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Angle 1: Look at the scenery and feel. Fly away from "lonely clouds" and "returning birds", thinking that you have been trapped for a long time; As the sun sets, I think of my old age. Associating nature, lyric is true and natural.
Angle 2: Contrast. The traveling speed of Yunniao is in contrast with the staying time, which expresses the deep yearning for hometown.
Angle 3: Bi Xing. The first couplet and the neck couplet are both prosperous and comparable, Lonely Cloud.
Returning to the Birds not only arouses nostalgia but also compares itself. Before sunset
Lead to old age, but also compare yourself with the sunset, reflecting the loneliness of leaving home and the sadness of getting old. (Just answer metaphors. )
Angle 4: The scenes are written separately, with distinct levels. One is to write three landscapes, and the other is to write four lyricism. If you write alternately, the poems will be divided.
It takes two steps. First, the sight of sunset clouds flying away and flying birds evokes homesickness, and then the scene of sunset clouds coming back to life evokes the surprise before death, which is wonderful. (65438+ 0 points for correct skills, 2 points for fluent language expression when analyzing combined poems)
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Test analysis: This poem is a work of wandering homesickness. The poet grasped the characteristics of the scenery at sunset in autumn and wrote his subtle and complicated ideological activities at this moment. First, "bow your head" and look at the clouds and see birds flying, touching homesickness and resentment; To "overlook" the afterglow of the sunset will aggravate the feeling of homesickness, and then lead to the deep sadness of old age. This poem has scenery and feelings, and the scenery and feelings are highly unified and integrated. The language is clear as words and has strong generalization.
Test center: evaluate the ideological content of the article and the author's viewpoint and attitude. The ability level is appreciation evaluation D.
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Test analysis: the writing of the scene is indeed a major feature of the layout of this poem. This writing has a special artistic effect on this poem. After careful consideration, we can find that this poem is quite ingenious. The whole article is about the feeling of "overlooking the sunset". Two sentences are written alternately, and the poem is divided into two steps: first, watching the clouds before sunset evoke homesickness, and then watching the return of the sunset evoke the "surprise" of old age, which shows the development and deepening of emotion. Regardless of the meter, the poem can be slightly reversed: "Lonely clouds return to birds, a thousand miles of time. Trees in the sun burn to the mountains in autumn. Think of me staying and leaving home for a long time. I dare not take pictures in the water for fear that I will be scared. " So the scene in the first half and the emotion in the second half, which is also the usual way of writing, are a bit dull and have no advantage of progressive and vivid. But anxious to return, because of the urgent need to stay at home, followed by his long time away from home, is both natural and comparable to speed (thousands of miles) and late (staying long), detached and muddy. If you change to the first half of the scene and the second half of the emotional mode (as mentioned above), you will lose this benefit again.
The images of hidden characters in refined Chinese characters are vivid, and the lonely clouds, the returning birds, the sunshine and the autumn mountain create a bleak autumn night, which entrusts the author with sad feelings. The use of the word "burn" is static and dynamic; The word "far" also shows the emptiness of artistic conception and enhances the expression of loneliness.
Test center: appreciate the image, language and expression skills of literary works. The ability level is appreciation evaluation D.