What are the aspects of correcting composition evaluation?

A complete collection of composition reviews and corrections

1. The article echoes from beginning to end, with concise sentences, hitting the nail on the head and pointing to the theme. Through the description of the scenery of the four seasons, explain the beauty of xx and take care of the beginning. It is best to pay attention to the clear level of paragraphs.

2. In your pen, the scenery of xx is so beautiful and moving, and the activities are so colorful. I love you too, beautiful xx.

3. Grasp the different characteristics of spring, such as grass, trees and flowers, and describe the vibrant scene of spring in the order of "xx", reflecting a person's heartfelt joy.

4. Vividly wrote the scene of "xx" playing happily, with vivid language and concrete description, and wrote the beauty of "xx" with vivid metaphor.

5. The description of "xx" and "XX" is distinctive, childlike and refreshing, and the quotation of the ancient poem "XX" is also appropriate, which enhances the expression effect of the article.

6. The "xx" in spring is really beautiful. We grasped the writing method of "xx", wrote the characteristics of "xx" and also wrote the characteristics of "xx". Although we have all seen these scenery, we have a brand-new feeling through your careful observation.

7. Observe carefully and write clearly the characteristics of "xx" according to the method of summarizing first and then dividing. Accurate language and concrete images make us feel immersive.

8. This passage is a general description, a specific description, and a combination of static and dynamic, which shows the loveliness of "xx". Take care of the exercises before and after, observe them carefully and write down your favorite feelings.

9. Because of rich associations, the pen front shines brilliantly. Look, compare "xx" with "xx", "xx" and "xx". These images are metaphors of how vividly "xx" is written.

10. The scenery description captures the characteristics of the scenery and describes the blending of the scenery, from far to near, from surface to point, and is handled in an orderly manner. The articles written are more coherent, and the scenery is different, which captures the modeling characteristics.

1 1. In your pen, "xx" is like a small garden, so full of vitality. The description of "XX" is in sequence, which is clear at a glance.

12. The characteristics of "xx" are introduced from the outside to the inside. Observe orderly and carefully. The writing is accurate and vivid, arousing many senses, and the content is true and concrete.

13. Write "xx" first, then "xx", then "xx" and finally "xx". How clear the writing idea is and how delicate the description is. You see, with appropriate metaphors, say "xx" vividly.

14. By describing his own scenery of xx, the author can say that he expresses his love for the school through the scenery, with fluent sentences and clear center.

15. This article is beautifully written and lyrical, and it is a beautiful ode to childhood life. With lyrical style, the author vividly depicts the scenery of the four seasons in the corner of xx and deeply recalls the wonderful childhood life spent there.

16. Based on the structure of "total score", this paper describes the beautiful scenery of the four seasons in xx by extracting key elements such as "students with big trees and big flowers", which is clear-cut and coherent, and is a good landscape writing exercise.

17. The article reveals the love for xx between the lines, and skillfully uses dynamic stereoscopic perception to make xx melt in all seasons. As time goes on, it shows movement and vitality. In addition, the little author has always been pregnant with a heart of constantly exploring the unknown, a desire for knowledge and a love for the motherland, which makes every reader feel gratified.

18. Just like a little painter, you painted the beautiful scenery of your xx for everyone. The four seasons are different and the scenery is different. Short words show your love for xx, and the scenes blend. Great!

19. Your composition is full of emotions, and between the lines is your love for xx. Finally, say out loud and express the main idea: "Love xx, great!" Beautiful language, a large number of rhetorical devices such as personification, vividly depicts the four seasons scenery of xx.

20. The scenery of the four seasons in XX is really beautiful. Your practice is clear and rich in content, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.