1. Taking "kindness" as the topic
Before I knew it, I had gone through sixteen years in a hurry. Time is like water, diluting some beautiful memories. And only the window of my heart that I opened with the kindness from the bottom of my heart was left.
Every day when I pass by that small attic, I will carefully admire the wall-covered ivy. I appreciate the green that remains unchanged throughout the seasons, the vigorous vitality, the naughty green buds looking for spring, the lively green branches waiting for spring, the chic green leaves welcoming autumn, and the traces of ink branches. Send the hope of winter.
The ivy all over the wall is intertwined into a tight net, and the old and lonely window is in it, like an eye that has experienced vicissitudes of life, and the gray curtain is also the The muddy tears blocked all the sunlight that belonged to the window.
Gently ringing the car bell, a thought-provoking picture appeared: an old man with white hair opened the window, his eyes full of surprise and excitement, but Immediately afterwards, I was filled with disappointment, helplessness and sadness. Then she lowered the curtains and closed the small window that was dotted among the greenery again.
I was shocked by the loneliness and bitterness of the old man. Poor old man, how much like my elderly grandma, who lives alone in an old house, and every time she comes home, she can see tears of bitterness on her face.
My kind grandma must be thinking about me at the door of the house right now, just like the old man in the window must be thinking about his children.
The setting sun hugs the treetops hard and refuses to leave for a long time. Is it waiting for something?
Ring the car bell again, give the old man in the window a bright smile, and sprinkle a touch of brilliant color. Without too many words, that window will open many times. Smiles and *** have become special greetings for me and the old man every day.
I used the small kindness in my heart to gently open the window of loneliness in the old man's heart, cut a pair of exquisite curtains, decorate the beauty, and let the sunshine shine into the heart of the old man.
Brief comment: The young author starts from his pure heart and triggers his sincere thinking on the social issue of caring for the elderly; through delicate description, he gently and tenderly conveys the sincerity and truth in his heart . The language is vivid and emotional.
Dreams of Kindness
Class 9 (4) Cao Qihui
Sit and watch the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court, and the flowers are buried with jade, full of affection, this is a kind heart Where; Li Jianying realized the greatest value of life in 16 seconds, this is where kindness lies; Cong Fei moved China with his love, which is where kindness lies.
Kindness is a supreme and true mentality that comes from the heart. Every kindness is a beautiful dream that moves people.
"Flowers fall and flowers fly all over the sky. Who will pity the red pin and its fragrant fragrance when it dies." Daiyu is beautiful and ill-fated, just like the flowers on the branches, they have the most brilliant beauty but also have the tragic ending of decline. Daiyu pities the flowers, walking lightly, carrying a flower bag and a jacquard hoe, gently picking up the fallen flowers, blowing off the mud, and storing their beauty underground. The petals floating into the water drifted further and further away in her sad eyes. It is this kind heart that brews a wonderful dream. The petals in the stream will flow into this beautiful dream, and it will be fixed in the scene of Daiyu burying the flowers.
"With a seven-foot body fighting in the sky, faith is more important than the body." Li Jianying resolutely chose the latter when faced with a 16-second life-or-death decision between parachuting and forced landing. Looking at the densely packed villages below, he bravely made a decision. Fortunately, the people's lives and property were saved. Unfortunately, our heroes were annihilated in the sky-high flames, but it was this fearless sacrifice that created our country. Brilliant military spirit. It was kindness that created such a great dream, and the fire in the sky confirmed the splendor of the dream, which was fixed in the scene where Li Jianying made an emergency landing.
“Cong Fei, the most charitable person, has never stopped loving.” Cong Fei, a great philanthropist who moved China. He donated all the proceeds from each performance to out-of-school children, and his love never stopped even after he learned that he was terminally ill. The moment he left, there was always a smile on his face. It is kindness that fills this evocative dream, and his peaceful smile is the heart of the dream. The dream is frozen in the scene where Cong Fei smiles all the time.
Goodness is the true feelings of Burying Flowers, kindness is the 16-second decision of life and death, kindness is the endless love of life. The world needs kindness, life calls for kindness, let kindness stay in our hearts forever, and build our dreams of kindness together.
Comments: The author uses his own understanding of "kindness" and combines it with every corner of real life. It can be said that it is highly realistic and has a certain depth. 2. Use "Smile" as the topic
When you see this topic, you must be surprised: Does a smile also have power? Of course there is, and the power is not small! If you don’t believe it, please listen to the story I tell you.
The curtain of a severely closed mind slowly opened, revealing an impression from a few years ago.
A little girl sat under a big banyan tree on campus and kept crying and crying, she was so sad. The desolate cries echoed in the deserted campus, which was so heart-wrenching. At this time, the teacher in a white dress, like a white fairy descending from the sky, walked gently towards the little girl and sat next to the little girl.
"Don't cry, don't cry. If you have anything to do, just talk to Teacher Zheng. Crying won't solve the problem." The little girl still lowered her head and said intermittently: "I, I passed the exam, then , so bad. Especially composition, so bad..."
After hearing this, the teacher smiled softly, and then said: "It's just because of this! Okay, try your best next time; if you can’t write well, please read more. No, the problem is solved!”
The little girl thought: Teacher Zheng has never lied to me. But is everything really as simple as Teacher Zheng said? She sobbed and looked up doubtfully.
Teacher Zheng’s beautiful long eyelashes flickered, and her watery eyes seemed to see through the little girl’s thoughts. She said in a voice as sweet as a silver bell: "When did Teacher Zheng lie to you?" After that, he showed a sweet smile, with two shallow dimples hanging on his face, which was very touching.
In an instant, a source of strength flowed through the little girl's body. The little girl felt that she had strength and decided to re-energize and move towards the composition base camp...
The one from back then The little girl is me. Because of Teacher Zheng’s encouraging smile, I began to love literature, and my composition level naturally improved. Although I came to Xiamen, Teacher Zheng’s earnest teachings still linger in my ears: There is no use crying, life is a long road, and there will be more ups and downs, so I should cheer up, face it, and move forward bravely! This will benefit me throughout my life. 3. Write short essays using couplets
The form of the couplets is neat, well-proportioned, distinct in rhythm, and harmonious in tone, making them easy to remember and recite; the couplets echo before and after, set off each other, are in sharp contrast, and the language is condensed, which can enhance the meaning of the language. Expressive, leaving a deep impression on readers.
In general writing, it is only required that the number of words is equal, the structure is the same, and the meaning is related. It does not necessarily have to be balanced. This is called wide pairing. The rhetorical form of antithesis is most common in poetry and couplets.
Classification
Duality can be roughly divided into three types:
1. Direct opposition: two angles and two sides of things explain the same thing, in content complement each other. Dual pairs in which the upper sentence and the lower sentence are similar, similar, complementary or contrasting in meaning are called direct pairs.
Example: The reeds on the wall are top-heavy and have shallow roots; the bamboo shoots in the mountains have sharp mouths, thick skin and hollow bellies.
2. Opposition: A dual sentence in which the two sentences before and after have opposite meanings is called opposition.
Example: With a cold eyebrow and a thousand fingers, he bows his head and is willing to be a Ruzi Niu.
3. String pair: also called continuous pair and running pair. The two sentences before and after it are related in meaning by coherence, cause and effect, conditions, transitions, etc. Such dual sentences are called string pairs.
Example: I drank water from the Yangtze River and ate Wuchang fish. The spring silkworm's silk will not be used up until it dies, and the wax torch will not dry until it turns to ashes.