1. "Slow Voice" expresses his loneliness, desolation and sorrow caused by the destruction of his country, his family and the fall of the world by describing what he sees, hears and feels in Can Qiu. It has a strong sense of The color of the times. This word breaks the limitations of the upper and lower parts in terms of structure, focusing on it in one go, deliberately exaggerating the sadness, crying and complaining, and is deeply touching. The whole poem is full of tears, and the style is deep and dignified, sad and sad, and full of artistic appeal.
2. The beginning of this poem is unusual, using seven sets of repeated words in a row. Not only in terms of lyrics, but also in poetry and music, it is unique. But the benefits don’t stop there. These seven sets of refrains are also full of musical beauty.
The first part of the film begins with a person searching for nothing, and writes about the difficulty of drinking to drown sorrow; the sound of wild geese carried by the wind only increases the melancholy of homesickness. So the next film moves from the autumn sky to my own courtyard. The garden is full of chrysanthemums, and autumn is in full bloom. Here, "the ground is covered with yellow flowers" refers to chrysanthemums in full bloom, not the ground full of fallen heroes. "Gaunt and damaged" refers to oneself becoming haggard and thin due to sadness, nor does it mean that the chrysanthemums wither and wither. Precisely because I have no intention of looking at flowers, even though the ground is full of chrysanthemums, I don’t want to pick them to appreciate them. This is the correct answer to "Who is worthy of picking them now". However, if people do not pick the flowers, the flowers will wither by themselves; if the flowers are damaged, they will no longer be able to be picked. This not only expresses the depression of having no intention of picking flowers, but also reveals the feeling of cherishing the flowers before they are gone. The meaning of the writing is much more profound than the song "If there are flowers that can be broken, you must break them, but don't wait until there are no flowers to break branches".
From "Guarding the window" to the following, it describes the state of sitting alone, bored and depressed, which is a step further than the three sentences of "Looking and searching". The sentence "guarding" is like breaking it up according to Zhang Huiyan's "Selected Poems" and connecting it with "alone". The second part of Qin Guan's "Partridge Sky" written by Qin Guan (an unknown person): "Without a word, I talk to the fragrant bottle and arrange my heart to break until dusk. As soon as I can burn the lamp, the pear blossoms are beaten by the rain and the door is closed." The artistic conception of this poem is similar. But Qin Ci writes from the perspective of people being mentally prepared for dusk, while Li writes from the opposite side, as if the sky deliberately refuses to get dark, making people particularly sad. The two sentences "Wutong" are not only derived from Huaihai, but also use the meaning of the words "Wutong tree, rain in the middle of the night, no love and true suffering; one leaf, one sound, empty steps dripping to the bright" in Wen Tingyun's "Geng Liuzi". The two contents are blended into one, the writing is straighter and the emotion is more intense. Finally, it ends with the sentence "How can the word "sorrow" be found, which is also a unique stroke. Since the time of Yu Xin, some people have said that there are thousands of dendrobiums on their sorrow, or they have said that their sorrow is like a river like the sea (see the poems of Li Yu and Qin Guan respectively). In short, there are extremely many words. But here I reduce the many to a small, and just say that my thoughts are complicated and complicated, and how can I cover them all with just one word "sorrow". What's wonderful is that it doesn't explain any other mood beyond the word "sorrow", and it stops abruptly, as if it has nothing to do with it. On the surface, there is a tendency to "stop talking", but in fact it has been poured out to the fullest.