Original text?
My father's friend gave us two pots of lotus flowers, one red and the other white, which were put in the yard. ?
For eight years, I haven't seen lotus flowers in the yard-but there are many in my hometown garden; There are not only two pedicures, but also three pedicures and four pedicures, all of which are red-violet. ?
One moonlit night nine years ago, my grandfather and I were enjoying the cool in the yard. Grandpa smiled and said to me, "When our garden first opened in Santillian, you three sisters just joined our big family. Everyone is happy and said that it should be Huarui. " ?
I feel a little bored when I hear the complicated rain in the middle of the night and get up early on a cloudy day. When I looked out of the window, the white lotus had withered, floating in the water like a white boat. There is only a small lotus leaf and a few pale yellow flower whiskers left on the stem. That red lotus, which was still in full bloom last night, stood gracefully among the green leaves this morning. ?
Still uncomfortable-wandering for a while, thunder outside the window, followed by heavy rain, the rain is getting bigger and bigger. That red-violet flower was beaten out of the water by dense raindrops. Under the empty sky, I dare not go down the stairs or think about it. ?
Calling my mother in the room, I quickly went over and sat next to my mother-suddenly I saw a big lotus leaf next to Honglian, slowly leaning over and covering it ... my restless mood disappeared! ?
The rain has not stopped, and the red-violet has not shaken. The rain kept beating, only on the brave and kind lotus leaf, some water droplets with poor circulation gathered. ?
My heart was deeply touched-?
Mom! You are a lotus leaf, I am a red lotus, and the rain in my heart is coming. Except you, who is my hiding under the uncovered sky? ?
Appreciate one?
The lotus flowers sent by my father's friends brought out the red lotus I saw in my yard nine years ago and introduced it into nature. ?
I haven't seen the lotus for eight years, but I still remember the lotus I saw nine years ago, which shows that the lotus leaves a deep impression on me. ?
The language is simple and full of life. ?
Write a look at Honglian?
Mood: boring; ?
Environment: complex rainy days; ?
Red-violet: There are many flowers, graceful and colorful. "All scenery words are sentimental words", and writing about the fading of white flowers is only a portrayal of one's mood; Han Han, write red-violet from Han Han to full bloom. Observe carefully. Master Honglian made her debut. ?
Second, write red-violet-
Emotion: discomfort, wandering; ?
Environment: Thunder makes it rain harder and harder; ?
Red-violet: Tilt left and right, helpless. ?
Third, write about red-violet-
Close at hand-when I turned around, I suddenly saw a big lotus leaf next to Honglian and slowly leaned over ... my restless mood disappeared! ?
The rain did not subside, but red-violet did not waver. Raindrops kept beating, only on the brave and kind lotus leaf, some weak water droplets gathered. ?
My heart was deeply touched-?
Mom! You are a lotus leaf, I am a red lotus, and the rain in my heart is coming. Except you, who is the shade under my unobstructed sky? ?
Environment: the rain is falling wantonly; ?
Emotion: restless emotions are moved; ?
Environment: under the cover of big lotus leaves; ?
Honglian: Never waver. ?
Lotus leaves protect the lotus, which naturally associates with the mother's love for her daughter, and the association is rich, which sublimates the theme at the end of the article.
Mother is the leaf beside the flower; Mother is a sailboat on the sea; Mother is the essence of the soul. Mother's love is the eternal theme, "the thread in the hand of a loving mother makes clothes for her wayward son." She sewed very carefully and mended it thoroughly, for fear of delaying the time for him to go home. "Meng Jiao's Ode to a Wanderer can be said to be the eternal swan song of the ancients praising maternal love. ?
How to write about maternal love is innovative? Should I write warm and cold greetings or care for the sick? This beautiful essay gives us the answer: the article looks at the red lotus in the rain-the pavilion in the early rain, and the left and right tilt in the heavy rain, which is an unshakable protection for the lotus leaf mother; This vivid scene reminds the author of his mother's care for himself, thus achieving the theme of eulogizing mother's love, which is natural and appropriate! ?
Indeed, maternal love is pure, and it will always come quietly when you encounter wind and rain, giving you comfort and strength; Motherly love is selfless, and she will always protect you and accompany you all your life. Through careful observation of lotus, the author draws a feeling of life, which is the best blueprint for us to learn to write.
Appreciation 2?
The author saw the red lotus hanging under the lotus leaf in the rain and thought of the affection between mother and child, so he used the lotus leaf to praise maternal love. Red-violet, in the rain, the author found that the lotus leaf covered the red-violet and touched himself, so he had association, remembered the mother and the scene that the mother loved the child, so he took this opportunity to express his feelings for the mother to protect the child's growth. Writing lotus flowers like this compares me to a red lotus, and my mother is a lotus leaf with vivid image. Yes, even the lotus leaf will consciously protect the lotus, not to mention the mother loves her children. "After the prose, a few simple strokes clarified the theme and deepened the center." "Rain in my heart" refers to the ups and downs on the road of life, and only my mother is the one who protects herself from the ups and downs on the road of life.
Mother's Lotus Leaf is a prose poem praising maternal love. The teaching material is arranged to study after Tagore's Golden Flower, in order to let students further master the reading and writing methods of prose poems that use things as metaphors.
The full text can be divided into three parts:
The first part (1-3): My father's friend gave us two pots of lotus flowers, which reminded me of the past.
The second part (paragraphs 4-7) describes the moving scene of lotus leaves protecting red-violet in the rain.
The third part (paragraphs 8-9): Point out the main idea and express the author's heartfelt thanks and love for his mother.
The full text adopts the writing methods of "expressing emotion by borrowing scenery" and "expressing ambition by supporting things" to express deep affection for mother. At first, the author drew a picture of Yu He, in which the rain hits the red lotus and the lotus leaves protect the lotus. With affectionate brushwork, the author reminds her of her daughter's attachment to her mother and her mother's care for her daughter. The author expresses emotion with scenery, expresses ambition with things, and eulogizes great maternal love with lotus, which is natural, appropriate, novel and unique.
"Expressing one's will by supporting things" is a common method in lyric prose, that is, pinning the author's feelings on something and letting it express itself. Everything in nature can be sentimental, but the sentimental thing should be appropriate, and its function or symbolic expression carries people's feelings, otherwise it will not infect readers.
Red lotus is the focus of the whole paper. The author first described the flowers as plain and unremarkable, and then put them in people's background. Flowers are auspicious, and the opening of Sanlian shows auspicious signs, which closely links flowers with people and lays the foundation for the following description of flowers as a metaphor for people.
"The raindrops in my heart are coming. Except you, who is the shade under my unobstructed sky? "
This sentence shows that raindrops in nature are visible and tangible; And "raindrops in my heart" refers to the ups and downs of life, ups and downs, hardships and bumps! Revealing the theme and describing the ups and downs of life with things has never stopped, but when we are most tired and miserable, my mother always greets us with the warmest attitude. Guide you in the maze and protect you all the way.
In the text, the author's mood changes from "boring" to "uncomfortable" and from "uncomfortable" to "uneasy", which reveals the author's feelings about the fate of flowers and paves the way for the touching feelings below.
The author described the scene of two lotus flowers after the night rain with full and affectionate brushstrokes. White lotus withered under the destruction of complex raindrops, and white petals floated on the water. Small lotus flowers and pale yellow flowers are left alone on the stems, swaying in the wind, looking so sad and cold. Here, the author's regret is obviously manifested in the contrast between red lotus and white lotus. The graceful red lotus is an elegant, elegant and magnificent image, which can be said to be a symbol of beauty. In the thunderstorm, under the empty sky, I was hit by dense raindrops.
Undoubtedly, it is also a storm in the dark and turbulent times, destroying delicate flowers and attacking beautiful and pure hearts. In the storm, a big lotus leaf fell down and was covered with red lotus flowers. Although the rain didn't subside, the red-violet standing around was very stable, and the violent raindrops could only gather some weak water drops on the lotus leaf. The "tilt" and "cover" here reveal a noble and moving beauty. Lotus leaf bravely resisted the wind and rain of nature, selflessly protected Honglian, entrusted the author's dissatisfaction with the dark society, praised the powerful strength, brave and fearless spirit, and supported new and beautiful things. The theme of the article has naturally been sublimated.