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Topic: Read the following text and write as required.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the theme of the artistic conception or philosophy contained in Su Shi's book entitled "Hui Chong Chunjiang Xiaojing", "Peach blossoms outside the bamboo, duck prophet warms the spring river". The topic is self-made and the style is self-selected, except poetry.
Problem solving: Hui Chong, a famous monk in the Northern Song Dynasty, was good at painting and poetry. He painted the scene by the river, which is a picture of ducks playing. This poem was inscribed by Su Shi on the river scenery painted by Hui Chong. As one of the "Nine Poets" in the early Song Dynasty, Hui Chong is different from Su Shi. Su Shi only saw his paintings, but not his people.
Attachment: Title Hui Chong & gt[ Song] Written by Su Shi in the eighth year of Yuanfeng (1085).
Two or three peach blossoms outside the bamboo forest and ducks in the water first noticed the warm spring. The beach is covered with wormwood, asparagus is beginning to sprout, and puffer fish are preparing to swim upstream from the sea back to the river.
Artistic conception angle
"Peach blossoms outside the bamboo are three or two, and spring water warms the duck prophet". The author chooses four images: bamboo, peach blossom, river and duck. Start from the side and write about the earth's recovery in early spring. The bamboo forest has been dyed green by the new leaves. What is more striking is that three or two peach blossoms have already appeared on the peach trees, which are brightly colored and report the information of spring to people. Then, the poet's line of sight turned from the river to the middle of the river. Ducks who have been looking forward to the whole winter on the shore have already been unable to hold back, rushing to play in the water, feeling the "spring water heating" and enjoying the baptism of spring and the joy of nature. This poem is full of strong and fresh breath of life, full of vitality and interest. Express the author's expectation and yearning for the beautiful and charming spring. If you write a composition about the artistic conception of a given poem, it should conform to the style of the poem. And try to choose the style of narrative or prose, which can be realized by narrative, descriptive, argumentative and other expressions.
Philosophical perspective
A good poem with painting theme should not be limited to the content of the picture; We should not only be able to reproduce painting, but also jump out of painting, create new scenes and leave painting without losing its independent artistic life. Su Shi's poems can be said to have done this. In the second sentence, "water heating" emphasizes the "temperature" of the river when spring comes, while "Duck Prophet" emphasizes the "perception" of ducks who live in the water all the year round, indulge in the water and feel the changes of the river at any time. The "temperature" of the river and the "perception" of the duck cannot be drawn directly with a brush. But poetry can describe these details as picturesque, because painting belongs to visual art, while poetry is a language art, which has the advantage of absolute freedom in expression. These two poems not only write poetic early spring scenery, but also emphasize the practical spirit of "duck", which embodies the author's active investment and exploration spirit in life. That is, practice is the source of knowledge and tells people the importance and value of practice. It is best to choose the style of argumentative writing, so that the point of view is clear, the center is prominent and the arguments are strong.
Ideas:
1, the form of this topic is very novel, which requires the writer to carefully examine the topic and think in many ways. The examiner can grasp the hint in the stem of the question and expand the association and imagination according to the artistic conception in the poem: imagine that in the early spring, bamboo shoots break through the ground and form new green. Peach blossoms are in full bloom and everything is revived. Three or two branches, peach blossoms soon filled the garden, willow hanging green silk tapestries, full of vitality. Who doesn't appreciate, love and yearn for such beautiful scenery? According to this idea, you can write a picture of spring scenery, or you can write an essay that yearns for and yearns for spring, or loves and praises spring.
2. You can also make logical reasoning thinking according to the "Warm Duck Prophet" in the poem. Focusing on the "Prophet of Warm Duck by the River", this paper explores: Why do ducks predict warm water by the river? What are the instinctive habits of ducks? What is the living environment of ducks? Wait a minute. From the exploration, we know that ducks love water, live in water all the year round, and know the subtle changes of water like the back of their hands. Because of this, ducks have formed a certain understanding of water because of years of practice, that is, practice is the source of understanding. This idea can be written as a philosophical article. It can be that practice is the source of knowledge, and it can also emphasize the importance and preciousness of practice in life, study, work and scientific research.
Based on the above two points, when conceiving this composition, we must analyze the specific situation. There is no difference between the two ideas, just different positions. But as far as every idea is concerned, how to master and understand the content provided by the topic is very level.
Other examples:
It is raining in April, and sharp bamboo shoots have emerged in the dense green bamboo forest in front of the door. The slightly chilly spring breeze swayed through the bamboo forest, and the branches and leaves were rustled. Between the green gaps, there is a faint touch of charming red looming. It turns out that peach blossoms are in full bloom, and the red of peach blossoms is a vibrant color, scrambling to dress up the spring in April.
A strong wind blew, and the peach petals floated down with several bamboo leaves, and fell into Ying Ying Lake, rippling in the small whirlpool blown by the spring breeze. This festival, the lake is still cold, only a few playful ducklings on the lake decorate this landscape picture with falling bamboo leaves and peach blossoms.