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An ode to life

—— Appreciation of Mo Huaiqi's "Walking" Author: President Han

bathed in the warm spring breeze, enjoying the beautiful scenery of nature and enjoying deep affection. A family of four in it runs in the family strolls in the fields in the early spring in the south. What an intoxicating picture of harmony between man and nature! Mo Huaiqi's Walking shows us such a beautiful picture.

Walking is a fresh and beautiful essay. Its ingenious conception, unique wording and rich connotation are amazing. Especially in the blending of sense and reason, it seems to be fascinating. In fact, unconsciously, people have been deeply moved by the artistic conception and philosophy contained in it by the author. It is like a touching song, praising the beauty of life to the fullest. It can be said that reading this article has given people a baptism in their understanding of life.

1. Understanding life

The first description is: "In this early spring field in the south, large pieces of new green are paved at will, some are thick and some are light; The buds on the tree are also dense; The winter water in the field is also bubbling. " What the article here reveals is the breath of spring, but what it implies is the perception of life, and it is also a song about the glory of life and nature.

The second description is: "The little guy suddenly shouted:' There are also mothers and sons in front, and there are also mothers and sons behind.' These two naive words not only show the intelligence and cleverness of the little guy, but also express his intuitive understanding of life in his ignorance. Reading makes people marvel at the beauty of life and experience the inheritance of life, which is related to each other from generation to generation.

Second, cherish life

"Mother didn't want to come out. She is old and in poor health, and she feels very tired when she goes further. I said, that's why we should walk more. " Here is full of deep affection for the mother, highlighting the care for the lives of others, especially the care for the old life. Warm feelings are beyond words.

"the weather is fine. This year's spring came too late, too late, and some old people couldn't hold on. But spring has finally come. My mother survived another severe winter. " This is not a complaint about the late arrival of spring, but clearly the author's longing and love for his mother's life. The heart of a child is vividly on the paper. In particular, the word "endure" is used to make people move-a good song should be cried.

Another describes the path that my mother saw when she changed her mind. "There are golden cauliflower, two rows of neat mulberry trees and a sparkling fish pond at the end." This is not only a mother's desire to love and satisfy her grandchildren, but also a frail old man-longing for beautiful scenery and life, and cherishing her own life.

Third, respect life

"Later, there was a disagreement: Mother had to take the main road, and the main road was smooth"; "My son has to take a path, and the path is interesting." "I want to be a satisfactory solution, and I can't find it; I want to break up a family and split it into two ways, each in his place, but I don't want to. I decided to wronged my son because I have been with him for a long time. I said,' Take the main road.' In the face of the contradiction between being old on one side and being young on the other, the spirit of loving the young and respecting the old is commendable, which reflects the author's respect and kindness to the glory of aging life, and the meaning of admiration arises spontaneously after reading it. Young birds know how to feed back, and lambs also kneel and nurse, especially human beings!

the responsibility of life

"However, everything depends on me. My mother is old, and she is used to listening to her strong son. My

son is still young, and he is used to listening to his tall father. What about my wife? Outside, she always listens to me. For a moment, I felt the great responsibility. " What the author reveals to people here is the heavy sense of responsibility of a strong life in the family.

At the end of the article, it reads: "I squatted down and carried my mother, and my wife squatted down and carried my son. Although my mother is tall, she is thin and naturally not heavy; Although my son is very fat, he is young and naturally light. But my wife and I are walking slowly, steadily and carefully, as if the sum of what I have on my back and what she has on her back is the whole world. " This passage has profound implications. It not only highlights the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation, but also implicitly writes the responsibility of "I" (four words of "I" are used in three sentences here, and the word "I" appears 24 times in the full text of only 58 words)-a middle-aged man standing at the connection point of the chain of life-to life and society. The last sentence reveals the center of this article, where the author's writing intention and emotional sublimation lie. It echoes "All this makes people think of one thing-life" in the fourth paragraph of the article, and plays a role in clarifying the theme and deepening the connotation, which is the finishing touch.

If you think about it, the artistic conception of the article is like the sweetness of an olive in your heart. In simple words, it is full of joy, care and harmony, storing longing, calling and nostalgia, and full of goodness, filial piety and responsibility; Between the lines, true feelings flow, rationality flashes and feelings are expressed. At first reading, I saw the natural scenery and the human feelings; Read again and experience the beauty of life; At the end of reading, I can't help but suddenly feel that my life has increased.

May 3, 29

Attached text: Mo Huaiqi's "Walking"

It is very common for a family to walk together, but this ordinary little thing can also reflect deep affection. This text tells us such a touching story.

We are walking in the fields: me, my mother, my wife and son.

mother didn't want to come out. She is old and in poor health, and she feels very tired when she goes further. I said, that's why we should walk more. Mother nodded convincingly and went to get her coat. She listens to me as much as I did when I was a child.

the weather is fine. This year's spring came too late, too late, and some old people couldn't hold on. But spring has finally come. My mother survived another severe winter.

In this field in the early spring in the south, large patches of new green are casually paved, some are thick and some are light; The buds on the tree are also dense; The winter water in the field is also bubbling. All this makes people think of one thing-life.

my mother and I walk in front, and my wife and son walk behind. The little guy suddenly cried, "There are mothers and sons in front, and there are mothers and sons behind." We all laughed.

Later, there was a disagreement: Mother had to take the main road, and the main road was smooth; My son wants to take the path, which is interesting. However, everything depends on me. My mother is old, and she is used to listening to her strong son. My son is still young, and he is used to listening to his tall father; What about my wife? Outside, she always listens to me. For a moment, I felt the great responsibility. I want a way to kill two birds with one stone, but I can't find it; I want to break up a family and split it into two ways, each in his place, but I don't want to. I decided to wronged my son because I have been with him for a long time. I said, "Take the main road."

But the mother touched her grandson's little brain and changed her mind: "Let's take the path." Her eyes followed the path: there were golden cauliflowers, two rows of neat mulberry trees and a sparkling fish pond at the end. "Where I can't walk, you carry me." Mother said to me.

In this way, we walked towards the cauliflower, mulberry tree and fish pond in the sunshine. At one place, I squatted down and carried my mother, and my wife squatted down and carried my son. Although my mother is tall, she is thin and naturally not heavy; Although my son is very fat, after all, he is young and naturally light: but my wife and I are walking slowly, steadily and carefully, as if what I have on my back and what she has on her back add up to the whole world.