Excerpts and appreciation of the reading notes of Yilin. Chinese teachers should always tell us that beautiful poems and paragraphs can be refined. More accumulation at ordinary times is conducive to improving our writing ability. Below I have compiled excerpts and appreciation of Yilin's reading notes, which are welcome for your reference.
Appreciation of Yilin's reading notes 1 1. Nothing in the world is more indifferent than a clock: at the moment of your birth, when you pick the flowers of your youthful dreams to your heart's content, it ticks every minute.
Gorky's clock
Appreciation: this sentence uses metaphor, symbol and personification to write the ruthlessness of the clock, reminding us to cherish time.
In autumn, people step on it and put it on their hair, and it seems to float on their shoulders intentionally or unintentionally. Is it bright gold and gold?
-Yu Guangzhong's "Left Hand Palmprint"
Appreciation: This sentence uses figurative rhetoric, comparing fallen leaves to gold, which is vivid.
3. Snow white is illusory and cold is sober. Endless momentum makes people feel difficult to breathe, and their hearts are cold and sour.
-Yu Guangzhong's "Listening to Cold Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses overlapping to express the phonological beauty of words and the Leng Yan and sadness of snow.
When the petals fall to the ground, they are still bright and dazzling, just like the feathers of a big bird being sacrificed to the altar and leaving with a heroic sad song.
-Zhang Kangkang's "Peony Rejected"
Appreciation: This sentence uses a figurative rhetorical device, comparing fallen flowers to feathers, which shows the outstanding charm of peony.
5. The orange-red house is like an old monk dressed in colorful cassock, with his head down and his eyes closed, being baptized by the rain.
-Zhang Ailing's Autumn Rain
Appreciation: this sentence compares the house to an old monk by metaphor and rhetoric, and writes about the calm and desolate house in the rain.
6. Time is like a sharp knife. If it is not used properly, it will carve deep lines on the beautiful face, so that the vigorous youth will be worn away month after month and year after year.
-Zhang Ailing's wish
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and symbolism to write his own view of time. Time is a knife, and life depends on how well you grasp it.
7, like a slap, bright red, bright red; Like a fan, flat; Like a blooming flower, it will never fade!
-"Autumn Leaves"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and parallelism to write the color, shape and posture of autumn leaves, showing the beauty of autumn leaves and autumn colors.
8, a few friends, drawing bamboo shadows by moonlight, you draw, I draw, the references are uneven, obviously furtive, a little bit of Chinese painting.
-Feng Zikai's Bamboo Shadow
Appreciation: A few strokes, writing scenes of several friends painting, humorous, concise and unique, full of the unique charm of Feng Zikai's works.
9. The sky is clear, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like a flowing river.
Appreciate: Use figurative rhetoric to compare flowers to rivers. The language is exquisite and appealing, and the words are full of love for tung flowers, which makes readers seem to see the beautiful scenery of tung flowers all over the mountains.
10, he looked up sadly. Stars float on the quiet lake like emerald lilies.
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor to describe the star very vividly, compares the star to a lily, highlights its cleanliness and purity, and compares the night sky to a lake, writing its calmness and beauty. However, under such beautiful scenery, I am dying, reflecting my regret.
Excerpts and appreciation of Yilin's reading notes 2 If you don't have the ability to clean up the mess, don't indulge in fickle emotions.
It only takes a minute to change your mood, but this minute can change the whole day.
A dish will cool if it is left for a long time; Love fades when it is far away.
Life is alive, if you sow a little arrogant contempt, you will reap a mountain of roadblocks; And if you sow a little humble respect, you will get an ocean of gratitude.
A simple soul is simple; Simple connotation is truth; Simple refuge is wisdom!
Law of Good Things: Everything will be good in the end. If it's not a good thing, it's not over yet.
I don't like traveling, and the beautiful scenery can't compare with your hair tips.
I used to think that persistence means never wavering, but now I understand that persistence means hesitation and retreat, but I am still moving forward.
Children without umbrellas must learn to run.
Facing the wind and rain, loneliness is accompanied by freedom.
Don't be eager to be nice to the person you like, but ignore whether he wants this kind of kindness.
The three illusions of life are: the mobile phone vibrates, and someone knocks at the door, thinking that he loves you.
Anyone can catch your eye, but only that special person can catch your heart.
Life is a buffet, you can't eat anything unless you take the initiative to take the food.
At the end of every dead end, there is another dimension of the sky. When there is no way out, it forces you to fly. This is a miracle.
There is a small world in everyone's heart. No one else can get in or out.
It's good to open your eyes at dawn and still be alive. Close your eyes and sleep in the dark. It's worth it
Those who are worse than me have not given up, and those who are better than me are still working hard, so I am even less qualified to say that there is nothing I can do!
It is better to shine in the dark than to stand in the sun.
Low-key is to live in your own world, high-key is to live in someone else's world.
Running taught me self-discipline, restraint, never giving up, till death do us part.
If she's great, she won't be so easy to chase. If she is easy to chase, she won't be great. If she is worth it, you shouldn't give up. If you give up, you are not worthy.
Excerpts and appreciation of reading notes of Yilin III. The courage to decide whether to win or lose.
When I was 5 years old, my father and I lived on an island called Cavite, which was outside Jebel Harbor. Without playmates my age, I can only play on the beach. Every morning, the first thing I wake up is to rush to the beach and search for the "gifts" that the waves brought me at night-a toy car without wheels, several plastic toy soldiers with no hands and feet, plastic balls and rubber balls of different colors, and so on.
One summer morning, I went to the beach again Far away, I suddenly saw a toy boat I had never seen before, with a white resin hull and transparent sails made of plastic plates. That's a perfect and beautiful toy!
Just as I ran to the boat excitedly, the waves of a ferry suddenly threw the boat into the sea. My heart suddenly tightened and I jumped into the sea without thinking, reaching for the boat and completely forgetting that I couldn't swim at all.
In the blink of an eye, the sea flooded my neck. Just when I felt some difficulty in breathing, a big wave came and I was swept in at once. I scratched my hands and kicked my feet desperately, trying to keep my head on a horizontal plane. However, the sea is deep and cold, and the current is very powerful. Gradually, I feel exhausted. In a trance, my body gradually sank to the bottom of the sea. ...
At this time, my father just walked out of the seaside cabin where we lived and saw me struggling for help in the sea at a glance. He immediately rushed into the sea as fast as he could and dragged my body out of the water. He dragged me all the way ashore and immediately gave me mouth-to-mouth resuscitation. After a while, I came to my senses, leaned down and "wow" spit out more than a dozen mouthfuls of seawater. I opened my eyes and saw my father. He really cried. I have never seen him cry so sadly, and since then.
The next day, I staggered out of the hut. The terrible experience of the previous day made me afraid of the beach. I am in the distance, staring at the beach that once brought me countless happiness. Just then, my father came over. He patted me on the shoulder and asked me to follow him to the seaside. The sea didn't reach my instep and knees, and my father held me in his strong hand. I feel my body floating in the sea. In this way, I quickly learned to swim. In order to exercise my courage, my father also took me to the breakwater on the island and asked me to try to jump. Although I knew the sea there was deep, I jumped with my father because I knew that I would land safely with him down there.
Gradually, I fell in love with the sea. Often, when I am struggling to paddle in the sea, my father will sit by the reef on the shore and look at me with a happy smile. He knew that I had completely walked out of the shadow of drowning accident and began to understand that difficulties and setbacks were actually an important part of life, which made people cherish hard-won success more.
Later, I got an art degree from the University of the Philippines. Now, I am a professional painter. Whenever I try to think about the expression of a work, I often swim in the sea and get inspiration from that feeling of freedom. At this moment, I always think of what my father said when he took me to the breakwater: "Believe in yourself. Son, you can do it! "