analysis and synthesis of relevant contents in the text. The association caused by "vermilion realgar" involves the classic painters and their works in the history of Chinese painting, and the characters in ancient legends, all of which belong to traditional culture (therefore, the key point of the reference answer (1) is changed to "point out the relationship between the names of medicines and traditional culture" when marking the papers, which can bring people a sense of intimacy. "Hippocampus is like a small fish" reflects the author's pleasure of satisfying curiosity. Expanding association itself is a means to enrich writing content, and you can naturally get extra points for answering this point. As for deepening the content, there is some truth in opening the following paragraph, so give points as appropriate.
The reference answer (1) points out the connection between drug names and traditional graphics. (2) Show my curiosity and closeness to TCM. (3) Enrich the content of the article.
13. Why does it take more pen and ink to write "licorice"? (4 points)
To solve this problem analytically, we must first understand what this "more pen and ink" has written. (first of all) it is a sweet grass; (plus) "I" and this licorice are home; (also) can replace fruit candy to enjoy sweetness; (In this way) I grew up chewing licorice, chewed out the original flavor of licorice, and cracked all the passwords of licorice. Knowing this, we can figure out the author's intention. The author Gan Dianjiang himself answered this question. He said, "In a sense, licorice has become the most unforgettable taste and image of my childhood", which seems to be more literary than the summary in points (3) and (4) of the reference answer.
Reference answer (1) The surname of "I" is related to licorice, and it has a origin with licorice. (2) I grew up chewing licorice and have special feelings for licorice. (3) Ural licorice has a sweet taste, which reflects the fullness and happiness of "I" in that era. (4) Licorice has made me realize the true meaning of life.
14. Appreciate the underlined sentences. (5 points)
Analyzing "appreciation" means further appreciation and analysis on the basis of "understanding". Their ability level is different, but the basic way to solve the problem is the same, which involves the content and method of expression. The underlined sentences use rhetorical devices such as parallelism, metaphor (or analogy), which are artistic. The content of the expression is that from the perspective of "face", anything can be used as medicine; One emphasizes that "one person can be another person's Ganoderma lucidum" from the point of view. This person refers to another person in general, if it is understood as mother and me. When marking the paper, put the two points (2) and (3) of the answer point together for grading.
Reference answer (1) uses parallelism and metaphor to enhance artistic appeal. (2) Everything in the world can be used as medicine, which enriches the connotation of TCM. (3) Point out that everything has its own nature and uses. (4) Taking Ganoderma lucidum as a metaphor, the relationship between people is sublimated into an indispensable dependence.
15. At the end of the article, the author said: "Mother is an invaluable Chinese medicine in my life." Talk about your understanding of this sentence in connection with the full text. (5 points)
The analysis of "Talk about your understanding of this sentence" highlights that the proposer attaches importance to the author, the text and the reader, but the reader should also respect the author and the text, which can be unified. Specific to this question, any understanding of this sentence (theoretically, your understanding can be infinite) must start from the content of the original text. Mother is an invaluable Chinese medicine in my life. In the author's eyes, maternal love and Chinese medicine can be integrated into one, which can "clear away heat and detoxify for me and resist all kinds of harm in this world". Because of this, he felt the kindness of his mother. This sentence appears at the end of the article. What role will the sentences in this position play in the full text? This should also be considered. The key points (2) and (3) are evaluated together when marking papers.
Reference answer (1) My mother's "traditional Chinese medicine" flavor keeps me from being hurt by the world. (2) Like the pharmacology of traditional Chinese medicine, my mother's love and virtue comforted my soul and became my priceless spiritual wealth. (3) Vividly express my sincere feelings for my mother. (4) echo the topic and deepen the topic.