Excerpts from compositions with appreciation

1 So "Phoenix Flower" evokes not only the memory of becoming a butterfly when I was a child, but also the nostalgia of a young dream. The impression of a fiery red flower, coupled with the song of the jackal, blew the teenager's dream and realized that he was neither a phoenix bird nor a buttonwood tree. Finally, I saw my face in a broken dream. It turned out to be just a teenager. It turned out to be a nightmare. -Appreciation of Lin Qingxuan's In Broken Voices: I always thought that Lin Qingxuan's ci was Zen or fable, but I didn't expect such lyrical and beautiful words. The author wrote the phoenix flower, as well as the noble plane tree, the nirvana phoenix and the young hymn. As time goes by, parting always makes us sad and helpless, but the phoenix flower still blooms so enthusiastically, which reflects the sadness of parting. Pessimists are defeated by themselves first and then by life; An optimist conquers himself first, then life. Pessimists have limited pain and limited future; An optimistic person has gone through many hardships and has a bright future. In the eyes of pessimists, what is possible may also become impossible; In the eyes of optimists, the impossible becomes possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create Excellence. From extraordinary people, it is easy for us to find an optimistic spirit; From mediocre people, we can easily find gloomy shadows. Appreciation: This passage is full of philosophical thinking and meaningful. From the perspective of pessimism and optimism, the author uses double rhetoric to write the different mentality and performance of pessimists and optimists, which makes people feel the power of optimism. Then he said excellent and plain, thinking that excellent is often optimistic and mediocre is often pessimistic. This paper discusses the great power of optimism under multi-party comparative argument. Standing on the coast of history, I trace back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on Zehe and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming is carefree in Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... They choose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. Appreciation: This powerful and colorful opening makes people shine. First of all, the article uses parallelism rhetoric to describe the deeds of historical figures in history, which strengthens the language and is infectious. Then Qu Yuan, Wei Wudi and Tao Yuanming respectively expounded their choices, which made people feel sorry. Finally, write the result of the choice and explain it in a unique way. At this point, the river is already a song. A truckload of corn was piled on the beach. A cart of millet was piled on the beach. There are bundles of soybeans and baskets of millet on the beach. It's time to call it a day, and we have to jump into the river, wash, clean and clean again. Healthy tendons and firm breasts are all exposed in your field of vision, which is a charming sculpture. Even if it is primitive and rough, it is soft and charming, intoxicated with no evil thoughts. Appreciation: this passage is beautifully written, like running water, and it is a vivid picture of autumn harvest: corn, millet, soybeans, millet, beach, young people, old people ... jingmeiren is more beautiful. People are happy because of the bumper harvest; The scenery is happy because people are happy. Scenes blend, and this scene of autumn harvest is more beautiful. The author has beautiful writing and vivid language, and selected some representative things to show the unique beauty of autumn harvest. "At this time, the riverside is already a song" echoes the title of "Autumn Harvest Board". I can't believe that mom will never see me again. Just in spring, my mother peeled an apple for me. I believe I can recognize her peeled apples at a glance from countless peeled apples. Every place where I change knives has the radian she can cut and the length she can cut, which is frank and sincere. Just a few months ago, my mother cooked Chinese medicine for me ... I opened her eyelids and wanted her to look at me again. But the little aunt said that mom would never close her eyes. -Jason's Appreciation of "The One Who Loves Me Most Has Left" Reading here, my heart is always aching. I am afraid that one day I will feel the pain of wanting to raise a child but can't wait. So I will cherish every inch of time with my family from now on. This passage describes many scenes about mother in simple and sincere words, which is touching and touching. I remember Taylor said: The least time-wasting thing is to be with the people you cherish. Go * * * to encourage. The plane leaves began to fall and fall, and many mysterious aesthetic feelings fell into my heart together. I was lost at once, and my little heart could hardly bear the excitement. I just picked up a fallen leaf in confusion. The leaves are yellow-brown and curved, like a boat carrying dreams. There are two beautiful phoenix trees beside the boat, which will last for a long time. Every time there is a gust of wind, I shuttle through the rain of fallen leaves and pick up the plane trees all over the ground. -Appreciation of Zhang Xiaofeng's Autumn This passage expresses the love for buttonwood leaves with beautiful brushstrokes. The onomatopoeic words of "Sasha Vujacic" are vivid and vivid, allowing readers to guess the scene. Mysterious Beauty describes the characteristics of phoenix tree in autumn, which is mysterious and beautiful. Indus leaves are full of infinite charm and beauty in the author's eyes, which is very infectious. The shape of buttonwood leaves is vividly described by metaphor. Birds can start measuring the sky again. Some are responsible for measuring the blue of the sky, some are responsible for measuring the transparency of the sky, and some are responsible for measuring the height and depth of the sky with those wings. Not all birds are excellent mathematicians. They chattered and counted, looked around, and finally dared not publish statistics. -Zhang Xiaofeng's "Looking Back in Spring" Appreciating Zhang Xiaofeng's personification makes me feel really excited. I think of the spring at home and the picture of birds soaring in the sky. The author compares birds to bad mathematicians, measuring the sky. This magical imagination impressed everyone, writing about the liveliness and agility of birds and the beauty of spring, and showing the author's love for spring. The prosperity of the city has puzzled my eyes. I can't find myself, but my hometown depends on it. Even if you live happily in a certain city, there is always something invisible pulling you in your heart. One is at home, the other is firmly tied to your heart, and it hurts when you pull it. Especially for people who have been away from their hometown for a long time, especially in the dead of night, the more mellow this cup of wine in their hometown is, the clearer the image of their hometown is, and it is obviously distressing for mellow people not to wake up. "If you stay away from hate like spring grass, you can go further and live." It is precisely because of this homesickness and homesickness that we can't get rid of it even if we go to the ends of the earth, so as to comfort the wandering people and make the wandering heart no longer lonely. Appreciating this passage expresses my concern and fetters for my hometown. Even though the city is so prosperous, our hometown still lives in our hearts. Hometown is our root and the mark of our growth. This passage is beautiful and lyrical, just right and infectious, so that we are all moved by the small emotional appeal of our hometown. Quote "hate is like spring grass, go further and still be alive", and express our yearning for our hometown in the world by poetry. The application of duality in many places and the strengthening of language potential express the author's deep attachment to his hometown. Tea caves are built by mountains and rivers. On the side near the mountain, the wall climbed up the mountain like a long snake. On the waterfront side, there is room to set up a pier by the river outside the city and park a covered boat in the bay. When the boat went down, it took tung oil, green salt and dyed seeds. Appreciating a good scenery should be concise and full of descriptive power. You can't find gorgeous words in Shen Congwen's pen, but you can clearly feel the outline of the scenery from such brushstrokes. "The wall is like a long snake, climbing up the mountain", and the unspeakable taste complements the faint breath of the article. 10 and the river around the foot of the mountain are also green. It is another kind of green, bright, as if mixed with oil. As for the mountain, it's still green, but it's just a pile of dark green, which makes people feel that no matter where you start, you can't open a crack, and even if you dig it down two floors, its green will not fade. In addition, my screen window is also green, very light green, really as ethereal as the gauze skirt of ancient beauty under the sunlight. -Appreciation of Zhang Xiaofeng's The First Snow The author fully mobilized his vision and touch and wrote the green of spring. Metaphors are used in many places, and the images are vivid. I like this passage because it is very warm after reading it. Where does this warmth come from? I think it flowed from those warm words. "Bright", "rich" and "full of vitality" are more poetic and beautiful because they are written for children. The green color in the author's works seems to be alive and flowing, as if it appeared in the letter. 1 1 People who stand higher can not only enjoy the dawn of hope earlier, but also discover the three-dimensional poems of life. Everyone's life is a word, a sentence or a punctuation in this poem. You may not be a beautiful word, an eye-catching sentence or an exclamation point, but you are still a syllable, a pause and an indispensable part of this three-dimensional poem of life. This is enough for you to give up the past, sprout your interest in breeding new songs for mankind and bring poetry to the world. Appreciation: standing on the branch of history, we can see higher and more comprehensively. When the second person said it, it seemed more cordial and emphasized the point of view, as if the author could not help but say many benefits of standing on the branch of history. As for the part that becomes syllables and pauses, it makes me sad. Even if I don't have great success, I am still an inseparable part of this world history. 12 beauty, you can be in a magnificent palace, beside a bombed bridge, on fragrant flowers, or in candlelight dancing with the wind; Beauty can be found in the extraordinary statue of Venus, or in the jokes of ordinary girls. Life and death are two worlds, but beauty can shine on the edge of life and death. This is the power of life-the beauty of life. Appreciation: this passage is fluent and powerful, which enhances the language potential and fully emphasizes the ubiquitous characteristics of beauty. Beauty can be magnificent, extraordinary, energetic and incomplete. What the author wants to say most is probably "This is the power of life-the beauty of life". Indeed, the power of life is the most beautiful, shocking and embarrassing. The author writes like a god, and after reading it, he only feels that his lips and teeth are fragrant and memorable. Wandering in the moonlight, a person has to think about what he is worried about or even worried about during the day. At this moment, he has forgotten everything, while some people will remember clearly what he has no time to take care of or even forget during the day. This beautiful moonlight will make the treasure deep in my heart bloom, and even the pain will become beautiful. But the purpose of this moonlight is to make me carefree, relax physically and mentally, and make my breathing slightly even and imperceptible. I am like a fish swimming in clear water, stealing happiness, floating in the moonlight, sucking the moonlight, absorbing the light, or stopping or wandering, intoxicated by it. -Appreciation of Chen Guohua's Moon in Early Winter: This passage depicts the charming moonlight in early winter by using rhetorical devices such as metaphor, associative imagination, exaggeration and duality. By the moon, the author seems to have completely integrated into the moonlight. The beauty of moonlight makes memories and pain more beautiful. The author expresses his feelings of indulging in moonlight with beautiful and delicate brushstrokes, which is vivid and infectious. Compare yourself to a "fish", highlighting the bright moonlight. Finally, the combination of long and short sentences is full of phonological beauty, and poetic sentences express love and praise for moonlight. The sky is clear, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like flowing rivers. It seems that all life in the world should come by appointment. At this moment, in the sunshine as transparent as honey, they cheered at the same time and rotated at the same time, turning into countless floating points. Such an afternoon full of white flowers always feels deja vu, and always feels that it is an aggregation that can be put into any kind of time and space. It can be put into the Book of Songs, Chu Ci, classicism and post-impressionism-there should be such an afternoon and such an early summer in any beautiful record of mankind. Appreciation: This passage depicts the beautiful scenery of tung flowers in full bloom with vivid and beautiful brushwork. The combination of vision and hearing, dynamic and static, is full of vitality and movement. The author compares the prosperous and blooming scene to a flowing river, and compares the sunlight to alcohol and honey, and describes this scene beautifully. The last sentence strengthens the language situation, making people feel the vitality of the eruption when tung flowers are in full bloom, as if the whole hillside is covered with tung flowers, and the tension of life is infinitely extended. The author's imagination is full of romantic dreams. Satisfied and looking forward to being adopted