Keywords: 350 words in the fourth grade of Wisdom Primary School
Words: 350 words composition
This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 350 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is "Smart Deer". Everyone is welcome to contribute. A tiger who had never seen the world met a deer one day. The tiger asked, "What are your horns for?" ? . The deer thought for a moment and replied, "My horns are specially used to eat tiger meat." The tiger ran away immediately. The escaped tiger met a fox halfway up the mountain. The fox asked the tiger, "Your Majesty, why are you in such a mess?" The tiger told the fox that it had met a deer. The fox told the tiger, "The deer lied to you, your majesty." In this way, the fox and the tiger went to find the deer. After finding the deer, the deer suddenly asked, "Fox, I told you to bring two tigers. Why did you only bring one? " At this time, the tiger was afraid and nervous, so he killed the fox and ran away in a hurry. Teacher's comment: This is a good article, which tells the story of the deer's wit against the tiger's escape. Through vivid language description, the article highlights the intelligence of deer, which is in sharp contrast with the image of tiger who has never seen the world. The article is reasonable in imagination, natural and vivid in narration, compact in structure, coherent in connection with nature and prominent in center. "Run away in a hurry" was changed to "run away in a hurry". The language description of animals is meticulous and delicate, which is a major feature of this paper. Come on, look forward to your good story!
(Xue Le China: Teacher Zou Zi) 2009-10-2219: 20: 00