The bell in the temple rang and echoed in the empty world. Night is like a big curtain on the zenith. People at Yu Liang Ferry are clamoring to cross the river. Pedestrians walked along the sandy shore to Jiangcun in small groups. I rode alone in a boat and happily returned to Lumen. The moon in Lumeng Mountain lit up the dim shadows of the trees. How beautiful, like an ethereal fairyland. Unconsciously, I suddenly passed the place where Pang Gong lived in seclusion. The mountain gate of the cave and the path between the pine forests are all quiet and seem to be waiting for me-I am the only hermit who comes and goes alone in this fairyland.
Test analysis: (1) What you have seen, heard and felt is seriously out of touch with the original text, and 6 points will be deducted. (2) 5 points will be deducted for not using the first person.
(3) Time and space sequence is not obvious, 3 points will be deducted. (4) lack of a rhetoric, 3 points. (5) Deduct 1 minute every 15.