The homework handed in the day before yesterday is such a poem:
Linchi feeling
When I was in decline, I still wanted to pick Zizhi. When I was drunk, I paid the bill.
Let an inkstone hide deep meaning, and give me acacia and pen embellishment.
These twenty-eight words were criticized to pieces by the teacher. The biggest problem is "pure expository writing". Ordered to rewrite.
I found such a passage in the Four Wonders of the Tang Dynasty:
Poetry is the product of thinking in images. Image is a feature that distinguishes it from other narrative reasoning and other words. As a lyric poem, it has to express the author's feelings in the image.
What the hell does this mean?
In other words, poetry should have a sense of picture! The text in the pen wants the reader to see the image, not to explain it. Let the image lyric for you!
I clearly read this passage last year and marked it. Quietly slap yourself in the mouth. ...
Pictures need to be described ...
I ask myself, come up with a few songs to verify:
Jiangcun is that thing.
Don sikongshu
Don't tie the boat when you come back from fishing,
The moon in Jiangcun falls in a deep sleep.
Even if the wind blows away overnight,
Only near the shallow water of reed flowers.
This is still an opinion. Through the description of this painting, readers see the quiet and beautiful countryside and experience the author's leisurely life.
Yang Wanli's "Su Xinshi Xugong Store"
The fence is sparse, a path leads to the distance, and the petals on the tree fall, but the shade has not yet formed.
The child ran quickly to catch the yellow butterfly, but the butterfly suddenly flew into the vegetable garden and could not be found again.
This is a combination of static and dynamic. The whole poem does not explain or explain, but reproduces the pastoral scenery of early spring with pictures, which is full of interest.
It is true that they all write poems like this. This is how good poetry is made.
Where's the homework? Draw a tiger according to the cat. I think I can almost fool the teacher's poison eye-
Forget the farm at the foot of the volcano.
Qingdai lives in the mountains,
Loose gold looks very long.
The wind blows through the shadows,
The sleeves are full of fragrance.
How do you feel that it is still written in the explanatory text?
I dare not hand in my homework again. ...