"What a sad atmosphere!" Dong can't help but sigh.
"Dong Xiong walk slowly!" At this time, there was a cry behind Dong. He turned around and saw that it was his good friend Gao Shi. Gao Shi took Dong by the hand and pulled him into a nearby "Fulai Inn".
"Xiao er, serve wine!" The normal university shouted to the bartender, "Give us a pot of good daughter red and let's have a good drink!" " "Gao Shi took Dong's hand and smiled and said," Brother Dong, you see the weather is really bad today. It is snowing in Huang Yun. I think you'd better go tomorrow! "
"yes! The north wind is blowing geese and it is snowing heavily. Actually, I don't want to go! However, I can't leave! "
"Why?"
"Because I play the guqin without a bosom friend, now everyone loves to listen to Le Hu. What's the use of me staying here?" Dong let out a long sigh again.
"So you are the famous guqin master Dong! I like listening to your guqin. You play the guqin much better than Le Hu. Last time you played guqin for all of us in Huangchenggen, we really enjoyed it! " At this time, the wine guarantee sent a pot of daughter red, and when I heard their conversation, I was surprised to say.
"Yes, Dong Xiong, Xiao Er is right. You used to be a famous Guqin teacher. Without your intimate friends, you shouldn't worry about the road ahead. You know, people all over the world appreciate you! In fact, some people seem to like music tigers on the surface, but that doesn't mean they don't like guqin in their hearts! " Gao Shi stopped Xiao Er and continued to persuade him.
After listening to Gao Shi and Xiao Er, Dong nodded thoughtfully: "Thank you for your words, I have already figured it out! By the way, brother Gao, what are your plans in the future? "
Gao Shi raised his glass: "Come on, Dong Xiong, let's drink three cups!" " "
It's snowing harder outside. Dong told Gao Shi that he planned to go back to his hometown and live an ordinary life. Gao Shi said that he wanted to walk around, see all the famous mountains in the world, and write poems and draw pictures.
It was getting late, and when they left the Fulai Inn, they saw Dong riding a big horse. Gao Shi can't help but feel a tight heart. He grabbed Dong's skirt and said sadly, "It's still different to send you a thousand miles away. Let me give you a poem! Take care of yourself! " After that, he recited this well-known poem "Don't Move Big" loudly: "Thousands of miles away in Huang Yun, the sun is shining, and the north wind is blowing geese and snow. Mochow has no confidant in the road ahead, and no one in the world knows you. "
After listening to Dong's words, my nose turned sour and a stream of tears came down. He quickly waved his whip and said to Gao Shi, "Take care!" I rode away at a gallop.
Huang Yun is densely covered in the sky. With the sound of hooves, there is only dim light on the ground.
Comments: This composition, which rewrites ancient poems, vividly writes the scene of the poet Gao Shi saying goodbye to his good friend Dong in the form of stories. The sentences are beautiful and the artistic conception of ancient poems is far away, which is worth our careful taste.
2. Urgent: Huang Yunlong, thousands of miles away, shines on the earth. Even during the day, the sky is yellow, just like the north wind whistling to my sad mood, and the geese flying south are even more desolate. It was snowing heavily, and Dong Dayuan and I were thousands of miles away in Huang Yunlong. Even in the daytime, the sky is yellow, just like my sad mood.
The whistling north wind, the geese flying south. It is even more desolate.
Goose feather and heavy snow fell in succession, falling on me and Dong Da. Dongda is my best friend, and now he is going to other places. I am sad.
Dong Da said to me, "Brother Gao, we are leaving today. I can't bear to leave because I have my best friend here. When he said this, Dong Da couldn't help crying.
"Good brothers, men don't cry. However, we don't know when and when we can get together again.
""Good brothers, all good things must come to an end. It will take a long time to send you! " Dong Da nodded, thought of something, but swallowed it again.
Gao Shi said, "If you have something to say, just say it. Is there anything between our brothers? " "Well, I'm afraid I'll feel lonely without you after I'm gone. When I am in trouble, who can I share my troubles with? You But it is possible that we will never see each other again after I leave. "
"Ken, you should learn to take care of yourself. Don't worry. There are no friends on the road ahead. Who doesn't know your name? Well!' "Brother Gao, take care!" "Take care of yourself first!" Since then, Gao Shi has done >; In this poem, "Mochow has no confidant in the future, and everyone in the world is not a gentleman." These two sentences are familiar throughout the ages. . .
3. Rewrite the poem Don't Move Big into a short narrative, paying attention to the time and place. Huang Yun is thousands of miles away, and it looks bleak during the day. The north wind blows, geese fly south, and snowflakes roll down the ground one after another, spreading a layer of white on the ground.
Dongda is leaving. Gao Shi came to see Dong Da off.
Dong Avenue: "Brother Gao, I'm leaving. I am lucky to meet a friend like you here. I don't know if I will meet a bosom friend like you on the road. "
Gao Shi said: "Don't worry about not having intimate friends on the road in the future. Who doesn't know you in the world? " It was my honor to be your bosom friend at that time. "
Dong Da said, "Actually, it is my pleasure to be your bosom friend. It's still my pleasure to be with such a great poet as you. Don't stay up late to write poems after I leave. People should pay attention to their health. "
After Dong Da finished playing, he took out the piano and played a wonderful tune for Gao Shi.
Dong Da rode away after playing music. Gao Shi wiped the tears from her cheeks and wrote a poem to bid farewell to Neusoft:
Don't move, Tang Gaoshi.
A thousand miles away in Huang Yun,
The north wind blows goose feathers and heavy snow one after another.
Mochow has no bosom friend.
Everyone in the world doesn't know you.
After seeing this poem, Dong Da wrote a letter to Gao Shi. The content is:
Thank you, brother Gao. Thank you for seeing me off. I wrote this poem.
It rained lightly in the morning, and the dust on the road was washed down, and the willow trees beside the hotel were washed more beautifully by the rain.
Look at Yuanji. The emperor's minister came to Yuan Er's house and read the imperial edict: "The emperor said that he is proud to send you to Anxi now." Yuan Erdao: "Thank you, Emperor." Yuaner's relatives were in tears, and his wife said, "I don't know how long Yuaner's trip will last. Only when Yuaner went to the embassy did I know how long this time was. Hey! " I wonder how long it will take Yuaner to go back and forth. Only when Yuaner goes once will I know how many kilometers he will walk. When Yuaner was separated from his relatives, all his relatives said, "Be sure to take care outside!" Say that finish, Yuan Er went away and never looked back.
I rode a horse and soon came to the acropolis and had a drink with Yuaner. Yuaner had a drink, and I said, "Good friend, I want to cry when I recall when we played together as children!" " "Yuan Er said," Be a man and stop crying! " I gave him a second glass of wine. . At the end of the last glass of wine, I said, "My friend, after finishing this glass of wine, you will never have any old friends with deep friendship after you walk out of Yangguan." When we parted, I said, "Take care!" Yuan Er rode to Anxi without looking back. . .
I suddenly felt a pain and tears blurred my vision. I thought to myself, "Yuaner, I wish you a safe journey." There is a breeze blowing outside. ..
5. Don't rewrite 400 words of modern Chinese in Down's University, but rewrite prose in Down's University: One day in the Tang Dynasty, Dong, a master of guqin, left Chang 'an in the palace and walked into a mountain forest in the outer suburbs.
The west wind blows, a flock of geese scream alone, Huang Yun rolls in the sky, and heavy snow falls in succession. "What a sad atmosphere!" Dong can't help but sigh.
"Dong Xiong walk slowly!" At this time, there was a cry behind Dong. He turned around and saw that it was his good friend Gao Shi. Gao Shi stepped forward to hold Dong's hand and grabbed him.
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6. Don't rewrite big ~ ~ Don't rewrite big
Author: Chen Min, Grade 5, Nantong Ancient City Primary School, Minhou.
One day in the Tang Dynasty, Dong, a guqin master who was left out in the palace, left Chang 'an and went to a mountain forest in the outer suburbs. The west wind blows, a flock of geese scream alone, Huang Yun rolls in the sky, and heavy snow falls in succession.
"What a sad atmosphere!" Dong can't help but sigh.
"Dong Xiong walk slowly!" At this time, there was a cry behind Dong. He turned around and saw that it was his good friend Gao Shi. Gao Shi took Dong by the hand and pulled him into a nearby "Fulai Inn".
"Xiao er, serve wine!" The normal university shouted to the bartender, "Give us a pot of good daughter red and let's have a good drink!" " "Gao Shi took Dong's hand and smiled and said," Brother Dong, you see the weather is really bad today. It is snowing in Huang Yun. I think you'd better go tomorrow! "
"yes! The north wind is blowing geese and it is snowing heavily. Actually, I don't want to go! However, I can't leave! "
"Why?"
"Because I play the guqin without a bosom friend, now everyone loves to listen to Le Hu. What's the use of me staying here?" Dong let out a long sigh again.
"So you are the famous guqin master Dong! I like listening to your guqin. You play the guqin much better than Le Hu. Last time you played guqin for all of us in Huangchenggen, we really enjoyed it! " At this time, the wine guarantee sent a pot of daughter red, and when I heard their conversation, I was surprised to say.
"Yes, Dong Xiong, Xiao Er is right. You used to be a famous Guqin teacher. Without your intimate friends, you shouldn't worry about the road ahead. You know, people all over the world appreciate you! In fact, some people seem to like music tigers on the surface, but that doesn't mean they don't like guqin in their hearts! " Gao Shi stopped Xiao Er and continued to persuade him.
After listening to Gao Shi and Xiao Er, Dong nodded thoughtfully: "Thank you for your words, I have already figured it out! By the way, brother Gao, what are your plans in the future? "
Gao Shi raised his glass: "Come on, Dong Xiong, let's drink three cups!" " "
It's snowing harder outside. Dong told Gao Shi that he planned to go back to his hometown and live an ordinary life. Gao Shi said that he wanted to walk around, see all the famous mountains in the world, and write poems and draw pictures.
It was getting late, and when they left the Fulai Inn, they saw Dong riding a big horse. Gao Shi can't help but feel a tight heart. He grabbed Dong's skirt and said sadly, "It's still different to send you a thousand miles away. Let me give you a poem! Take care of yourself! " After that, he recited this well-known poem "Don't Move Big" loudly: "Thousands of miles away in Huang Yun, the sun is shining, and the north wind is blowing geese and snow. Mochow has no confidant in the road ahead, and no one in the world knows you. "
After listening to Dong's words, my nose turned sour and a stream of tears came down. He quickly waved his whip and said to Gao Shi, "Take care!" I rode away at a gallop.
Huang Yun is densely covered in the sky. With the sound of hooves, there is only dim light on the ground.
Comments: This composition, which rewrites ancient poems, vividly writes the scene of the poet Gao Shi saying goodbye to his good friend Dong in the form of stories. The sentences are beautiful, and the artistic conception of ancient poems is far away, which deserves our careful taste.
Instructor: You Peijian
Transfer from: 51 composition network