The desert mountains are like snow, and the Yanshan moon is like a hook.
Don't be a golden brain, go and step on the clear autumn.
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Ma Shi expresses talent, ambition, feelings and resentment by praising or lamenting the fate of horses, and its expression method belongs to figurative style. However, this poem has unique significance in the use of metaphor.
The first sentence and the second sentence show the unique frontier battlefield scenery. At first glance, it is the application of fu method: on the continuous Yanshan mountains, a bright moon is in the sky; Wan Li in Pingsha looks like a layer of white frost and snow in the moonlight. This ordinary person may only feel sad and cold battlefield scene, which has unusual attraction for those who are determined to serve the country. The moon hook in Yanshan Mountain is exactly the same as the jade bow hung by Xiao Yue (the sixth in Nanyuan). The hook is a machete, both of which belong to weapons. It is associated with the weapon image from the bright crescent moon, which means thinking about fighting. Zhenyuan and Yuanhe periods, where the author lived, were the periods when the buffer region was extremely domineering, while Jimen area in Youzhou implied by Yanshan Mountains was the zone where the buffer region ravaged for the longest time and caused the most disasters, so the poems were still realistic. Thinking about war is also targeted. Sha Xue's flat battlefield is chilly, but it is a place where heroes can play. So these two sentences are lyrical and tangible.
When can I put on a mighty saddle and gallop on the battlefield in the crisp autumn? One of the clouds in "Ma Shi": the dragon has iron money on its back and white silver hoofs. No tapestry, who is the golden whip? The lament of "nobody weaves brocade" is the same as that expressed by He Dangluo, that is, I hope to treat a good horse as a good horse, so that it can be effective and useful. Golden gongs, brocade and golden whip are precious saddles, which symbolize the importance of horses. Obviously, this is a cry that the author is eager to make achievements but is not appreciated.
This poem and "South Garden (Why Men Don't Take Wu Gou)" are the same desire to join the army, pacify the provinces and make contributions to the country. But South Garden is a direct expression of the soul, and this poem belongs to allegorical or figurative style. It is more exciting to express one's mind directly; And with contrast, you will feel elegant and intriguing. In one or two sentences of the poem, it is also a comparison to use snow as a metaphor for sand and hook as a metaphor for the moon; It is also fun to write from a characteristic scenery and lead to lyricism. In a short span of twenty crosses, we can see the interest in comparison, and there is a ratio in interest, which greatly enriches the expressive force of poetry. Syntactically, the last two sentences are completed in one go, and when to start, there are strong expectations and sighs; The word "Clear Autumn" is forceful and novel in collocation. It is covered with clear autumn grass and yellow horse fat, which is the word "go quickly" The image implies the graceful charm of a fine horse, which is exactly what it wants, and it is really a matter of life and death. Xiao Teng is so reckless (Cao Huma described by Du Fu). Therefore, the practice of choosing words and making sentences is also a successful factor that cannot be ignored in the artistic expression of this poem.
Mashi
This horse is extraordinary, and the house star is the star.
Tap the fine bone forward, and it will bring its own copper sound.
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This poem about horses is of good quality, but not good. Describing people and themselves by imitating things is a beautiful writing method of "using topics".
The first sentence comes straight to the point, telling the truth, affirming and emphasizing that the poem shows an exceptionally good horse. The sentence is straight, and there is really not much poetry.
At first glance, the second sentence "Fangxing is a local star" seems to repeat the meaning of the first sentence. "Fangxing" refers to a horse, which means that Fangxing is the star in the sky, which means that this horse is not a vulgar thing. If the meaning of this sentence is limited to this, it is almost exactly the same as the first sentence, then it is a mistake to repeat it. There are only four sentences in the poem. If the first sentence is plain and the second sentence is repeated, then half of the poem is plain and worthless. However, if you chew it carefully, you will find that the second sentence is unique, only deliberately obscure and tortuous. There is a passage in the Book of Jin Tian: "The four stars in the room, also known as Tianma, are the main drivers. Fang Xingming is the king. " It directly links "Gongxing" and "Wang", that is to say, the situation of horses is closely related to the light and shade of the king and the chaos control of the country. Since the quality of the horse is good or bad, it goes without saying that the king is nameless and ignores political affairs. This is a kind of "infiltration method", through twists and turns, its practical meaning far exceeds the literal meaning.
Write three or four sentences about the shape and quality of horses. If the first two sentences are mainly based on judgment and reasoning, lacking vivid images, then the last two sentences are just the opposite, vivid and expressive, and express their ideas completely with images and expressions. Li He writes poems and is good at capturing images. These two sentences are outstanding examples. The writing of "skinny" shows the situation of horses; "Copper tone" describes quality and reflects the quality of horses. The thin horse indicates that the situation is not good. In the eyes of ordinary people, it is just a tired ordinary horse. Only those who really love horses and are good at watching them will not regard them as ordinary horses. "Knock thin bones forward and bring your own copper sound." Although the situation is not good, it has been tossed, but there is still a copper sound. The word "copper tone" is rich and dignified, with a three-dimensional sense. It also contains many meanings: the music of copper shows the Excellence of musical instruments, vividly shows the strength and excellent quality of horses, and makes the inner things appear as audible, visible, sensible and knowable objects. "Quality" is abstract, and "sound" is elusive. It's all "empty" things. It's really not easy to write empty words. We should turn them into reality. The poet only used five words to do it, and the visualization technique can be said to have reached the level of perfection. What is particularly commendable is that poetry creates a profound artistic conception of the relationship between things and me through the description of horses. The poet's talent is unsatisfied and his situation is bleak, just like this thin horse. When he writes about horses, he just expresses his pent-up resentment gracefully.
Poems by Li Hema
Mashi
Author: Li He
Original text:
The desert sand is like snow, and the Yanshan moon is like a hook.
Don't be a golden brain, go and step on the clear autumn.
Precautions:
1, Yanshan: the name of the mountain, in the north of Hebei Province.
2, hook: machete, is an ancient weapon, shaped like a crescent moon.
3. Jin Luo nao: A halter inlaid with gold shows the luxury of the harness.
Translation:
Wan Li in Pingsha looks like a layer of white frost and snow in the moonlight.
On the continuous Yanshan Mountains, a bright moon is in the sky, like a hook.
When will it be appreciated by the emperor,
Put a golden halter on my good horse,
Let me gallop on the battlefield in autumn and make contributions?
Appreciate:
The first sentence and the second sentence show the unique frontier battlefield scenery. At first glance, it is the application of fu method: on the continuous Yanshan mountains, a bright moon is in the sky; Wan Li in Pingsha looks like a layer of white frost and snow in the moonlight. This ordinary person may only feel sad and cold battlefield scene, which has unusual attraction for those who are determined to serve the country. The moon hook in Yanshan Mountain is exactly the same as the jade bow hung by Xiao Yue (the sixth in Nanyuan). The hook is a machete, both of which belong to weapons. It is associated with the weapon image from the bright crescent moon, which means thinking about fighting. Zhenyuan and Yuanhe periods, where the author lived, were the periods when the buffer region was extremely domineering, while Jimen area in Youzhou implied by Yanshan Mountains was the zone where the buffer region ravaged for the longest time and caused the most disasters, so the poems were still realistic. Thinking about war is also targeted. Sha Xue's flat battlefield is chilly, but it is a place where heroes can play. So these two sentences are lyrical and tangible.
When can I put on a mighty saddle and gallop on the battlefield in the crisp autumn? One of the clouds in "Ma Shi": the dragon has iron money on its back and white silver hoofs. No tapestry, who is the golden whip? The lament of "nobody weaves brocade" is the same as that expressed by He Dangluo, that is, I hope to treat a good horse as a good horse, so that it can be effective and useful. Golden gongs, brocade and golden whip are precious saddles, which symbolize the importance of horses. Obviously, this is a cry that the author is eager to make achievements but is not appreciated.
This poem and "South Garden (Why Men Don't Take Wu Gou)" are the same desire to join the army, pacify the provinces and make contributions to the country. But South Garden is a direct expression of the soul, and this poem belongs to allegorical or figurative style. It is more exciting to express one's mind directly; And with contrast, you will feel elegant and intriguing. In one or two sentences of the poem, it is also a comparison to use snow as a metaphor for sand and hook as a metaphor for the moon; It is also fun to write from a characteristic scenery and lead to lyricism. In a short span of twenty crosses, we can see the interest in comparison, and there is a ratio in interest, which greatly enriches the expressive force of poetry. Syntactically, the last two sentences are completed in one go, and when to start, there are strong expectations and sighs; The word "Clear Autumn" is forceful and novel in collocation. It is covered with clear autumn grass and yellow horse fat, which is the word "go quickly" The image implies the graceful charm of a fine horse, which is exactly what it wants, and it is really a matter of life and death. Xiao Teng is so reckless (Cao Huma described by Du Fu). Therefore, the practice of choosing words and making sentences is also a successful factor that cannot be ignored in the artistic expression of this poem.
Shige Ma's Poetic Nature
Shige Ma's Poetic Nature
Mashi
Author: Li He
The desert sand is like snow, and the Yanshan moon is like a hook.
Don't be a golden brain, go and step on the clear autumn.
Precautions:
1, desert: a vast desert. Yanshan Mountains: In Hebei Province, the east-west trend forms some important passes, such as Gubeikou and xifengkou. One is called Yanran Mountain, which is now Hang 'ai Mountain, in the west of Mongolia.
2. When: When, when.
3. Luo Jinnao: the golden halter, a halter decorated with gold.
4. Step: Run. This refers to Mercedes-Benz.
5, clear autumn: clear autumn.
Poetic:
A big desert like Wan Li is covered with snow.
There is a crescent moon on Mount Yanran.
When can it be matched with gold ornaments?
Run forward in the crisp autumn air.
Appreciate:
The first and second sentences show the unique frontier battlefield scenery, just like Fu: On the continuous Yanshan Mountains, a bright moon is in the sky; Wan Li in Pingsha looks like a layer of white frost and snow in the moonlight. This ordinary person may only feel sad and cold battlefield scene, which has unusual attraction for those who are determined to serve the country. The moon hook in Yanshan Mountain is just like the jade bow hung by Xiao Yue as a curtain. The hook is a machete and belongs to the jade bow. From the bright crescent moon, it is associated with the image of a weapon, which means thinking about fighting. When the author lived in Zhenyuan (785 -805) and Yuanhe (806 -820), it was the time when the buffer region was extremely domineering, and the area around Jimen in Youzhou implied by Yanshan Mountains was the longest and hardest-hit area in the buffer region, so the poetry was still realistic. Thinking about war is also targeted. Sha Xue's flat battlefield is chilly, but it is a place where heroes can play. Therefore, these two sentences are actually the lyricism of the last two sentences, which has a rising significance.
In three or four sentences, the poet expresses his feelings through horses: when can he put on a mighty saddle and gallop on the battlefield in autumn and make great achievements? "Ma Shi Long Ji Sticks Money" says that the dragon's back is tied with money, and the silver hoof steps on smoke. No tapestry, who is the golden whip? Among them, the sigh of "nobody brocade" means the same as "he is a troublemaker", that is, he hopes to treat a good horse as a good horse, which is effective and useful. Golden gongs, brocade and golden whip are precious saddles, which symbolize the importance of horses. This is the cry of the author who is eager to make achievements but is not appreciated.
This poem and "Why Don't Nanyuan Men Take Wu Gou" are the same eager desire to join the army, pacify the provinces and make contributions to the country. Thirteen Poems of South Garden is a direct spiritual expression, and this poem belongs to allegorical or figurative style. It is more exciting to express one's mind directly; The use of metaphor is euphemistic and intriguing. The first and second sentences of the poem compare snow to sand and hook to the moon. It is also fun to write from a characteristic scenery and lead to lyricism. In a short span of twenty crosses, we can see the interest in comparison, and there is a ratio in interest, which greatly enriches the expressive force of poetry. Syntactically, the last two sentences are done in one go, and when asking questions, they have a strong sense of infinite hope and are full of sighs; While stepping on the word "clear autumn", the tone is sonorous and the word collocation is novel. When the word "clear autumn" is used, the grass is yellow horse and fat, and it is only driven by the word "go quickly". The image implies that the horse is light and elegant, which is exactly what it wants, and it is really worthy of life and death. Xiao Teng is so reckless (Cao Huma described by Du Fu). Therefore, the practice of choosing words and making sentences is also a successful factor that cannot be ignored in the artistic expression of this poem.