Question 1: Su Shi pays attention to refined words, and the word "Qing" makes the scenery in the poem more vivid and touching.
● "Sketch" can also be graded (the poet wrote the Dongpo after the rain, the blue sky, the bright moonlight and the clear and ethereal realm by sketching. ) ● The combination of reality and fiction can also be scored (the poet uses the combination of reality and fiction to falsely write "the pedestrians in the city are exhausted" and actually write "the pedestrians in the savage", which sets off the optimism and adaptability of the poet walking alone on the slope road in the moonlight. Note: "Scenery blending" and "emotion in the scene" do not get extra points (because this is the same as the next Wang Wei poem).
Wang's poems are rich in colors, with vivid descriptions, (1), and the combination of dynamic and static is harmonious (1). Wang Shi described the colors and forms of the scenery. "Containment" and "belt" make the objective scenery subjective and vivid, showing the poet's superb poetic skill of "moving with the scene". ● "Detailed description" can be scored (detailed description of the vibrant and quiet peach, willow and green scene in the countryside in the early morning after the rain)
Question 2: Su Shi expressed the poet's brave, cheerful and optimistic attitude through the night scene after the rain and walking loudly with a stick, and he was quiet and indifferent to fame and fortune (1 minute). (65,438+0) Wang's poems depict a quiet and beautiful rural life, (65,438+0) express the poet's leisurely and quiet state of mind, enjoy the happiness of rural life, and show the poet's pursuit of leisure and quiet life interest. (1) (Emotional analysis of Su and Wang: no need to withhold words. Sue is optimistic and Wang is quiet. )
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