1 childhood
When I was young, childhood was a shallow footprint. Innocence is in it, and happiness is there. Older, childhood is a grand piano. Interest is at this end and efforts are at that end. When you grow up, childhood is a sweet dream. Grow up in your heart and bear the burden on your shoulders. Later, childhood was a small photo. Immature inside, mature outside.
Appreciation: Time series words such as "when I was a child", "when I was older", "when I grew up" and "later" run through the whole poem. The abstract childhood is embodied by footprints, piano, dreams, photos and other objects, which summarizes the author's wonderful childhood life. The whole poem has simple language and deep feelings.
2. Friendship
When I was a child, friendship was a curved slide. I'm above, and my partner is below. When I grow up, friendship is a thick diary. I am outside and my heart is inside. Later, friendship is a faint goodbye. I am here and my friends are far away. Now, friendship is a beautiful memory. I am here, and my friends are in my heart.
Appreciation: The poem runs through the whole poem through the time series of "when I was a child", "when I grew up", "later" and "now", concretizing the abstract friendship with slides, diaries, goodbye and memories, and summarizing the beauty of the author's friendship. The whole poem is affectionate.
3. "Mother Love"
When I was a child, maternal love was the cradle of warmth. I slept inside and my mother waited outside. When I grow up, maternal love is a small umbrella. I'm hiding inside, and Mom Lin is outside. Later, maternal love was a thin figure. I walked behind and my mother rushed in front. Now, maternal love is a careful reminder. I run in front and my mother cares behind.
Appreciation: The time series of "childhood", "growing up", "later" and "now" runs through the whole poem, and the abstract maternal love is embodied by cradle, umbrella, back and reminder, which summarizes every wonderful moment when the author gets along with his mother.