"Blinally Questioning" Conceptual Practice for New Material Composition
Guangdong Zhang Jinwen
Title
Reading The following little poem is composed according to the requirements.
We have lost trust by questioning blindly/Having become accustomed to criticism, we have forgotten to praise/Indulge in resistance and rebellion, capturing the arrogant pleasure/But/If only denial and dissatisfaction remain/Where will we be? Place happiness and joy everywhere?
Please write an article based on the content of the poem, combined with your knowledge and experience, with your own purpose and title, no less than 800 words.
Writing Tips
1. Look at the content and understand the relationship
The poem involves two aspects of content. On the one hand, it is the more similar attitude or approach written before: "Blindly questioning", "Accustomed to criticism", "Addicted to resistance and rebellion", "Negative and dissatisfied"; on the other hand, the impact of previous attitudes or practices, which are: "lost trust" and "forgot to praise" "Capture the arrogant pleasure" "Where to put happiness and joy".
2. Grasp the key points and identify tendencies
Judging from the modifiers "blindly", "habitual", "obsessed" and "condescending", the person who asked the question does not agree with this attitude or approach , thus raising the question "Where will we place happiness and happiness?", implying that this approach is not conducive to our placement of happiness and happiness.
This is a very realistic topic. The focus of the writing is to combine my own understanding and experience to talk about my views on "blindly questioning". If you avoid the practice of "blindly questioning" and only talk about how to be happy (such as "simplicity is happiness", "happiness is around you", etc.), or you only explore the reasons why people "blindly question" and don't talk about this The influence of similar practices means that the understanding of the topic materials is not comprehensive enough and does not meet the requirements of the question writer.
Conception guidance
Conception direction one:
Point out the negative impact of "blindly questioning" attitudes and practices, call for "trust" and "praise", ***Create a happy life. Questioning things indiscriminately is detrimental to others, ourselves and society. Being detrimental to others – hurts feelings, affects relationships, demotivates. It is not good for oneself - it is easy to form prejudices, become paranoid, lose trust, forget to praise, and is not conducive to personal progress. It is bad for society - it spreads negative emotions and dissipates positive energy. In an era when "paranoia" is prevalent, people's emotions can easily be manipulated. The intention can be refined as follows:
Don’t let doubts overwhelm praise (applicable to relationships between parents and children, doctors and patients, teachers and students, colleagues, bosses and subordinates, etc.);
Don’t let doubts get in the way The path of good people to do good;
Leave some space for praise, blind questioning is not conducive to the development of sports;
Rebellion in adolescence should be stopped in moderation;
Objective reporting Convey strength and blindly question and create panic.
Conceptual direction two:
Blind denial is not conducive to social development, while rational questioning is conducive to people's happiness. Rational questioners are often outstanding talents with virtue, knowledge and courage. On the surface, their doubts appear to be opposition to people and things, but in essence they are heartfelt support and a persistent pursuit of perfection. The increase in doubts is a manifestation of the increased awareness of citizen participation and the emphasis on citizen speech. In the long run, various undertakings will surely make great progress.
Material link
1. The "China Social Mentality Research Report 2012-2013" ("Social Mentality Blue Book") released by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences on January 7, 2013 shows that, The overall trust index in Chinese society has further declined, falling below the "passing line" of 60 points. Interpersonal distrust has further expanded, with less than half of the respondents believing that most people in society are trustworthy; and distrust between groups is also deepening and solidifying, manifested in many major social issues such as the police and the public, doctors and patients, and private and commercial communities. Distrust between relationships.
2. "The most beautiful anti-cancer girl" Lu Ruoqing used Weibo to record anti-cancer stories, but was suspected to be a fictional character hyped by the Internet. The beautiful girl who should have received support has been questioned. harm.
3. A teacher from a primary school in Haikou received a wallet found by a student. After many twists and turns to contact the owner, he was met with questions from the other party - "Why is there less money in the wallet?" When good deeds are questioned, this harms the dignity and reputation of well-intentioned people.
4. After the Ya'an earthquake, the Red Cross Society of China called on all walks of life to actively donate money and materials to participate in disaster relief. However, its credibility has been questioned by some people, and there are even "Shenzhen Red Cross Fundraising for the Earthquake" , citizens detoured" incident. Many entertainment stars have joined in the disaster relief effort, but as the amount of donations was revealed, many netizens have become suspicious of the stars' performance. The female anchor who wore a wedding dress to broadcast the broadcast and the entrepreneur who went to the disaster area to distribute money were questioned as "show" and "hype". Guan Yinghan, a centenarian in Shenyang, donated 103,000 yuan to the Lushan earthquake-stricken area. Some netizens praised him as "the most beautiful grandpa." Some netizens suspected that the old man might be involved in charity fraud. Some netizens even suspected that the old man was a "pawn boy" for the Red Cross. Gun user".
5. The "Red Head Car" public welfare fleet in Hefei City, Anhui Province has been praised by all walks of life, but this free public welfare service has encountered a lack of reality.
Few citizens took the initiative to stop cars. When volunteers stopped to introduce their identities and asked if they needed help, they also encountered "cold faces" from citizens.
6. Incidents of child abuse by kindergarten teachers make parents worried. According to reports, some parents put bugs on their children; some parents go around the kindergarten five times a day to secretly observe their children; in kindergartens without monitoring facilities, parents strongly demand the installation of cameras; in kindergartens with cameras, a monitoring room It was packed with parents.
(Excerpted from "China Youth Daily" on October 8, 2012)
7. Crazy doubts blinded the eyes. In an era when "paranoia" is prevalent, people easily lose their ability to make independent judgments, and their emotions are easily manipulated. Regarding Han Han and Lu Ruoqing, how many doubters have become blind followers in the manic noise, or just to enjoy the superiority and pleasure brought by this questioning carnival.
(Excerpted from "Chongqing Times" on May 24, 2012)
8. Many corruption and food safety issues have been made public amid doubts from netizens.
9. Scholar Ai Jun believes that habitual questioning is an inevitable phenomenon in the period of social transformation. As a society becomes more open and democratic, there will be more and more doubts. This is a reflection of the improvement of the quality of citizens and an objective manifestation of the increasing protection of citizens’ freedom of speech in the process of democratization.
10. In the "2013 Global Trust Survey Report" released by the famous public relations company Edelman, a survey was conducted on who the "highly educated people" trust in 26 countries. The “highly educated people” here refer to middle-aged respondents in the country under investigation who have a certain income and education and are interested in political affairs. The survey results show that highly educated people in most countries are skeptical of the government, but the backbone of social affairs in China have great trust in the government.
11. Any good system design starts from distrust to build the trust that is ultimately achieved. Similarly, during the operation of the system, only if it can still withstand the "test" under habitual questioning can the system be said to be successfully implemented. This is particularly important for public authorities.
(Excerpted from "Yanjing Metropolis Daily" on July 6, 2012)
Example 1 of a masterpiece
Don't let doubts and dissatisfaction drive away beauty
Foshan Nanhai Middle School Pan Jiaxin
In a dance rehearsal, the instructor suggested that students with irregular dance movements should not stand out too much. She said that the audience is always very sensitive to shortcomings when watching a performance. A certain beautiful movement of your dance may be ignored, but as long as you make a small mistake, you will be immediately discovered.
It may be human nature to easily discover the shortcomings of others. There is a type of people in society: with their critical eyes, keen sense of smell and extensive information network, they can always find out the flaws of something with their superhuman insight and sense of trend when people express praise and reverence for it. Past events or shortcomings can create a sensational effect, quickly catch people's attention, and lead public opinion in the direction of questioning and denial. Celebrities donated money to disaster-stricken areas, but some criticized them as "hypocritical" and others accused them of "donating too little"; entrepreneurs went to disaster-stricken areas to give cash to victims, but were questioned as "hype"; news anchors with hoarse voices still insisted on reporting on disaster relief developments, and were judged It's "for show". Even Lei Feng, a role model who has been away for many years, was questioned: He did good deeds without leaving his name, why did he leave so many photos? It’s really like being “shot even while lying down”!
Some people disagree. Without the questioning spirit of "finding fault with the eggs", how can society develop and progress? Of course, it is definitely not normal for everyone to agree on everything. However, would it be conducive to the development of charity if we indiscriminately deny and question those who sincerely do good deeds, and vent their dissatisfaction at will? If there is only blind criticism and endless questioning of this society, can society develop and progress? Of course not. Questioning people who sincerely do good deeds is likely to block people from doing good deeds.
In China, where respecting the elderly and caring for the young is a common practice, tragedies occur where the elderly fall and have no one to help them. “Saving one life is better than building a seven-level pagoda.” What makes people afraid to extend a helping hand? When every class and department of a society is questioned and denied, and there is distrust among people, then the society will inevitably be paralyzed and the interpersonal network will inevitably break down.
A philosopher once said that the most terrifying thing about life is not that there is a desert in front of you, but that there is no oasis in your heart. This reminds people of the Peng Yu case in Nanjing and the Little Yueyue incident in Foshan, which have been mentioned too many times. In addition to the grief, we should think about it. In addition to the loss of morality, these incidents reflect the lack of trust! Don't let doubts and dissatisfaction change people's hearts for goodness and beauty!
I once read an article about a mother who banned her children from reading fairy tale books before they entered elementary school. She believes that fairy tale books will make children think that beautiful princesses will live happily with handsome princes, which will lead children to form a world view of "Life is perfect", which is inconsistent with the cruel reality. I understand how mothers protect their children, but I prefer to believe that the world is beautiful and hope that the prince and princess will eventually get married. If you really can't 100% trust the people and things around you, then please stop and think about it before questioning and criticizing, and don't jump to conclusions just to vent your anger or seek quick results.
Because our irresponsible denial and dissatisfaction may affect the happiness and happiness of others, and may also make ourselves further and further away from happiness. Learn to trust, learn to praise, don't let doubts and dissatisfaction drive away the beauty!
Comments
This article starts from life experience, talks about the characteristics of people who like to question, and uses examples to talk about blind questioning of doing good deeds that will block people's way of doing good, and points out that habitual questioning and denial Finally, hope is expressed for the profound impact one has on others and society. The purpose is clear and prominent, the thinking is clear, and the argument is strong. The materials are typical and novel, and have strong practical relevance. The language expression is smooth and natural, full of emotion and thought-provoking.
Example 2 of excellent works
Shocking all the way
Huo Wanjun from Nanhai Middle School in Foshan
I dragged the suitcase with my left hand and a large bag with my right hand She was carrying gifts for relatives and friends, her crossbody bag was stuffed with personal belongings, and she was carrying a heavy computer bag on her right arm. She was walking with difficulty among the crowds of people entering the train station, about to embark on her way home.
"Sister, are you going back to Changsha?" A strange man walked towards me easily, with a smile on his face like the sunshine at that time. I nodded. "Let me get some for you, the luggage is almost crushing you!" As soon as I finished speaking, a strong and strong hand stretched out to take away my suitcase. I quickly dodged away, saying that I didn't need it - he looked like a gentleman, with smooth and shiny hair, smooth and shiny leather shoes, and that smooth and shiny smile, so he must have some evil intentions.
When I got on the train and opened my laptop to receive emails, a gentle "girl" sounded beside me. Soon enough, I closed the screen with a snap, hugged the computer tightly and leaned back. "Girl, don't be nervous. I'm the waiter. What kind of drink would you like?" "No, I'll bring my own water..." It wasn't until the waiter left that I breathed a sigh of relief and found that in my hand Holding a handful of sweat. Who knows if this waiter is a liar, so beware! I remind myself.
The scenery outside the window is fleeting, the sun is shining warmly on my body, and I feel very comfortable. It was almost noon, and lunch boxes started to be sold, and people slowly gathered towards the lunch selling point like a trickle. The carriage became lively, and my relaxed nerves became tense: too many people can cause problems, so be careful!
The carriage was filled with the aroma of food, and the people around me were eating with relish. I was also hungry, and I really wanted to gobble it up like the uncle next to me, as a sacrifice to the temple of the five internal organs. However, reports about "gutter oil", "instant chicken" and "bleached yuba" come one after another, and the food outside can't be trusted! So even though my stomach was growling with hunger, I kept comforting myself - there was no guarantee that the meat in the lunch box was free of clenbuterol, that the Chinese cabbage must have been big and strong after applying a lot of pesticides, and that the rice might contain something. With special chemicals, the lunch box may be unqualified! There is nothing trustworthy in this world, it is better not to eat!
Along the way, people gathered around and chatted lively. They were talking and laughing, like a family. I glanced out the window, keeping my distance from everyone, just waiting for the train to arrive at its destination. A middle-aged woman glanced at me, and I quickly looked at the luggage next to me. Fortunately, they were all there!
"Passengers arriving in Changsha, please collect your luggage and get off the bus!"
My heart finally felt happy and I was home! I dragged a lot of luggage and prepared to get off the bus. Just as I was about to step out of the car door, I was stunned - was I getting off in Changsha? I began to doubt myself...
Comments
This article is cleverly conceived. It says that "I" was nervous on the way home and always looked at the people and things around me with questioning eyes. . The plot of "doubting oneself" at the end is intriguing and implies the author's view on the attitude of "blindly questioning". The material comes from life, and the story seems to be happening around us, with a strong sense of reality. The author's behavioral and psychological portrayal of the characters is relatively detailed, and the characters' personalities are distinctive and outstanding.