Dad likes literature, such as novels and poems.
2. The subject of the sentence is wrong. The subject is that I listened to the teacher's criticism, not my face.
I blushed after listening to the teacher's criticism.
3. Again, the topic is wrong. The title should be this year, and it should be changed to:
This year is the best year for apple harvest.
4. Logical error. Super Variety 186 How can I meet you again? This is the only problem! Replace with:
Today is issue 186 of {Super Variety}, and {Super Variety} meets you again.
5. If it is not appropriate, the shell can only shoot down the plane and sink into the water! Replace with:
Shells shot down the plane like heavy bombs.