Thanks to the teacher's composition, a flower thanks to the sun, because the sun feeds it to grow; The eagle thanks the blue sky, because the blue sky allows it to fly freely; Teacher, I thank you, because you gave us knowledge and let us grow up healthily.
Once, I was ill for a week, and I couldn't get well after taking medicine. You found me an earthwork medicine and cured me of my illness. The grades have dropped. You help me patiently until my grades improve. Before the exam, the teacher always reminds us to do the questions carefully and check. When we came home from school, it was our dear teacher who was still correcting homework on that shabby desk.
Teacher, thank you for your selfless dedication and for teaching us knowledge. When we grow up, but you are old, my love for you will never be? Old? It is said that my daughter is my mother's sweet little cotton-padded jacket. I would like to be your intimate little cotton-padded jacket, stay with you and make you feel warm forever.
The composition of correcting comments lacks vivid descriptions of the cases where the teacher cares about me. The sketch is dull, without attractive scene description and emotional input. I hope to make the article detailed and appropriate and highlight the center with examples.
Thank the teacher for the second composition? Teacher? What a sacred and kind name! People say that children are seedlings and flowers, so teachers are the hardest gardeners in the garden. He silently watered the flower of hope and the tree of pillars with his own sweat. The teacher taught us knowledge and freed us from childish ignorance. The teacher taught us the philosophy of life and made us understand the meaning of life!
I want to thank Miss Li! I still remember the mid-term exam clearly. After the results came out, my heart suddenly swung to the bottom, because the results were far from my ideal results. Just then, our head teacher, Miss Li, called me to her office. I thought she must be criticizing me, so I knocked on the office door with a nervous heart. However, to my surprise, she said a lot to me without a word of blame. Just earnestly told me to study hard and listen carefully. I listened carefully, kept every word of the teacher in my heart, and secretly made up my mind to study harder in the future and never live up to the teacher's expectations!
So whenever I am absent-minded or slack in class, what Mr. Li said will echo in my ears, reminding me to listen carefully and study hard at all times.
As the saying goes, many things grind. After several months of hard work, I finally achieved satisfactory results in the final exam. I am very happy. I thank you, Miss Li! Because if it weren't for the encouragement you said to me, I might miss the opportunity to work hard because I was immersed in disappointment.
Another teacher also taught me a lot. She is our PE teacher, Miss Zhang.
My character has always been stubborn, and I never admit my mistake easily, especially in my opinion, I have done nothing wrong. During the big break that day, we also practiced skipping rope with long ropes as usual. But before everyone arrived, a classmate in our class asked me to shake the rope in an imperative tone that I hated. I can't stand such a person who likes to order others but refuses to act, so I am very angry and said to her angrily? I won't shake it. What can you do? ! ? Then he turned and left. I didn't expect her to call teacher Zhang. Her behavior made me more disgusted with her, so I began to scold her. Teacher Zhang probably felt wronged when he heard me swear, so he said he didn't want me to shake the rope and let me quit the long rope team. Now my stubbornness has come up. Don't shake it if you don't shake it. If it's a big deal, I'll rest! So I turned around and left.
But who knows, now all the students in the long rope team in our class are? Strike? Yes! This is what I didn't expect. In fact, Mr Zhang Can chose people from other classes. It is good for him to take part in the regional sports meeting. Others can't get in if they want to, but our class has to leave. At that time, teacher Zhang could make us all quit by saying a word casually, but she took a tolerant attitude towards our impulse. She tolerated my willfulness and impulsiveness and made me rejoin the long rope team. Later, other students followed suit. Suddenly I feel like an unreasonable child, because a classmate haggles over every ounce. I'm so stingy! Even if I am stubborn, I have to admit that I am wrong, and there is teacher Zhang, who taught me what tolerance is with her actions! Teacher Zhang, I want to say, thank you!
In fact, every teacher deserves our sincere thanks, because every teacher has put a lot of effort into his students. It is the teacher who taught us knowledge, who taught us to be human, who taught us to grow up and be grateful! Teacher's Day is coming, and I want to sincerely say to every teacher: Thank you, teacher! ?
The narrative of correcting comments tells the story between the little author and his two teachers and expresses the author's gratitude to the teachers. The selection of materials is close to life and gives people a sense of reality. The disadvantage is that the narrative effect of the seventh paragraph is not good, which seems a bit verbose.
Thank you for your hand,
Teach me a lot of knowledge.
Thank you for what you said,
Let me know the truth of being a man.
Thank you for your smile,
This makes me full of confidence.
Those hands
Those words
That smile
Let me know the truth, goodness and beauty in the world.
Who let me know so much?
It is you!
My beloved teacher!
Countless words of thanks,
I can't express my gratitude to you.
Teacher, I will always respect the teacher.
Correcting comments is a fresh and beautiful poem. Deep gratitude to the teacher is revealed between the lines. ? Thank you for your hands, which taught me a lot of knowledge. Thank you for those words, let me know the truth of being a man. Thank you for your smile, which makes me full of confidence? Parallelism enhances the expression effect and expresses gratitude to the teacher. ? Who let me know so much? A rhetorical question emphasizes the role of the teacher. It is not easy for a first-grade child to write such a poem with sincere feelings.