Li Xun is a man with a pure heart. His poems are really like water, seemingly calm, but in fact they are surging inside. He is good at discovering poetry from small things and opening up new ideas. He chose a piece of glass as a metaphor to present his inner needs and requirements by wiping the glass. The writing is forbearing and implicit, and the emotional control is also in place. There is no cry, it is like a grass silently green, asking about the impermanence of the weather, and like a light music, there is pain and happiness in soothing. But in the poem, silent labor is so transparent and lonely, a little slow. In front of the glass cleaner, I personally think this sentence is redundant. Perhaps the poet deliberately left a note in pursuit of a slow rhythm.
Glass Cleaner-Li Xun
Glass cleaners have no secrets.
Transparent labor
Just like sunlight supports the growth of seedlings.
His hand moved on the smooth glass.
Let people think that he is waving to someone.
Through the glass
Pedestrians who can see the street clearly
Wipe the glass
Don't touch.
In his eyes, he is also an experimenter.
All afternoon.
Window Cleaners
No words
I didn't listen.
Silent labor
So transparent
So lonely
In front of the glass cleaner
The clean glass finally made him feel
How messy those pedestrians are.
But it is so untouchable.
Reading Li Xun's The Glass Cleaner reminds me of Jia Dao's lyric poem "Leave a note for an absent episode". Through the relationship between me, the teenager and the hermit, the whole poem writes the environment, characters and plots in 20 words, and vividly shows the author's feelings of missing people and the lofty performance of the hermit in the form of questions and answers. Glass cleaner is similar. Through the relationship between glass, people and people outside the glass, borrowing the metaphor of glass transparency, and through the process of wiping, the author's pursuit of life and exclamation of living environment are reflected. The internal massiness and rhythm of this poem are analyzed as follows:
1. Quiet and profound. Only when a poet is quiet can he write a good poem. Only when a poet calms down and thinks seriously can he understand poetry. Otherwise, writing poetry will be dry and readers will be at sixes and sevens. People who clean glass have no secret and transparent work, just as sunlight supports the growth of seedlings. The idiom "quiet and far-reaching" is more appropriate to describe the secret to transparency and the smell of sunlight to seedlings. Only when the poet is quiet can he find that glass is poetic, transparent, sunny and ideal for stretching.
2. The mirror is picturesque. His hand moves on the smooth glass, which makes people feel that he is waving to someone. The poet comes straight to the point, his heart is like a mirror, and he directly describes what he has investigated substantively. He uses gestures and waves to express his sense of clarity, distance and intimacy, so that careful readers seem to be in the painting. Thirdly, the glass is very thick and has a beautiful impact vision. It's not shocking, but at least it's exciting.
3. The water depth is slow. The emotions of some poems are like waterfalls, and the momentum is amazing. Some poems, like sea water, flow slowly and need careful reading and observation to appreciate the depth of the sea. That kind of soothing tone, that kind of comfortable feeling, can only be realized when you really walk into the sea. Li Xun seems to be pursuing such a realm. He put the process of wiping and the process of perception, without metaphor, only with direct narration. Through the glass, you can directly see the pedestrians on the other side. Wipe, not touch, the power generated by the comparison of the two words makes you jump to another realm quickly. Vision constantly changes colors, not only wiping glass, but also wiping pedestrians. This gives the glass cleaner a deeper connotation and thinking space. This unhurried tone slowly opens the picture and quietly enjoys the beauty and tension caused by the collision between words, which makes us clearly realize the depth of the poet's study of poetry, showing nature and showing superb artistic appeal. At this time, I want to express my respect for the poet's slow writing of good poems with the depth of water.
Text/Qin Zhiliang