After a heavy rain, the pond was full of water and very calm, as if immersed in a gently polished mirror, reflecting the reflection of the house on the shore.
Suddenly there was an east wind, and the drooping willow branches danced gracefully, and the water drops on the willow branches swept through the middle of the lotus leaves, making a constant noise.
The analysis is as follows:
This poem presents readers with a picture of a pond after the rain. Judging from the images of east wind, weeping willows and lotus flowers written in the poem, the background is spring. Therefore, more precisely, it is a picture of a pond in spring after rain, which gives readers a beautiful artistic enjoyment.
The first sentence shows the quiet beauty of spring scenery on the pool after the rain. The first sentence is about the calm of the pond water surface after the rain, only vaguely revealing the word "flat". If you only look at this sentence, you will feel too ordinary, but after this sentence, it is followed by "looking at the eaves in the mirror", but it will be unexpected. The word "light grinding" is quite interesting. The giver is the spring rain, and the receiver is the pool surface. The pool surface washed by the spring rain is like a mirror that has been polished and wiped. There is a comparison between the two, and there is personification in the comparison, which makes the simple metaphor of "water is like a mirror" fresh. Readers can not only feel the unusually calm and clear state of the pool water after the spring rain, but also think of the light and soft posture of the pool surface before the drizzle. "Looking at the eaves in the mirror" creates the artistic realm of the pond after the spring rain. Accordingly, these two sentences are gentle and quiet. Even the word "indifferent", which is slightly dynamic and intentional, literally gives readers a kind of indifferent psychological feeling and appears indifferent.
Three or four sentences turn from static to static, and further write the dynamic beauty on the pool after the rain. The east wind rises suddenly, dancing the weeping willows by the pool, blowing off the raindrops covered on the slender leaves of weeping willows and splashing on the stretched lotus leaves in the pool, making a crisp and fine sound. The swaying east wind, dancing weeping willows and ten thousand lotus hearts here all have a flowing charm and abundant business, which is different from the previous two sentences. Accompanied by this, the rhythm of language potential has also changed from gentle to rapid, and every word has flown. The word "sudden emergence of a new army" first creates an abrupt trend, showing the change of scenery from static to dynamic in an instant, giving people a strong sense of movement; Then, the word "Gengzuo" is used as an echo to produce a rapid melody, thus connecting the above-mentioned tangible and intangible, dynamic and vocal scenery to form an artistic picture with both form and sound.
After the rain, the poet wrote the beauty of the scenery on the pond, which is both dynamic and static, not only rich and colorful, but also in contrast, and received the artistic effect of showing the static by moving, and making up the static by moving. The first sentence is straight, the second sentence is accepted frankly, the third sentence is given priority, and the fourth sentence is issued. This is the general method of making contract sentences (see three quotations from Yang's Tang Yin Gui Qian). The poet skillfully arranged this method, which made the language structure form and content harmonious and unified, resulting in a wonderful situation in which the scene blended and the pen moved with the scene. The above is for reference.
2. Read the ancient poem Pond after Rain and answer the following two questions: Pond after Rain.
Northern Song Dynasty? Liu Ban
After a heavy rain, the pond was full of water and very calm, as if immersed in a gently polished mirror, reflecting the reflection of the house on the shore.
Suddenly there was an east wind, and the drooping willow branches danced gracefully, and the water drops on the willow branches swept through the middle of the lotus leaves, making a constant noise.
To annotate ...
Flat: refers to the horizontal plane with the ground.
Light grinding: light grinding and light rubbing. In ancient times, copper was used as a mirror, and people could see clearly after polishing copper. Easy, easy. Polishing, wiping.
Cornice: The cornice of a house near a pond.
Lotus plumule: Lotus leaf.
Brief introduction of the author
Liu Ban (1022~ 1088), a new metaphor in the northern song dynasty, is a historian. There is Pengcheng Collection. He and his brother Chang Lu are both scholars, perhaps the most knowledgeable people in history and archaeology in the Northern Song Dynasty.
Make an appreciative comment
This poem depicts a picture of a pond after the rain. Poetry not only writes static, but also writes dynamic, with static showing dynamic, with dynamic lining static, and the combination of dynamic and static forms a pond spring scene after rain.
The first two sentences are mainly about "quietness", which describes the quiet beauty on the pool after the rain. After the rain, the lotus pond is beautiful and charming, and it says "water level", "mirror" and "cornice photo"
The last two sentences are from static to dynamic, writing about the dynamic beauty on the pool after the rain. Three or four sentences use the sound of "up and down", "weeping poplar dance" and "ten thousand points" made by raindrops on the leaves of weeping poplar blown into lotus leaves by the wind, which shows a dynamic beauty on the pool after rain.
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The east wind suddenly began to dance with weeping willows, which was even more exciting-the rain stopped and the wind stopped, and the weeping willows by the pool were dripping green. Suddenly there was a gust of wind, and thousands of willow branches fluttered gracefully. Willow seems to know, washing in the wind and rain, dancing happily in the wind. When I was dancing, I shook off all the water drops and sprinkled them on the lotus leaves in the pool, making a clicking sound. When the wind is crazy and the rain is sudden, the willow branches will not attract attention, and the sound of the rain hitting the lotus leaves will not be heard. Only when the wind stops raining and everything is silent will we notice the sudden dancing of the wind among the willows and catch the small sound of water drops on the willow branches throwing at the lotus leaves.
The chain reaction from wind to mourning dance, from mourning dance to high-pitched sound reflects the author's pleasant mentality of watching nature after rain.
Simulated examination room
Some people say that the word "light grinding" seems ordinary but quite interesting. Please talk about your understanding.
[Reference answer]
"Light grinding" means light grinding and light rubbing. In the poem, the pool surface washed by rain is compared to a lightly polished mirror, which is anthropomorphic and more innovative and artistic than the common metaphor of "the water is like a mirror". Such a slightly dynamic "light grinding" not only highlights the unusually calm and clear modality of the pool water after the rain, but also reminds people of the light and soft posture of the pool surface brushed by the drizzle with the breeze, giving people a feeling.
3. Poetry writing theory Pond on Pond Author: (Tang) Bai Juyi little doll propped up the boat and stole the white lotus.
He didn't know how to hide the trail. The duckweed on the water left a boat on the trail. Naive and lively rural children, leading the boat, secretly went to collect other people's Bai Lianhua.
When they came back, they didn't know how to cover their tracks. The boat threw the duckweed out of the water, leaving a clear waterway behind the boat. Expose your whereabouts ~ ~ Brief analysis: The author vividly depicts the innocence of a child who steals lotus flowers by line drawing. The most vivid sentence in the poem is "I don't know the hidden traces", which describes the naughty and innocent feelings of children.
Fan Wen: The sky is clear in Wan Li, and the sun shines on the earth. A group of children are playing games in a circle by the lotus pond.
A little fat man said, "I'm hungry!" " Has anyone brought food? "Everyone shook his head, and the little fat man was disappointed. At this moment, the baby dog volunteered, "I'm going to steal some lotus seeds!" ""So the baby dog took a boat to the middle of the lotus pond and secretly picked some lotus leaves. Seeing that the weather was hot, he picked some lotus leaves as hats for himself and his friends.
But he forgot to hide the trace, and the duckweed on the water was washed away by a boat. The little fat man on the shore couldn't wait for a long time, dancing and shouting: "Hurry up!" " If the owner of the lotus pond comes, it will be in trouble! "As soon as the dog landed, the little fat man couldn't wait to rush up to eat lotus seeds.
The little fat man was full and suddenly asked, "Daodao, what should the owner of the lotus pond do if he finds that there are fewer lotus seeds?" Dogway said, "Nothing! So many lotus leaves, few owners don't know! " The little fat man was relieved to hear this. Everyone went on playing happily again.
Finally found it, hoping to adopt it.
Once upon a time, there lived a hardworking family by a clear river. There is a naughty child at home. He wears a braid and a red Chinese corset. He is so cute.
On this day, mom and dad went to work in the fields, and good friends visited relatives. The children are bored. Suddenly, he remembered there was a lotus pond at the head of the village. As soon as he remembered the crispness and sweetness of lotus, he wanted to steal it. By the way, he can pick a lotus leaf and wear it on his head to keep out the hot sun, and he can also pinch a Bai Lianhua for his mother. Really kill three birds with one stone!
If he wanted to do it, he quietly came to the river and saw an unattended ship. He quickly untied the cable, jumped on the boat, propped up the bamboo pole and headed for the destination.
In a short time, I arrived at Bailianchi.
I saw the lotus leaf green and huge, the lotus is slim and graceful, the lotus is full, the breeze is blowing gently, and the lotus is dancing, which is beautiful! Unable to forget the business, he quickly picked a lotus leaf, covered it on his head, disguised it, and picked another lotus flower in the cabin.
Suddenly "plop", scared him to lie prone in the cabin. He didn't even dare to catch his breath in the atmosphere. After a long time, there was no movement before he raised his head. Oh, it turned out that a frog jumped into the water from the lotus leaf. What a false alarm! He thought: it is not easy to stay here for a long time, it is better to run away. So he quickly rowed the boat to the shore. Just landing, I heard "Cough! Cough! " When the voice came, he ran home in a panic, and even the lotus leaves, lotus flowers and lotus flowers he just stole didn't have time to take them, all of which were left in the hut! Lying in bed, he thought he had stolen skillfully, but he didn't know that duckweed had opened a wide waterway for him!
The man who coughs intentionally is Bai Juyi, a great poet. Looking at the escaped child, he smiled and casually recited the poem "On the Pool": "Little baby punted and stole back the white lotus. The hidden traces are incomprehensible, and the duckweeds bloom together. "
5. Appreciation of the Ancient Poem Pond after Rain What are the characteristics of the scenery described in the poem? 1. The water surface is like a gently polished mirror, reflecting the eaves and sill posts beside the pond to show the calm of the pond water surface after the rain. This poem depicts the scene of the pond after the rain. Poetry is both static and dynamic, with static as the background, and the combination of static and dynamic forms a pond spring scene after rain. Write about the quiet beauty of the pond after the rain. Write the beautiful and charming static state of the lotus pond after the rain with words such as "water level", "mirror" and "jacaranda". Write the dynamic beauty of the pond after the rain in the last two sentences. It is about the sudden emergence of a new army, the "crying Yang dance" and the "ten thousand points" sound made by the raindrops on the weeping Yang leaves blowing on the lotus leaves.