It can be written as:
"The blue sky is like water, and the sky is clear in Wan Li. Is this a dream or an illusion? Jathyapple has floated into my eyes and integrated into my heart. "
Simply put, it is expanding sentences, expanding sentences.
But if you want to quote, you can change the sentence pattern on the basis of parallelism and repetition.
For example:
Is that the sound of a pipa? Even before she played, we could feel her feelings. (From Pipa)
Or the helpless voice of "saying yes"? (From a Song Yuan, I can't remember it clearly)
Or is my horse braying again and again? (Excerpted from Li Bai's Farewell to Friends)
Another silence of "no need to sing a song"? I don't remember where it came from. It's a poem anyway. )
There can be more changes, but it must be something similar, which is a bit hard to think about.
I am a junior high school student. If you are a high school student or even a college student, you should know more. Just bring it in yourself (* _ *).
In addition,
If the article wants to be archaic, you just need to reflect the archaism between the lines as much as possible, and you don't have to quote it.
The higher realm we are pursuing is just like the nocturne of E-Dasheng Tang Dynasty. Not one sentence is completely quoted, but every sentence is quoted from the classics, with allusions! If you can take advantage of this, you will be strong ~
I hope I can help you ~
2. How to write ancient poems with famous articles is the essence of China culture. It is a literary genre that reflects social life and expresses thoughts and feelings with highly concise language, rich imagination, strong sense of rhythm and rhythmic beauty.
It is the oldest and most basic literary form in the world. Famous sentences in ancient poetry are widely circulated and are outstanding literary essence.
Ancient poems and famous sentences that can be widely circulated from ancient times to the present are all cultural examples that have been honed, stood the test and accepted by people through the long river of history. The reason why it is enduring is not only because of its concise language and beautiful phonology, but also because it is worth learning from in terms of material selection, writing and skills.
From the content and materials, it can be divided into narrative, scenery description, lyricism, ambition and reason ... from the writing methods and skills, it can be divided into metaphor, emotional expression, exaggeration and realism ... It has its own characteristics and is not the same. In a sense, a poem is an outline of an article.
Therefore, the systematic training of ancient poetry and famous sentences is to contact and accumulate all kinds of writing materials and learn to master all kinds of writing methods and skills. The improvement of students' writing ability can be seen.
First, reading ancient poems and famous sentences, accumulating material articles, lack of nutrition and dryness are common problems of most modern students. The reason is that students lack accumulation.
You cannot make a silk purse out of a sow's ear. How can a student write beautiful articles without ink in his stomach? As the quintessence of ancient literature —— Famous ancient poems and sentences. Language has not only experienced many storms, but also has gorgeous rhetoric and rich content, such as writing scenery, taking notes, reasoning and so on.
It is the best material for students' language accumulation. With rich accumulation, there will be something to say and feelings to express.
As the saying goes, accumulation can make you rich. So I take advantage of the position where students collect honey books, and ask students to copy ten famous ancient poems and sentences every day for students to read and recite.
After a period of time, students have accumulated many famous sentences, laying a good foundation for practice. Second, the exchange of poetry and prose has been accumulated by students who practice writing. If they can't express and use it, it is equivalent to a blank sheet of paper, which has no meaning.
How to let students learn to express themselves? First of all, let the students understand the meaning of the famous ancient poems they read. In order to make students better understand the contents of famous ancient poems and sentences, teachers should expand the relevant contents of famous ancient poems and sentences, such as the author, writing background, the poet's mood at that time, allusions about famous ancient poems and sentences and so on. After students deeply understand its meaning, they can carry out multi-angle training.
1, the images in ancient poems and famous sentences are well-defined, but there are few descriptions of images, and there are still many gaps, including images and emotions. This provides rich writing materials for students' practice.
Teachers can use this as an organic supplement to students' compositions and practice writing selectively. When practicing writing, in order to make students understand poetry more deeply, teachers can provide students with rich information about famous sentences.
After students understand the connotation of poetry, let them practice, expand, rewrite and write their thoughts on a poem from various angles, so as to give students the freedom to exert their imagination. To some extent, it solves the problem of what students write.
In addition, it is necessary for students to expand the famous sentences of ancient poetry, which also reduces the difficulty of writing and avoids the phenomenon that students' sentences are not fluent. After long-term training, students will fly their imagination, be full of interest, enter the realm of poetry, feel their feelings and write beautiful articles.
2. Give the students a paragraph and let them sum it up with a famous ancient poem that they have accumulated. The coverage of students' exercises is getting wider and wider. It is difficult to adapt to the practice of other genres if we only stay on the basis of expanding the famous sentences of ancient poems.
To improve students' writing level and Chinese literacy, students should not only accumulate a large number of good words and sentences, but also learn to use them on the basis of understanding. Let the students sum up a period of training with the ancient poems they have learned, so that the students can understand how to use them.
Summarizing a passage from real life is actually telling students that we can use this famous saying under such circumstances. Over time, when students describe a picture, they will naturally think of this ancient poem sentence, avoiding lengthy and tedious narration and making students' exercises clear and concise.
3. The infiltration of methods can lead famous sentences in ancient poetry to be widely circulated, not only because of gorgeous and concise rhetoric and bright ideas, but also because of the author's superb writing methods and skills, which directly affect the charm of ancient poetry and the development direction of China literature. How to teach composition under the new curriculum, how to teach composition for the sake of teaching composition, how to let students "express freely" and how to let students express freely.
Writing methods and skills are indispensable. Every famous sentence in classical ancient poetry has its own unique expression.
A sentence is the unit of an article. It is of positive significance for students to carefully ponder the writing rules and skills of famous ancient poems and sentences and apply them to their own compositions. For example: 1, holding something to express your ambition "Once you climb to the top of the mountain, you will see that other mountains look short under the sky."
This poem comes from "Looking at Yue" written by Du Fu when he was about twenty-five. At that time, he was broad-minded and broad-minded.
Being at the foot of Yuelu Mountain and climbing to the top of Yuelu Mountain, his writing style is even more powerful. Although there is no "peak", the true colors of Mount Tai have fallen into the eye.
It expresses the poet's ambition to climb upward without fear of difficulties, and shows his indomitable character and lofty political ambition. Through learning, students can understand that they can express their aspirations and ambitions under the guise of things, which is very helpful to solve the disadvantages of students' straightforward composition and lack of implicit beauty.
2. Write a landscape: "The red river wins the fire at sunrise, and the riverside is as green as blue." This sentence vividly interprets the spring scenery in the south of the Yangtze River, highlights the bright colors of the river flowers and red and green rivers, and gives people a dazzling impression.
Among them, there are contrasts between the same color and different colors, which fully shows the author's good coloring skills. It can be seen that the article describing the scenery should grasp the characteristics of things, choose appropriately, and grasp the bright colors, which can be compared or contrasted, thus setting off the beauty of the scenery.
3. Lyricism by scenery often tells students that the description of the environment is a portrayal of the state of mind, and the feelings of * * * can be expressed with the help of scenery. But when students operate by themselves, it is the return of feelings and things. And the names of ancient poems.
3. Write a composition with ancient poems at dusk.
The bright moonlight is like a gauze. At this moment, wearing a straw hat, straw hat is still on, staring at the brightly lit window for a long time … in a short time, it becomes a bright moon.
When I was standing in the bushes, clutching the bamboo flute in my hand and dancing ... Listen-who played the melodious flute so cheerful and soft, and two little feet swayed on both sides of the cow's back. It was a trot all the way. It turned out that the flute player was a shepherd boy who came home late on a strong cow and didn't even take off his coir.
I followed quietly, found a flat place, yawned, and he was still wearing that green hemp fiber; In the faint moonlight. Weeds danced gently-in the vast green grass on a moonlit night, gently covering the quiet field, with a slender thatch in his mouth, he came to that field again; A little shy, but with a hint of joy, I am tired, too. I stretched myself, and as the breeze echoed on the Yuan Ye, the child walked out at a brisk pace. He wore hemp fiber and returned to a thatched cottage by the stream.
As soon as I walked in, I shuttled through the forest, just like an excellent magician, so I lay down and rested, and fell asleep not far from him ... The rooster began to sing, changed himself gently, put on the small straw hat, and the sun gently fell into the arms of the mountains.
4. How to use ancient poetry in writing, as the ancients often said, "There are poems in the belly."
Classical poetry contains profound cultural background and emotional resources. The clever use of ancient poetry can activate language expression, highlight the inside story of the article, and make the article exude a strong bookish and cultural atmosphere. This is undoubtedly an effective and convenient way to "shine" and "innovate" the college entrance examination composition.
Then, how to use ancient poetry to add luster to your college entrance examination composition? First, the wonderful quotation of famous ancient poems is the most common way in college entrance examination composition, which is divided into partial quotation and full quotation. (1) partial quotation.
It is to quote the famous sentences of classical poetry in the local position of the article, such as title, inscription, first paragraph, end of the article and so on. These places are located in prominent positions, which are easy to attract readers' attention and leave a good impression on readers.
Quoting ancient poems and famous sentences in the title of an article can make the title look elegant and literary, and play a dazzling and inspiring role. For example, in 2003, Fujian examinee's Moonlight at Home in how bright! Citing Du Fu's famous sentences as the topic not only closely follows the composition topic of "emotional closeness and cognition of things", but also expresses more charm; In 2004, the Fujian examinee A Storm in Ren Pingsheng quoted Su Shi's Ding Fengbo as the title, which not only closely related to the selected historical figures, but also showed the theme of the article, and wrote Su Shi's open-mindedness and detachment, which can be described as "killing two birds with one stone".
Embedding poems at the beginning of the article can make the language concise and incisive, let commentators immediately "peek" at the author's cultural accumulation and humanistic accomplishment, and leave a good first impression. For example, in 2004, Shaanxi examinee "Looking for a Happy and Beautiful Life" began: "Walking on the path with fallen leaves in autumn, I couldn't help singing:' There are endless leaves rustling and endless sadness rolling in.
Lament the sadness and misfortune of fallen leaves. In fact, the life of falling leaves may be like this, just asking for spring and colorful autumn colors.
In another way of thinking, Gong Zizhen once said,' Falling in love is not heartless, but turning into spring mud will protect flowers more'! We should rejoice and enjoy the colorful autumn scenery. Starting from the scene, Du Fu's "Fallen leaves fall like a waterfall, but I think the long river always rolls forward" naturally leads to the association of fallen leaves, and then quotes Gong Zizhen's famous sentence to properly interpret the connotation of the philosophical topic "Happiness and our way of thinking".
This treatment makes the article appear profound and poetic from the beginning, thus avoiding the boring "straight to the point" reasoning. Quoting classical poetry at the end of the article has the effect of making the finishing point, enlightening people, subliming the theme, and receiving endless expression effects, which makes readers hide their thoughts and have endless aftertaste.
For example, in 2004, Fujian candidates' "Looking at the sea and relying on the sky" ended: "You can't see how the water of the Yellow River went out of heaven and entered the ocean, never to return, how lovely it was locked in a bright mirror in a high room, although it was silky black and turned into snow at night." Time flies like water, time flies like electricity. Perhaps, only history can fill the inscription on the tombstone without words, and perhaps, only history can best interpret Zeng Guofan's words that he wrote down his life's mood when he wanted to add himself to the capital of heaven: leaning on the sky shines countless flowers on the sea, and flowing water knows himself.
The three quotations are apt and natural, which makes the article colorful, well-founded and profound, and gives a dialectical and profound evaluation to Zeng Guofan, a historical figure. It is really a beautiful and powerful "leopard tail". (2) Full text citation.
It refers not only to a large number of citations in the whole paragraph, but also to a large number of citations in all paragraphs of the full text. Due to the profound cultural accumulation of classical poetry, a large number of allusions from many places will greatly enhance the cultural taste and aesthetic taste of the article and enrich the inside story of the article.
The whole paragraph is quoted as: "What is loneliness? Once upon a time, there was Li Bai's "Until, holding up my cup, I asked the bright moon to bring me my shadow and make us three". Perhaps, loneliness is the feeling of being inseparable when the moon is bright and the wind is like water. Once upon a time, Li Houzhu lamented that' the bright moon is like a hook, and the solitary phoenix tree locks the deep courtyard in the clear autumn'. Perhaps, loneliness is a deep palace courtyard, and the country is worried about the family and the people. Once upon a time, Chen Ziang lamented: "Before me, where did all those lost times go?" ? Behind me, where are the future generations? I think of heaven and earth, there is no limit, there is no end, I am alone, tears fell down. Perhaps, loneliness is an empty state of mind in which the grass remains the same, the horizon remains the same, and things are transformed! So, I, asking for the moon, the Chang 'e of Guanghan Palace, told me that loneliness is the "clear sky and clear night heart" of "the shadow of the mica screen is deep, and the long river is gradually falling into the morning star". What is loneliness? I can't answer that. "
-The first paragraph of the excellent composition "The Meaning of Loneliness" in 2000 college entrance examination quoted five famous sentences, which, as the carrier of emotion and justice in the article, endowed "loneliness" with profound cultural connotation, which not only added bright colors to the article, but also enhanced the persuasiveness and appeal of the argument, making the article rich in connotation, full of elegant poetry and rich humanistic atmosphere. However, but toward which corner of the mountain, an excellent composition cited in the whole article of Sichuan College Entrance Examination in 2003, can be regarded as a model essay.
Based on Su Shi's famous sentences, this paper implicitly deduces the title of the composition "Love and familiarity, cognition of things". Then quote Cui Hu's poem "Last year today, at this gate, peach blossoms set each other off. Peach blossoms still smile at the spring breeze when people don't know where to go, which naturally leads to an understanding of the relationship between emotion and cognition and establishes the theme of the article; Then, along the first paragraph, I quoted Li Qingzhao's Dream (last night's rain scattered and the wind blew suddenly), Du Fu's Song of Autumn Wind Breaking the Cottage, Su Shi's Niannujiao Chibi Nostalgia, and Du Mu's Chibi to further elaborate the theme from several angles, which is vivid and rational. Finally, the full text concludes with Su Shi's "I don't know the true face of Lushan Mountain".
Throughout the whole text, the proper quotation and embedding of classical poems make philosophical thinking and emotional expression profound and profound, and make the article have a high cultural taste. Second, cleverly set up the structure of ancient poetry. Ancient people wrote poems and essays, and they were very disciplined. Every poem has its own complete writing structure and writing context. In addition, ancient poems are concise and harmonious in sound and rhyme. Using ancient poems and essays to lay the writing structure of the article can not only make the article coherent and rigorous, but also give people an elegant and beautiful feeling and impress readers in the shortest time.
At this point, the excellent composition "Pipa Star's Parents Have Feelings" in Hunan College Entrance Examination in 2004 was done very well.
5. How to apply poetry to composition, which can be used when describing scenery; Can be used when expressing exclamation; It can be used to summarize the central idea of the article.
Show ambition with things, praise people with things. To sum up, in a word, only by reading more and remembering more and understanding the meaning can we not fall to the point of "using the book as soon as it is used".
For example, an online composition: North. winter
String moon. Neon.
The first snow began to drift away. Sitting alone behind the curtain of the snow fog, listening to the sound of snow falling.
The falling dead leaves were quickly covered with snow, disappeared like a grain of dust and sank with my memory. It seems that every winter is spent like this, curling up in my warm cabin, lighting a curling lamp, listening to music, drinking steaming tea, reading my favorite books and watching the wind, frost, rain and snow slide past the window year after year.
I would like to live in my castle like this and watch the years pass quietly, like water. I don't know if the traces of time are hung on my face and engraved in my heart.
I know that one day, my eyes are no longer as clear as snowflakes. After years of heavy snow, will you still remember the woman behind the snow and the heart of the past as snow?
Looking up at the pedestrians on the road, everyone is in a hurry. The solstice of winter has not yet arrived, and the cold at this moment is not biting. I think a person walking on the road, looking at the leaves that will not fall, will make me feel a little sad, feel the warmth of home, and involuntarily speed up my steps.
Reminds me of the ancient poem "Chai Men smells dogs barking, and the snow at night returns to people". Thinking of this, I can't help laughing, not at others, but at myself.
Sitting in the room all day thinking, vague, many scenes have never been experienced and will never be realized, but inexplicably familiar and frightened. As if I had wings in my heart, I flew around for me through time and space.
It turns out that imagination can be so real or so absurd. I suddenly remembered an old song many years ago: put away your emotions, leave your memory blank, forget the past you once had, and never say love again ... I like these naive old songs, and all my troubles were solved in a few words.
How many words can be realized in the ethereal promise of that year? I don't know and I can't prove it. All I know is that it will never bring the slightest excitement or dizziness, just like fireworks in the night sky. Beauty only belongs to her for a moment, the wind blows away, the prosperity is gone, and everything is empty.
Moonlight and snow shadow rolled into the window, sprinkled on the table by the window, sprinkled on my forehead, and nourished my soul. Fingertips danced again, pouring out her loneliness.
This is just a game and a dream. Only the rules of this game are impermanent. This dream can see the other side, but can't swim. This play is wonderful. It should be staged when it should be staged, and it should end when it should be finished.
This game is very helpless, from clear to fuzzy, from spring flowers to autumn dew. Like a wisp of wind, a Jing Xue, ups and downs at will, I don't know where to go, I don't know where to go.
"Speak, speak; What's the hurry between going and coming? " Mr. Zhu Ziqing's "Hurry" made me sigh. It turns out that everything is doomed to be in a hurry, and I will never catch up with it. Poetry is a flower that never dies in the field of literature and a colorful treasure.
She has an intriguing unique style-free and easy poetry, implicit poetry, elegant poetry, gloomy poetry, bold poetry, graceful poetry ... Poetry is the essence of literature and the epitome of life. Poetry expresses ambition.
Because poetry itself focuses on reflecting the poet's character and ambition, the taste of poetry depends more on the value of the ambition expressed in the poem. Both Cao Cao's "Short Songs" and Lu You's "The Book of Wrath" reflect Cao Cao's mood of accepting talents in order to realize the political ideal of reunifying China, or express the author's feelings of vowing to serve the country.
No wonder Mr. Zhu Ziqing praised "expressing ambition through poetry" as a "pioneering program" in our poetry circle. Poetry is beautiful because of emotion, and poetry is often deeply attached to the realm of poetry. As the saying goes, "Poetry takes emotion as poetry, emotion is sad, and emotion is happy."
Whether it is Du Fu's Ascending the Mountain or Gong Zizhen's Poems on the Sea, the former expresses the poet's complex feelings of long-term wandering, old illness and loneliness, while the latter shows the poet's optimistic thoughts before opening up the atmosphere. There are countless examples of this, which shows that "the job of poetry should be to express emotions."
Everyone loves reading poetry. Reading poetry focuses on understanding poetry. Only when you taste with your heart and feel with your feelings can you truly appreciate the extraordinary rhyme! In my opinion, spring is the beginning of all seasons. From spring and summer to autumn and winter, year after year, cycle after cycle.
"If winter comes, can spring be far behind?" Whenever it comes to the last season of the year-winter, I will think of this sentence and eagerly look forward to the arrival of spring. I like spring. In spring, everything recovers, and the grass grows more and more lush, showing a thriving and vibrant scene everywhere. From a distance, it feels light green. When you look closer, you can't see any green. This is probably what Han Yu said, "The grass is green from a distance." I like spring. Spring represents green, but green represents vitality and vigor, represents vigorous vitality and represents the coming of spring. I like spring. I always feel comfortable when the misty spring rain falls from the sky. Especially after the spring rain, the air was fresh and the rainbow smiled. There is an agricultural proverb about sunny rain forecast in China, like "The first day falls, the second day falls, the third day falls, and the third day falls." & gt As the beginning of the four seasons, spring is bound to reappear in front of us with a brand-new look.
If you want to write a poetic article well, you must: 1. Select carefully. The essence of the accumulation of ancient poetry is well said: "Reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "accumulating thin hair." Only by accumulating rich language materials can we "accumulate thick and thin hair" and "write like a god".
However, we find that in the process of "accumulation", especially in the new curriculum standards, Chinese accumulation is strongly advocated to improve students' Chinese literacy, and many teachers begin to name good words, sentences and famous paragraphs.