Appreciation of Works
Moonlight on the Lotus Pond is a famous piece of modern lyric prose. With the delicate description of "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond", the article implicitly and euphemistically expresses the author's complex thoughts and feelings of dissatisfaction with reality, longing for freedom, and wanting to be beyond reality but unable to do so, leaving us the footprints of honest intellectuals in old China wandering forward in the midst of suffering. The "beauty in the bath" in Moonlight on the Lotus Pond is obviously out of line. "At that time, lesbians were criticized even if they showed their navel." In the textbook of senior one, when Zhu Ziqing wrote Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, he once referred to the white flowers dotted between lotus leaves as "beauties who just came out of the bath". The girl who picked lotus leaves rowed out of the lake, but she sang colourful songs. The song sang, "A demon girl is a virgin, but she is willing to rowboat ..."-These slight details of "involving in pornography" were once cut off. But now the original content has been restored in the textbook. First of all, explain the changes of the author's thoughts: not static to seek static to get static to get static, return to reality, higher than reality. Walking out of the house with a touch of sadness, I took advantage of the moonlight to relax, walked along the quiet path, and naturally came to the lotus pond that passed by every day, and went to see the lotus pond under Na Yue. The lotus pond in the moonlight is so beautiful that it has a different wind than during the day. Lotus leaf is a graceful skirt like a dancer. You can imagine its graceful posture when it dances with the wind. And the white lotus flowers dotted in it can't help but remind people of her characteristics of "getting out of the mud without dyeing". Lotus flowers are in different shapes: "some are blooming gracefully, and some are shyly blooming;" Just like a pearl, like a star in a blue sky, like a beauty who just came out of the bath. " Using the word "graceful and shy", the lotus flower seems to be a fairy in the author's eyes. With meticulous meticulous brushwork and wonderful metaphor, the author makes a fascinating description of the shape and spirit of lotus leaf and its qualifications, and the beautiful images of lotus leaf seem to have been displayed before our eyes. This is not the most beautiful, a wisp of "breeze" makes this beautiful lotus picture move: "The breeze passes by, bringing wisps of fragrance, as if it were a faint song on a distant building. At this time, the leaves and flowers also trembled a little, like lightning, and passed across the lotus pond in an instant. The leaves were close to each other side by side, so there was a clear wave mark. Under the leaves is the flowing water, which is covered and can't see some colors: but the leaves are more windy. " In an instant, the lotus fragrance is like a song, which seems to be absent, the leaves and leaves vibrate, the waves overflow, and the leaves, flowers, shapes, colors and tastes are integrated. People are also absorbed in the beautiful scenery of the lotus pond in the breeze. And this seems to be not extreme enough! Look at the moonlight on the pond again: "The moonlight is like running water, quietly pouring down on this leaf and flower. A thin blue mist floated in the lotus pond. Leaves and flowers seem to be washed in milk; It's like a dream with a gauze in it. " The flowing water under the leaves is covered by dense leaves, so it can't be seen, but the moonlight on the leaves is "quietly diarrhea", and the word "diarrhea" turns static into dynamic, making people see the sense of mobility of moonlight; "Thin blue fog floats in the lotus pond", and the word "floating" highlights the light and hazy fog. Leaves and flowers are shrouded in mist, misty, as if washed in milk, dreamlike. The moonlight is misty and soft, and the mist floats lightly. The lotus pond under this moon is really like a fairyland! The full moon with faint clouds gives people the feeling of "taking a nap", just like the author's mood at this time, but it is just right. The author inadvertently reveals a faint joy here. "The sparse shadows of curved willows are like paintings on lotus leaves." The beautiful shadow of willow is not "cast" on the lotus leaf, but the author just uses a "painting", as if a master painter is splashing ink and painting it carefully, making the shadow cast on the lotus leaf appropriate, natural, beautiful and realistic, and full of interest. "Light and shadow have a harmonious melody, such as a famous song played on the Vatican." The moonlight is light, and the black and white light and shadow are like a harmonious melody, and the lotus fragrance is continuous and harmonious. The author's subtle feelings are really fascinating! This beautiful scenery can make the author forget his sorrow, right? But "the excitement is theirs, and I have nothing." The author still can't get rid of that melancholy. The faint sadness and the faint joy are intertwined, and the lotus pond under the beautiful moon is covered with a hazy veil, which is quiet and elegant, quiet and soft, and hazy and harmonious, and the lotus pond and the moonlight are integrated! Reading "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond" by Mr. Zhu Lao, I feel like I am in the lotus pond, as if I am walking on the secluded path. The graceful green lotus leaf, the graceful lotus flower, the lotus pond with misty moonlight and mist are displayed in front of us. What scenery is described in Moonlight on the Lotus Pond? The title is clearly marked: one is the lotus pond, the other is the moonlight. There are many poems about the lotus pond in the past dynasties, and more about moonlight. But the lotus pond and moonlight in this paper are absolutely different from other lotus ponds and moonlight. The lotus pond here will not be "the lotus leaves are infinitely bright, and the lotus flowers reflect the sun in a different color"; The moonlight here can't be "the jade door curtain can't be rolled up, but it can be brushed back on the anvil." The lotus pond here is "the lotus pond under the moon" and the moonlight here is "the moonlight of the lotus pond". It is precisely because the works clearly highlight the characteristics of the scenery and vividly reproduce the specific scenery in a specific environment that the sincere feelings to be expressed in the article have reliable sustenance and make readers feel true and cordial. Look at the description of the lotus leaf first: "The leaves are high out of the water, like a slim dancer's skirt." If we put aside the specific environment, can we use the "green jade plate" as a metaphor for lotus leaves? Sure, and it's quite expressive. This description not only depicts the color of the lotus leaf, but also shows its quality and shape. However, this metaphor has to be in the morning glow, sunset, or drizzle, and must not be in the moonlight. It is more difficult to distinguish between colors and qualities at night. The lotus leaf seen in the moonlight is mainly its natural stretching shape, which is very similar to the skirt and gives the leaves a dynamic beauty. In writing lotus flowers, the original text uses three metaphors: "among the leaves, there are some white flowers scattered, some are blooming gracefully, and some are shyly blooming;" Just like a pearl, like a star in a blue sky, like a beauty who just came out of the bath. " Lotus is beautiful and luxurious, comparable to beauty. In the poem "Lotus" by Yang Chengli, a poet in the Song Dynasty, there is a sentence "Just like three thousand women in the Han Temple, half with heavy makeup and half with light makeup". In the hazy moonlight, lotus is regarded as a beauty, and it has just come out of the bath, so the hazy feeling is appropriate. On the contrary, it is somewhat far-fetched to compare lotus flowers to "pearls" and "stars" if it is not in the hazy moonlight. The article describes the lotus fragrance like this: "The breeze passes by, bringing a faint fragrance, as if it were a faint song on a tall building in the distance." This intermittent, seemingly absent feeling will never be produced in the early morning when the book sounds loud, nor in the harsh noon when the sun shines, but only in the silent moonlit night when the children's laughter on the road outside the wall is no longer audible. Let's look at another sentence about flowers: "In addition to the brilliance, there is a faint fragrance here, and the fragrance seems to be lavender, and dreams generally cover me gently." (Wisteria Falls) This is the fragrance of flowers in the bright sunshine. Purple flowers are "teasing each other with the sunshine". The dazzling purple stimulates the author to feel that the fragrance is lavender, which is very natural. There is only one sentence that directly describes the moonlight. In this paper, the moon is mostly written by shadows, which is also a performance technique praised by scholars in past dynasties. "High bushes, falling jagged mottled shadows; The beautiful image of the curved willow seems to be painted on the lotus leaf. The moonlight in the pond is uneven; But light and shadow have a harmonious melody, such as a famous song played on Van Aling. " The shadows here are jagged and mottled, giving people a sense of swaying. Why? Just because it fell in the lotus pond. In the lotus pond, "the breeze passed by ... the leaves and flowers trembled a little, like lightning, and suddenly passed over to the other side of the lotus pond. The leaves were close together side by side, so there was a clear wave mark." The shadow falls on this wave mark, which is of course more jagged and mottled. It is precisely because the lotus pond is in this dynamic state that the beautiful image of willow is like "painting" rather than "printing" on the lotus leaf. It is precisely because of that blue ripple that light and shadow show a curve like a staff, which is reminiscent of "the famous song played on Van Aling".
wintersweet Yu Qiuyu
It's really strange to be alone. When I live in a shack, my mind is full of daydreams, but when I write travel notes about famous mountains and rivers around the country, there are often some quiet spots looming in front of me. Maybe it's an old man who happens to be in Lu Yu, maybe it's a bird that always stops by my side and can't get rid of it, or maybe it's a grass that makes me doze off. Sometimes it is not necessarily encountered on the journey, but the memory highlights that will emerge wherever you go, flashing, leaving a few stitches in the fluttering life line.
Yes, if life is a line crossed, then only some points can remain valuable.
omit those withered long lines, and only remember those few points, which is really rich enough.
To this end, I will focus on making an exception and writing a flower in my travel notes. It is a wintersweet, not far away, in a hospital in the western suburbs of Shanghai.
it's a quiet light that often disappears in my heart during my busy schedule.
Second
People who walk on tiptoe sometimes get sick, and staying in the hospital may be the biggest psychological contrast for a performer. I want physical strength but no physical strength, I want space and no space, and I am waiting in constraint and helplessness, and I don't know when I can step out of the next stop of my life.
it seems that heaven rewards diligence and punishes it. Your usual footsteps are too sloppy, so you are driven to this small courtyard to stay for some time and relax. Whether you like it or not, you are used to it.
At that time, the hospital where I lived used to be the private residence of a wealthy foreign businessman. There were many trees in the yard, but it was winter and they all withered. I am used to seeing the beautiful scenery on weekdays, and my eyes are full of hunger and thirst, looking for green among the trees all day. However, what I see is only the crisscross of khaki, but clusters of ward clothes of the same style are repeatedly turning around, and the more I look at my heart, the more annoying I am. Occasionally, the patient stopped to talk for a few words, but he was too polite to ask each other more questions. Only two patients laughed and laughed loudly at every opportunity. The nurse said that they were terminally ill. Their cheerfulness is highly respected, but everyone knows that this is a spiritual support with great efforts. Few people listened to their laughter, because everyone could not produce so many comforting reactions and forced laughter. Nurses often accompany them for a walk, and everyone looks at their backs from a distance.
patients like to go to bed early and get up early, and the yard is open before dawn.