Two guests followed me and walked through the yellow clay board together. By this time, it was first frost, and all the leaves had fallen out.
Our figure was reflected on the ground, and we looked up and saw the bright moon hanging high. Looking around, I am very happy; So as they walked, they sang poems and rewarded each other.
After a while, I said regretfully, "There are guests without wine, and there is wine without food." The moonlight is bright and the breeze is blowing gently. How can I spend such a wonderful night? A guest said, "Tonight, I cast my net and caught a fish with a big mouth and fine scales, which is shaped like a bass in Wusong River.
However, where can I buy wine? "I went home to discuss with my wife, who said," I have a barrel of wine, which I have kept for a long time for a rainy day. "In this way, we visited the bottom of Chibi again with wine and fish.
The flowing water of the Yangtze River makes a sound, and the steep bank of the river is steep; The mountains are high and the moon is small, the water level drops and the rocks are exposed. It's just how many days have passed, and I can't recognize the river view I saw last time! I lifted my skirt and went ashore, stepping on steep rocks and pushing aside messy weeds; Crouching on the strange stone in the shape of tiger and leopard, sometimes pulling the branches in the shape of dragon, climbing the cliff where birds of prey nest and overlooking the deep palace of Feng Yi, the water god.
Neither guest can follow me to such a high place. I whistled, the vegetation shook, the mountains sang with me, the deep valleys echoed, the wind surrounded and the waves were rough.
I don't feel sad. I feel scared. I think it's horrible here. I can't stay long. Go back to the boat, row the boat to the middle of the river, let it drift and stop there.
It's nearly midnight. Looking around, I feel very cold and lonely. There happened to be a crane flying across the river from the east, with wings as big as wheels. Kuroha on his tail was a black skirt and dressed in white. It suddenly stretched out its voice and cried, wiping our boat and flying west.
After a while, the guests left and I went home to sleep. I dreamed that a Taoist priest, dressed in feathers, walked briskly to your Excellency Lingao, bowed to me and said, "Did you have a good trip to Chibi?" I asked his name, but he bowed his head and didn't answer.
"oh! Oh, dear! I know everything about you. Didn't you fly over to call me last night? " The Taoist priest turned to laugh, and I suddenly realized.
When I opened the door, I couldn't see where he was.
2. Expand the first paragraph of "Red Cliff Fu" (translation)
This year1October 15, I set out from Tang Xue and prepared to return to Lingaoge. Two guests followed me and walked through the yellow clay board together. By this time, it was first frost, and all the leaves had fallen out. Our figure was reflected on the ground, and we looked up and saw the bright moon hanging high. Looking around, I am very happy; So as they walked, they sang poems and rewarded each other.
After a while, I said regretfully, "There are guests without wine, and there is wine without food." The moonlight is bright and the breeze is blowing gently. How can I spend such a wonderful night? A guest said, "Tonight, I cast my net and caught a fish with a big mouth and fine scales, which is shaped like a bass in Wusong River. But where can I get wine? "I went home to discuss with my wife, who said," I have a barrel of wine, which I have kept for a long time for a rainy day. "
In this way, we visited the bottom of Chibi again with wine and fish. The flowing water of the Yangtze River makes a sound, and the steep bank of the river is steep; The mountains are high and the moon is small, the water level drops and the rocks are exposed. It's just how many days have passed, and I can't recognize the river view I saw last time! I lifted my skirt and went ashore, stepping on steep rocks and pushing aside messy weeds; Crouching on the strange stone in the shape of tiger and leopard, sometimes pulling the branches in the shape of dragon, climbing the cliff where birds of prey nest and overlooking the deep palace of Feng Yi, the water god. Neither guest can follow me to such a high place. I whistled, the vegetation shook, the mountains sang with me, the deep valleys echoed, the wind surrounded and the waves were rough. I don't feel sad. I feel scared. I think it's horrible here. I can't stay long. Go back to the boat, row the boat to the middle of the river, let it drift and stop there.
It's nearly midnight. Looking around, I feel very cold and lonely. There happened to be a crane flying across the river from the east, with wings as big as wheels. Kuroha on his tail was a black skirt and dressed in white. It suddenly stretched out its voice and cried, wiping our boat and flying west.
After a while, the guests left and I went home to sleep. I dreamed that a Taoist priest, dressed in feathers, walked briskly to your Excellency Lingao, bowed to me and said, "Did you have a good trip to Chibi?" I asked his name, but he bowed his head and didn't answer. "oh! Oh, dear! I know everything about you. Didn't you fly over to call me last night? " The Taoist priest turned to laugh, and I suddenly realized. When I opened the door, I couldn't see where he was.
3. Red Cliff Fu rewrites the narrative with 800 words. In autumn in Ren Xu, on July 16, my friends and I went boating under Chibi. The breeze blows gently, but the waves are quiet. Raise a glass to the other half, and recite the chapter "My My Fair Lady" in the bright moon. After a while, the bright moon rose from the back of Dongshan and moved back and forth between Dousu and Niusu. White fog streaked across the river and covered the sky. Let the boat drift everywhere and cross the vast river. When moving forward, it's like riding the wind in the air. I don't know where I will stop. I feel as light as if I'm leaving this world and flying away, like a Taoist feather.
At this time, I was happy to drink, knock on the side of the boat, beat the time and sing in response. The song sings: "A boat made of osmanthus wood has paddles made of blue wood, which cut clear waves in the moonlight, and the boat goes upstream on the floating water in the moonlight. My heart is in the distance, looking forward to a beautiful ideal, but in the horizon. " There are guests who can play the flute, and the flute is accompanied by songs in rhythm. The flute makes a sound: like resentment, like longing, like sobbing, like talking, and the sound echoes on the river, like a filament. Can make the dragon in the deep valley dance for it, can make the widow in the lonely boat cry for it.
I also looked sad, adjusted my skirt and sat up straight, asking the guest, "(Xiao Sheng) Why are you so sad?" The guest replied: "The moon stars are rare, and birds fly south." Isn't this a poem by Cao Gong and Meng De? You can see Xiakou in the west and Wuchang in the east. The mountains and rivers are endless, and at first glance it is gloomy. Isn't that where Cao Mengde was besieged by Zhou Yu? At the beginning, Jingzhou was captured, Jiangling was captured, and it went down the Yangtze River. His warships are connected end to end, stretching for thousands of miles, and the sky is full of flags. Facing the great river, he poured wine and recited poems with a spear. He used to be a contemporary hero, but where is he now? Besides, you and I are fishing and chopping wood in a small continent in the middle of the river, with fish and shrimp as partners and elk as friends. We drove this boat (on the river) and raised cups to toast each other, just like a mayfly in the vast world and as small as a millet in the sea. Sigh that our life is only a short moment, and envy the endless Yangtze River. (I want to) travel around the world hand in hand with the gods and embrace the bright moon forever. Knowing that these can't be realized after all, I have to turn my regret into a flute and entrust it to the sad autumn wind. "
I asked, "Do you know this water and the moon? Passing away is like this water, but it doesn't really pass away; When there is a shortage of wheels, like this month, it is not profitable after all. It can be seen that from the changeable side of things, there is no moment between heaven and earth; From the unchangeable side, everything is as endless as one's own life. What is there to envy? Besides, between heaven and earth, everything belongs to it, and if it is not what it should be, it won't even get a penny. Only the breeze on the river and the bright moon in the mountains can hear the sound in the ears and draw all kinds of colors in the eyes. Getting these things will not be banned, and there will be no worries if you feel it. This is an inexhaustible treasure (gift) of nature, and you and I can enjoy it together. "
The guest smiled happily, washed the glass and filled it again. All the vegetables and fruits have been eaten, and the cups and plates are in a mess. Everyone slept on the boat, leaning against each other, and unconsciously, the white dawn had appeared in the East.
Who can help me? The first paragraph of Su Shi's Red Cliff Fu is a composition.
-Reading Su Shi's Red Cliff Fu
Xiao Jiang said, "I feel detached after learning" Fu on the Red Wall ". However, the wind in the river and the bright moon in the mountains are beautiful when they meet. They are inexhaustible treasures of the creator and suitable places for me and my son. You see how well Su Shi said, let the laity make a living, and I will return to nature and find my true self in the beautiful scenery! " Say, oblique 45 elevation of the window, ignore us.
Of course, I invented this story. If we really interpret Su Shi in this way, we really misunderstand him.
Before he went to Huangzhou, Su Shi had boundless scenery and was treated like a star wherever he went. How lonely Su Shi should be when he came to Huangzhou, and all his relatives and friends avoided it like the plague. Such a life experience, such a big setback, and people who have never experienced it are not qualified to talk about optimism and openness at all.
I thought of Shi Tiesheng, a paraplegic in the best years, how he spent sleepless nights and how hard he used to digest.
"I can hardly hear his complaints, even when I talk about my illness, I will smile. Perhaps he is the most hateful person in the world, but every word he writes contains deep love. Love is his position, his starting point and his ultimate concern. In my distant Qingpingwan, a small mountain village on the Loess Plateau in northern Shaanxi, what he hates most should be, "The sky is yellow and the sun is white. The window paper in the window hole was hit by the wind and sand. "It was in such a terrible place that he fell ill," his waist and legs hurt badly ",and the root of paraplegia fell there, but he didn't ask the root of his pain. He wrote that when he was lying in bed alone, "that day, the captain sent a bowl of white buns." "Love is that simple. Love is not morality, and there is no need for literati to draw moral and spiritual boundaries. Love is "a bowl of steamed buns sent by the captain". In his pen, in his heart, all the creatures struggling at the bottom of society are full of love. "
I read this passage on Chen Qiwen's blog "Going to Ditan". At that moment, I suddenly found myself so small and humble. I still have a long way to go from Su Shi's detachment.
In our life, we will encounter many setbacks and disappointments, but compared with the experiences of Su Shi and Shi Tiesheng, they are so insignificant. Now that I think about it, my little nose and eyes are really not on the table.
I hope that in my later life, if one day, my body will be bound by tangible or intangible things again. I will think of Su Shi and his Red Cliff Fu, and I will draw spiritual strength from his works again, so that my paralyzed soul can stand up again. With him, I will get a kind of peace of mind, a kind of detachment that I can see through, and a kind of happiness that is touched by a pool of water!
5. Rewrite Su Shi's prose version of Red Cliff Fu in autumn. On July 16, Perilla and his guests rowed on the river at the foot of Chibi Mountain. At this time, the cool breeze in Xu Lai made the water calm. The host raised a glass to propose a toast to the guests, reciting the poem "Bright Moon" while reciting the "graceful and restrained" chapter. Water and light are associated with the color of rivers. Let this reed-like boat drift at will and float on the vast and boundless river. It feels like flying in the wind in space, but I don't know where to go. I feel high again, just like leaving this world without any attachments and flying to fairyland.
At this time, I was so happy that I knocked on the side of the boat and sang. The lyrics read: "Ah, paddles made of sweet-scented osmanthus, rowing a crystal river, upstream on the moonlight river; My feelings, how far away, the saint I yearn for seems to be in the horizon. " One of the guests plays the flute, so it should be coordinated according to the timbre and beat of the song. Xiao Sheng's wailing seems to be sad, nostalgic, crying, appealing, and lingering. This rustling sound makes the dragon hidden in the deep stream listen.
Perilla's face changed with sadness. He adjusted his skirt and sat down seriously. He asked the guest, "Why are you so sad?" The guest replied, "Isn't this a poem by Cao Mengde? It is expected to reach Xiakou in the west and Wuchang in the east. Mountains are intertwined with water, and trees are dense green. Isn't this where Cao Mengde was defeated by Zhou Yu? " But where is it now? Besides, I am fishing and chopping wood with you on the riverside and sandbar, taking fish and shrimp as partners, elk as friends, driving a boat like a leaf, lifting a gourd like a wine vessel and toasting each other. Life is temporarily nailed between heaven and earth like a ephemera, as small as a drop in the ocean. I sigh that life is fleeting, and I envy the surging waters of the Yangtze River. I just want to hold the soaring fairy.
Perilla said: "guests also know that water and the moon always flow like this, but it will never be exhausted. The moon is always round and round, but it will not increase." If we look at its changing side, everything between heaven and earth, even in the blink of an eye, can't stay the same. If we look at it from its unchanging side, then everything and human beings will not disappear. Why envy the endless Yangtze River? Besides, between heaven and earth, everything has its own owner. If it's not mine, even a little bit can't be used. Only the breeze on the river and the bright moon on the mountain sound pleasant and look pleasing to the eye. No one can forbid it and enjoy it endlessly. This is the infinity of nature.
When the guests heard this, they all smiled happily, so they all washed and drank. Until all the vegetables and fruits have been eaten, the cups and plates are not put in place. Everyone on the boat leaned against me and I slept next to you. Before I knew it, the eastern sky turned white.
6. An analysis of the connotation of the 400-word composition "Epanggong Fu" in the first paragraph of "Chibi Fu"
Epang Palace by Du Mu, a poet in Tang Dynasty
Fu is famous for its high ideological and artistic quality.
Achievement occupies a place in the history of China literature.
It slowly became a colorful article.
Li's Immortal Beauty and Its Unique Politics
The significance of governance and the warning value of reality are left to
Give a profound inspiration to future generations.
Epang Palace, the name of Qin Gong, has its address today.
Southwest of Xi City, Shaanxi Province. Unification of Qin Shihuang
After the Six Kingdoms, I thought the palace in Xianyang, the capital, was also there.
Small, then built in 2 12 BC.
In, more than 700,000 people died in Weishui.
Epang Palace will be built in the south, "the front hall will be built first."
Room, 500 steps from east to west, 50 feet from north to south,
You can sit above ten thousand people and build under five flags. "
(Historical Records of Qin Shihuang). This palace is not built.
Yes, the state of Qin has perished. Xiang Yu invaded Xianyang,
Set it on fire. Fang, are you still around?
"It's near Xianyang, called Afang."
(Note on Yan Shigu's biography of Hanshu Jia Shan). also
It is said that because of its shape, "all four rooms are very wide" (Statement 4
The corner has a bent eaves). Du Mu in On
The confidante article reveals the "Shuo" Bao Li (Tang Jing
The palace is large and has a wide range, so
Write "Epang Palace Fu". "("Selected Works of Fan Chuan ")
Volume 16) shows that this is borrowed from Qin Jingtang.
, the purpose is to borrow this fu to remonstrate, hope.
I hope Tang Jingzong and Li Zhan will destroy themselves from the Qin Dynasty.
Learn from historical facts and avoid repetition.
Quote. Epang Palace clothes are not nostalgia,
But for reality, poets are famous for their richness.
Rich in gorgeous imagination and bold and peculiar exaggeration.
Try to draw and render with a giant pen like a rafter.
Between things, intellectual, a "pressure of three hundred.
Li Yu's palace stands in front of the readers.
Yes To some extent, it is "one side"
Prince Gong built Epang Palace. So if
At this point, you have to marvel at the poets in Epang Palace.
Clever description and rendering and superb
Artistic expression.
As a style, Fu has its own characteristics.
Specific writing norms. Liu Xie's Wen Xin Diao
Long Shi said to Fu Shuo, "What people give is what shops take."
Writing is also a writing matter. "That is to say,
Fu needs to describe the characteristics of objective things in detail.
Signs, preferably elaborately exaggerated functions, are achieved.
Borrow scenery to express emotion and express ambition.
Yes The so-called "shop" is for things.
Internal features should be developed in as much detail as possible.
7. Imitate the original Red Cliff Fu. When I first read this article, I felt different. After reading it carefully, I added more products to play with, and I felt that this article was exquisite.
This article describes Su Shi's tour of Chibi with his guests, and the full text is very smooth.
I think the scenery in the article is well described: "The moon rises above the East Mountain and lingers between bullfights. The white dew crosses the river,
Water meets the sky. Let the boat float on the boundless river and cross the boundless river. Vast as the wind in Feng Xu, I don't know where it ends; Floating like an independent world, feathering into a fairy. "Just a few words, but summed up all the surrounding scenes, so that readers have an immersive feeling, at the same time, the combination of sentence length, catchy, phonological harmony.
This article of Su Shi is similar to his previous works, which is the author's own emotional change. Studying Su Shi's previous works, whether poems or articles, no matter whether the author is in a good or bad mood at first, he will eventually be relieved and try his best to convince himself to get rid of suffering and get happiness for the time being!
For example, his "Water Tune" is titled "When will there be a bright moon? Asking for wine from heaven ",a poem full of romanticism, shows the author's happy mood, but then" I want to go home by the wind lest the top of the mountain is too cold ",and my mood suddenly falls into the abyss; And after that? He began to comfort himself again, saying that "people have joys and sorrows, and the moon is full of ups and downs. This matter is difficult to complete in ancient times." At last, he was suddenly enlightened and said the famous sentence "I wish people would live for a long time, and cicadas would sing a thousand miles", and his unhappiness was relieved.
The same is true of this article. At first, the author was very happy when he saw the beautiful scenery of Chibi, and even sang. However, when singing "Beauty is out of reach", the author unconsciously reveals a kind of sadness, and a feeling of hard ambition emerges in the author's heart. Then, the guest's flute is a cry: if you complain, if you cry; The lingering sound adds a sense of sadness and makes the author's mood decline all the way. But instead of being depressed, he adjusted his clothes and began to argue in the preparatory course, not only to convince the guests, but also to convince himself to let go. "Gai must view it from its changers, and heaven and earth cannot last for a while; If you look at it from its unchanging point of view, then everything is endless to me. What do you envy? "The author finally got rid of it and gained temporary happiness and freedom.
Of course, such feelings are closely related to Su Shi's own life experience.
Su Shi's official career was not smooth, he was demoted many times, unappreciated, and his life was turbulent. It stands to reason that such a person should have been unable to stand the world long ago, and it is even more impossible to think that Sue travels like this. Su Shi, on the other hand, put up with it because he was proficient in Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism, and integrated them to complement each other.