ideal
[Teaching objectives]
1. Understand this poem's flexible use of various rhetorical methods, especially the beauty of figurative rhetoric.
2. Further consolidate the circular notation.
[Learning is difficult]
1. By studying this article, we will establish our ideals and ambitions and cultivate our spirit of unremitting pursuit for our ideals.
2. Have a deep understanding of the flexible use of various rhetorical methods in poetry writing.
3. Have a more speculative understanding of the connotation of the ideal.
[learning content]
The language of poetry is highly concise, and so is this poem. Its short and passionate language is full of rich meanings, and its open structure also provides readers with room for re-creation. Therefore, under the premise of clarifying the main connotation of "persisting in ideals and pursuing ideals", personalized reading is carried out, and the reading method of dotted lines plays an important role in our personalized reading. Accordingly, although we don't have a mature outlook on life, we are relatively simple in childlike innocence and bright in the future, and it is easy for us to associate and think about "ideals" and have a strong * * * sound with poetry.
Secondly, the same ontological "ideal" in the poem can be expressed by rich figurative groups. The correspondence between different attributes of vehicles and ontological attributes reflects the author's extraordinary imagination, and the comprehensive application of other rhetorical methods also shows the author's excellent expressive ability. Then, when analyzing rhetorical methods, we should pay attention to how the author chooses rhetorical methods according to the needs of expressing the theme of poetry.
Finally, this poem is speculative in the expression of meaning, especially in the description of ideal price.
"Ideals, like the morning sun, shine on the spiritual world of mankind, sow hope and light, and will never change."
In different historical backgrounds, ideals often have different forms of expression-
More than 2,000 years ago, when Shengzai Chen, an anti-Qin hero, was farming in the fields, he once expressed his grand ambition, but he was laughed at by people around him and thought it was an idiotic dream. He couldn't help sighing: "Swallows know the ambition of swans!" ; Napoleon, who created the peak of French history, was full of lofty sentiments. He once expounded his ideal ambition with ambitious expression: "A soldier who doesn't want to be a general is not a good soldier"; 1936, Mao Zedong stood on the top of the snow-capped mountain, full of high spirits, and a poem "Spring and Snow in Qinyuan" became a magnificent poem, which eloquently expressed his revolutionary ideal.
Real ideals can stimulate people's vitality and open the source of people's strength. What is difficult to explode is strength, determination, explosiveness, and the balance beam that helps you walk a tightrope in times of crisis. It defends and embodies your personal dignity, but also respects the dignity of others.
Dear students, have you thought about your ideals here and now?
Today, we will learn about the ideals written by the famous poet and writer Liu Shahe and see what his ideals are.
Overall mood:
The first section always talks about ideal meaning, and the second and third sections are similar. The fourth, fifth, sixth and seventh sections can be summarized by "ideal historical meaning", and can be summarized by "ideal personality meaning". Sections 8, 9, 10 and 11 are similar and can be summarized by "the ideal meaning of life". The last section encourages people to set up their ideals and fight for them. It can be seen that the whole poem mainly praises the ideal significance, from historical significance to personality significance and life significance.
Learning and appreciation:
1. Which poem do you like best? Can you explain why?
(Pay attention to the following points: ① Mark your favorite poems first and read them aloud. Read aloud until you are satisfied. When explaining your favorite reasons, we should focus on the theme of "persistence and pursuit of ideals" instead of being unconstrained. If you have different understandings of the same poem, you should pay attention to integrating its views from multiple angles to avoid simplifying the answer. ④ Attention should be paid to how to understand and analyze the meaning of a poem, especially the method of linking the context or theme. )
2. What rhetorical devices are used in reading the language of poetry? Can you talk about your understanding of the connotation of poetry through these rhetorical devices?
Clarity: The following rhetorical methods are used in poetry:
1. metaphor. As the only noumenon "ideal", it is represented by rich concrete groups such as stone, fire, lamp, road, compass, boat, fairy grass and loving mother from different aspects such as hardness, heat, light, direction and carrier. Comparing it to Kissing the Arc of the Sea and the Sky, or Alarm Clock and Soap, which torments your enterprising spirit, it also expresses the profound truth that you must pay the price for adhering to your ideals from the perspectives of unreachable position, nightmare and dirt washing.
2. Contrast. For example, in "There are always people who abandon their ideals, but ideals never abandon anyone", comparing the personalized ideals with those who "abandon their ideals" shows the author's disappointment and regret that some people abandon their ideals; At the end of the article, the contrast between heroes who have lost their ideals and ordinary people shows the ironic effect of "pot calling the kettle black"-heroes who have lost their ideals are even more boring than ordinary people, which also shows how terrible the consequences will be if people lose their ideals.
3. the truth. This rhetoric is embodied in the first summary of this poem. In poetry, in addition to showing a continuation of words, it can also show admiration for sticking to ideals throughout words, which naturally leads to the following contents.
4. Other figures of speech. For example, the rhetorical way of "analogy" contained in the poem "Call the prodigal son back, the ideal is a loving mother" vividly shows the great spiritual power of the ideal; And "ideal flowering, peaches and plums should bear sweet fruits; The dual rhetoric shown in the example of "ideal bud, elm tree will have shade" and the parallelism rhetoric shown in the first and second sections can make the sentence structure neat, have a strong sense of external rhythm, and realize the expression of deep emotions while forming a majestic momentum.