Many things in the world are closely connected: mountains are connected with mountains, water is connected with water, trees are connected with roots, and blood is connected with meat. Related composi
Many things in the world are closely connected: mountains are connected with mountains, water is connected with water, trees are connected with roots, and blood is connected with meat. Related composition
think about how the narrative part and the discussion part of this article are closely related. (Hint: we can think from three aspects: transition, convergence, echo before and after, traveling in the mountains and studying in the world.) Clearly, the transitional sentence "I regret that I can't enjoy traveling with you" is used between the two parts of the article, and the first sentence of the third paragraph "So I have a sigh" follows the above and leads the whole paragraph. Make the article coherent and natural. Another is that the words echo before and after, and the meaning is through. It is precisely because he visited the mountains on his way home to visit relatives, but he gave up halfway because he trusted his followers, lost all prosecutors, and failed to see the most wonderful thing of Baochan Mountain. The author regretted it and was emotional, thus realizing the dialectical relationship among "ambition", "strength" and "material"; It is precisely because of the incorrect pronunciation of "there is a monument and a servant's way", "flower" and "China" that the feeling that "scholars can't take it carefully without thinking deeply" is issued. The sentences with reference before and after reflect that narration is the foreshadowing for the discussion part, which makes the discussion part have a basis. The discussion part is the deepening of narration, and it is a philosophical feeling realized from concrete things. Another point is that the author compares learning to traveling in the mountains, and grasps the similarities between them: they must have indomitable will and a thoughtful and cautious attitude. During the tour, I summed up the profound truth that "the extraordinary view of the world is often far from danger" and "where there is a will, there is no way". So as to encourage themselves and readers to strengthen their ambitions on the road of studying, doing things and starting a business, give full play to their subjective initiative and climb the dangerous peaks with unlimited scenery.