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Mona Lisa is just a painting, but behind the gentle expression is the beauty that has been precipitated for thousands of years; Elizabeth lived in the palace, but turned the brilliance of human nature into supreme beauty. It's not just the beauty's smile that amazes the world; It's not just the invincible youth of handsome teenagers that penetrates the paper. Living individuals and faces of different shapes constitute our family, our class, our city, our country and our earth.
Countless points continue into slender lines; Countless lines expand into a broad plane. Life is colorful, because life is made up of all kinds of people. It is these ordinary lives that make up our colorful humanity and life.
Immaculate jade is the vitality of this tree. Yushu, a place name that was once far away from our daily life, entered the inner world of thousands of ordinary people in Qian Qian because of a sudden earthquake. In my inner world, Yushu is associated with an ordinary driver, Ah Fu. Ah Fu is not handsome, nor does he have lofty sentiments and financial ability to spend a lot of money. He is just one of thousands of people who are busy with their lives. But just after the Yushu earthquake, he joined the rescue team without hesitation. He saved the lives of old people and children with rough hands, but his life is always fixed on the photos of young people smiling. In the most precious course of his life, he was concerned about the safety of his parents and his wife and children, but with great love for his motherland and Tibetan children, he wrote the best hymn with his life.
Nalan Rong Ruo, an extremely clever and strange woman. She is Manchu, but she is proficient in Chinese language and culture. Only half a year after Manchu entered the customs, she conquered the prickly people of Han nationality with her own wisdom and became an emissary to communicate Manchu-Chinese culture. Soldiers are not good at fighting since ancient times. Nalan Rong Ruo mediated between Han Chinese and Manchu, and gained the peace and prosperity of the country with a woman's tolerance.
Maybe you don't have extraordinary wisdom, amazing beauty, outstanding background and special opportunities … but you can also add new colors to ordinary life. Maybe a tolerant smile can resolve a fierce conflict, or maybe a small concession can make a child's little face smile. Please give more to the world and make everyone living here happy.
Two people followed, three people crowded. This world is not your own, but everyone's. You are not a lonely person, because everyone is behind you, and you are not a lonely point, because many points together are a long line and a wide face. As long as everyone pays a little love, the world will become a beautiful world. With love, countless points are piled into lines and connected into surfaces.
● Score: 56
● Comments: The author of this article is extraordinary, from the amazing Mona Lisa and Elizabeth to ordinary people. Whether a beauty or a mortal is a point, it is these points that build a colorful life. Then, taking drivers Afu and Nalan Rong Ruo as examples, it is vividly explained that no matter what kind of point you are, as long as there is love in your heart, you can connect the points into a long line and a wide surface, and finally converge into an ocean of love.
● The material is expanded to highlight the theme. The young author is quite ingenious in selecting materials, crossing ancient and modern times and across time and space. There are both beautiful and outstanding "points" like Elizabeth and Nalan Rong Ruo, and ordinary "points" like driver Alfred, which are quite representative. However, the material is not rich enough. If the case of Mother Teresa is supplemented with the information of many ordinary volunteers who participated in the Wenchuan earthquake and the World Expo Olympic Games, the writing will be more substantial.